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"Swirls" is under attack but by who? She wakes up in Ponyville with no memories and no clues--just a bunch of scars and bruises. Who could have done it? She wanders around until she runs into Pinkie who graciously lets her stay with her and Twilight bandage her up. Will she figure out her attacker? Will she be able to protect herself if she does?
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What does that mean? Haha >.<
This is really good
I'm excited to see more! 
1756536 SO YA
THOUGHT YA
MIGHT LIKE TA
GO TO THA SHOW
TO FEEL THAT WARM THRILL OF
CONFUSION
1758856
Thank you! :)
1760889
Lmfao! I am very confused and I hope you are too :p That's the point of the story to confuse everyone :o hehehe *maniacally rubs hands together and laughs: :p
Hm... I like it!
Seems mysterious.
1761062 Oh you.
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Thank you very much :)
Oh this is getting very suspenseful... I love it!
....Wow!
That's scary.
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Hehe gratzi :) Too bad I'm making u wait till tomorrow for chapter 3 :p
1761154
Haha isn't it? :)
Wow, this is actually turning out to be a good story so far xD Ponies using arrows? ponies apparently committing MURDER?... I'm awaiting the next chapter
1762661
Haha yea unlike u I make ponies kill things and not zebras :p zebra r nice :p and idk whether or not to b offended that u said this is ACTUALLY turning out to b a good story XP surprised? lol
1762872 Shaddup xD Nooo, I didn't mean it like THAT xD I was just surprised you wrote a story so quickly!
1762896
Haha alrighty :p
1762965
Dat Rainbow Dash tongue
1762970
no wai :o haha those r amazing faces :D
1762979 You're damn right they are! xD
Glorious! My gawd this is truly staggering
I can't wait for the next chapter!
1766857
Haha :) Threw in a plot twist :p
1761079
Oh me :p
........Why would you kill dashie?
1766961
But I had to for the story :c
I'm sowwie :c I love Dashie
1766985
It's all right
It's your story, but I'm just shocked (or mortified) that anyone could kill RD.
I mean, come on, she's Rainbowdash! No one could kill her.
Anyways, keep writing. I'm liking it so far.
1767266
I know :o That fiend! Haha :p And thank you ^.^
I'm absolutely contorted with excitement! This can only get better!
1767436
Mhmm haha :p but I won't give u a 3rd chapter tonight haha I spoiled u enough :p
1767444 Yes yes I understand
I'll continue to wait impatiently 
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Aww I'm sowwie :( When Swirls' attacker appears no more mare 6 will get hurt <3
1770634
It's main(mane) 6
Not mare 6, although they are mares.
Hmm, very intriguing story so far XD I bet, in the end, Caramel finds out that it was in fact her that murdered all of them and she has one of those twisted split personality deals going on, or something XD We'll see
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Lmfao whoopsies :o haha thank you ^.^
1770676
Haha that's amazing!! But no that's not it haha I've written stories like that before though :o just not on here :p
I'm mad, but I love you right now hate and love. These are conflicting I want to know how the story ends all I have to say is keep her away from Fluttershy
1770995
Awwww haha I'll try but idk she's pretty unpredictable :o
xD Damn, AJ got unexpectedly violent in the end, eh?
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Mhmm, that's one strong injection :p
1771298 Apparently so, damn xD
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Haha, oh ponies be cray :p
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Yay ^.^ I'm glad you like :)
Btw...
Ponyly ~
I didn't want to say humanly so I said ponyly :D
Who is the culprit!
Sister?!
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Man, this just gets better and better!
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Gotta wait till next chapter...unless...i decide to further torture you and make you wait an extra chapter :p
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Haha yes! How unforseen :p
That...was...AMAZING!
I could've sworn Rarity was the culprit, but sadly I was wrong XD Great story though! 