Alternate Story Epilogue: A little encouragement
Luna, Discord, Twilight Sparkle, Rarity and Pinkie Pie all rode to Cloudsdale on the backs of Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy. They landed in the center of the city, still giant-sized after Twilight's magic had struck it. Princess Celestia, the size of a hummingbird amongst the giant pegasi, flew over to them as they disembarked.
"Princess!" Twilight said, galloping over.
"Hello Twilight, hello everypony." she greeted them warmly. "What took you all so long?"
"Sister, much of Canterlot is in ruin. Much rebuilding will be required."
"Oh?" Celestia asked. "What happened?"
"Princess Celestia... I..." Twilight began.
"It was my fault Princess." Rainbow Dash spoke up. "I fought Fluttershy in the city. I should've just tried to talk to her... or went to go find you. Or something. I'm sorry. It's my fault."
"No." Rarity spoke up. "If I hadn't let Trixie make me angry, none of this would've happened in the first place. She wouldn't even have gone to Canterlot. I'm to blame."
"No." Luna said. "I let my temper get the better of me too. I only made things worse, trying to chase after her, trying to change her back on my own. I let Canterlot be damaged... even the castle. It's clear I'm not even fit to rule in your abscence."
"It was my fault." Fluttershy said. "I should've just stayed by my friends' side. I should've-"
"Stop it, just stop it!" Twilight yelled out. "It was all our faults. We all could've done better, there's something we all could've done to fix this sooner but we didn't. But we never stopped trying. All of us, we all tried to solve this problem... for me. Even you Fluttershy. You tried to go to Princess Celestia. That's why you were on your way to Canterlot in the first place. You didn't run away from a confrontation. You were just trying to get help. Like we all should've done from the beginning."
Princess Celestia smiled again. "Sometimes we all want to solve problems our own way Twilight, especially big ones. But sometimes you need a little help from your friends, even if it's just a little encouragement."
Twilight practically had tears in her eyes. Celestia always knew just what to say. "Thank you Princess." Twilight whispered.
"Now, it's time for us to set everything back to normal... or normal size at least." Celestia said to her student. Twilight nodded.
All across Cloudsdale, the megasi assembled. Derpy was last, her bag was still full of mail. It hadn't taken her long to realize that the packages were a little large today. They gathered in the center of Cloudsdale, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy in the center of the massive megasi herd.
Twilight nervously went over the spell one last time in her head. Her friends and both princess were behind her, there for her.
"You can do it Twilight." they encouraged her. The purple unicorn's horn glowed with the mysterious power of the size-changing spell.
"All right everypony. Say cheese!"
A flash of purple light enveloped Coudsdale and covered the sky. In a blink, the spell had finished. Cloudsdale was returned to its normal size and the pegasi along with it. They stretched their wings and flew about enthusastically, relieved that the clouds around them were back to their regular size again. Twilight and the rest of the group galloped over to hug Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash, a hug that was just the right size.
"A lot happened Princess. I'll be sure to write you a letter about it later." Twilight said.
"Why write a letter?" Discord said, wearing a pair of sunglasses as he walked amongst the crowds. "You write enough letters Twilight. I caught the whole thing on film! Let's watch the movie!"
3 and a half hours of bad puns, shakey camera angles and King Sombra not getting screen time later...
"That was the worst film I think I've ever seen." Rarity said, exiting the theater in Cloudsdale.
"Oh come on." Discord moaned. "It wasn't that bad. Look what I had to work with. Magic ponies. Who could write an interesting story about this?"
"I'll get started on that letter right away Princess." Twilight said to Celestia as they strode by with Luna. Celestia nodded but didn't even turn to look at Discord, neither did Luna.
"Yeah, the camera was so shakey I couldn't see most of the action." Rainbow Dash remarked, flying past.
"How can you think that WHEN YOU WERE IN IT?!" Discord facepalmed.
"Eh, too much fourth-wall humor in it for me." Pinkie said as she bounced by.
"How can you say that? No, seriously how can YOU say that?" Discord asked in disbelief. Shocked, apalled, that's how he felt. Everypony's a critic. Finally, one pony was left. She quietly walked up beside him.
"I don't know Discord. I kind of liked it." Fluttershy said.
Discord looked over to her, surprised. "You... you did?"
"Mm-hm. And I'm sure your next film will be even better!" Fluttershy said, giving him a little encouragement. "Here's your glove."
"Oh, thanks." He'd almost forgotten about it. He popped it back on his paw. It fit... like a glove. He thought about something and then snapped his fingers.
"Here." he said and presented her with a camera. She looked at it, unsure.
"You want me to keep this for you?"
"No, just hold onto it for me. I'll be back for it soon!" Discord gave Fluttershy a big kiss that froze her face and then he disappeared into the night sky. Fluttershy rubbed a hoof on her cheek and smiled softly, thinking to herself. She then trotted down the streets of Cloudsdale for the second time that day. She decided that while she was there, she'd see if the florist was still open and maybe buy some new seeds.
Meanwhile, back in Canterlot...
It took Barro and Michael Hay hours to get back to where the stagecoach carrying Michael's equipment was. The city was a mess, the roads in the southern half of town were blocked by debris. When they finally got back to the spot where the stage was, the ponies pulling it had all removed their harnesses and were over by the giant-sized notebook, still lying in the grass.
"Looks like your story did find an audience Barro." Michael commented at the ponies reading.
Barro nodded. "I guess so."
"How are we going to get that book back to normal size?" Michael asked.
