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Phoenix Quill
I'm sorry that I am terribly late with my updates.
Phoenix Quill
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Interesting.....
And Sombra being Celestia's former student? That would explain the dark magic that they were both able to use xP
And just two corrections,
Thou would actually be fitting there..
And,
Again, in place of thee place thou dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy_umad.png
Other than that,
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Thank you, correcting now!
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Made some changes to better suit Equestria Daily standards, wish me luck.
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Best of luck on that pursuit, mate.
EqD can be a fickle beast, but if you keep up the work, I'm sure you'll show them that you deserve it! ^_^
1688305 Luck be with thee dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png
Well that was a quick update xD
Also, correction time xP
"......if thou art in need of us."
Overlooked 'journey' dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
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Tell me you don't charge for editing, cause I get that sinking feeling that I'm gonna need one.
EQD failed me twice for punctuation. No strikes yet, but...
And Correcting now, Thank you
1693851 Charge for help!? That goes against every fiber of my being! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl2.png xD
And you're welcome dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png
One dislike! cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/24616150.jpg
I can't really see to many mistakes just from general reading, the only thing I did see worth noting is NNM should have said 'bucking' pony language and all.
So far I'd say this story is a 4/5 keep up the good work!
You just keep on rollin' 'em out huh? Another excellent chapter, I can't see any huge errors, well in that case.
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Mother of Luna, you're fast! xD
Anyway.....
"You're not here" I would think, seeing as how the apparition is right next to her xP
...Just one mistake? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy_umad.png
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You know, this is the fastest I have ever worked on a story?
No seriously. I usually take MONTHS to grind out a chapter, I guess that this one just resonates with me better.
Also, DOCTOR! Le gasp! I earned a Doctor!
This is my greatest achievement in comments on my stories, and I shall treasure it forever
I am redicoulously easy to make smile,
Sorry if I