"Maybe I'll keep it this size. Who knows? Might be useful as a plot device."
Michael Hay smiled. "Now that's an interesting idea."
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Clop fics can be tough. Good luck. If you need a good start try reading Proof Reaing Clopfics Sucks. It will give you some guidlines to go by. Anyways, I enjoyed this somewhat odd story and I look forward to seeing what you come out with next.
2457646I'm happy one of us did. And does.
2458573HEYEAHEYEAHYEAH
Hah. I literally see like... Little-to-none size changing fics out there that don't lead to clop. Don't even get me started on Neohoss's pastebin...*shudders in disgust at the thought*... I hope that clopfic is a joke...no seriously please be a joke...
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You're going to see that it's a joke. A very, very long joke.
Clop fic. Yeah. Gooooood luck with that.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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I forget, you don't read the comments. I don't write clop, not now at least. It's a subject I'd just prefer NOT to delve into, no offense to those who are more well-versed in it than I, to put it bluntly. Still, I think having a little fun by bringing it up is perfectly fine. You'll see what I mean.
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I await that with glee... Haha.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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*wipes nonexistent sweat off brow*
Phew... Back to frustrating over the Skyrim mod SkyVoice and it's installation.
2464959By the way the sequel's up already and you'll see what I mean. Read the author's notes of chapter 2. I gotta get going, I have a train to catch.
2504597 Fixing thank you.
2841073 Fixing, thank you. This was written before the spell check thing was implemented, I guessed based on pronunciations I'd heard. Dexter's Lab comes to mind. Thanks again!
I'm just noticing this story has a cover art .... sweet
It gives a better idea of how tall she was
just wondering for your estimate,how tall in "feet" did you see her as for this story?
Looking at the picture I wanna assume around 60-70?
3310719 Somewhere around there I think. I imagined her tall enough to see over the roofs of most buildings in Ponyville but not big enough that they would break if she tried to climb on them. So she'd be able to see over the buildings and even use them as stepping stones if necessary without them taking that much structural damage.
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Ah,ok
3312385 Srsly Doozey, I recommend my Dan Vs. story. It's my best work yet and I'd love for your feedback on it.
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I never really got into Dan Vs. but ....
I always like reading new things
Even though I don't know when I will get to that since I'm reading a very lengthy and addictive story right now called - The Mystery of a New World
The 3rd fanfic I've read that's over 300,000 words
I'm already on Chapter 22
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1975/the-mystery-of-a-new-world
3512653 Daring, I'll make a believer out of you!
Seriously, it's my best story yet. I noticed two of my stories fell out of your top favorites... really heartbreaking.
But I don't blame you, oh no, tis the way of things. But please, give me the opportunity to re-earn your favor.
Dan Vs. is my pride and joy. The show itself and the Tumblr are both dead at the moment... really sad. But my story has its own original song lyrics! One day, I hope to see it animated! First comic or art, then eventually animation.
I have a lot of hope for this story and I would love for you to give it a read
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Don't worry they still are my favorites
... I blame Fimfiction for that since I was pretty sure they allow you 5 spots on your profile to add your favorites,but apparently it's only letting me add 3.
And I will give your story a chance when I can
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I feel as if this is what's going through Fluttershy's mind:
And possibly this as well, as she is 'Sick of' all the attention.
3562353 Not bad choices, I agree I could definitely hear them during those scenes.
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3569071 If you like songs, check out my Dan Vs. story. Has songs I wrote for each episode. The lyrics, anyway.
3569159 Hmm. Interesting. I might.
I'm still going try to continue what I'm doing here, though. I'm thoroughly enjoying myself.
(Unless of course you REALLY want me to stop. I'm not a jerk, so if it's annoying you, I'll stop.)
3569232 Feel free to do what you're doing on all my stories. Just don't go overboard.
3570313 Alrighty! Just, please let me know if I do.
But at this point, I'm laughing too hard to think of lyrics for a few chapters.
So, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Didn't exactly use lyrics for all the chapters, but I'm extremely happy with the ones I did (especially 'Sick of It' in ch 6-ish I think).
I didn't really enjoy the alternate story as much. There was nothing wrong with it in my eyes persay, but I kinda liked the way the original played out more, clichéd as it was.
All in all, this story had me quite literally rolling on the floor laughing. Definitely going on my favorites, which is an incredible feat since my only other favorited story is the beautiful masterpiece that is 'My Little Dashie'.
Bravo.
3571974 Well, I do appreciate your kind words but I must tell you the truth. This isn't my best work, far from it. This is, in all actuality, the least of my stories. If I've piqued your interest, please, sample my other wares and know that only more are coming.
3572030 Hmm. Good to know.
(So, funny story- completely unrelated to your comment, but I'ma tell you about it anyway-. Whenever I listen to 'Sick of It'- it's pretty much my favorite song, so I listen to it a lot- I think of the little animals who saved Fluttershy in the original story. Except the ones who save her look like the band who sings the song. So, they sing the first verse and chorus while Fluttershy sings the second verse and bridge, regaining her 'Harmony' self while screaming, 'I'M. SICK. OF. IT!!!' Then, they go singing the last chorus together, dancing and raising their arm appendages and such. And I wish I could animate it because the idea is flipping hilarious and now I'ma stop rambling and read Fluttersized 2 & 3 because it's 1:00 AM and I'm too lazy to fall asleep and if you actually read this far I shall give you a cookie because reasons.)
3698517 I don't remember the word god ever being used in the show.
5550776 Ahem... *clears throat*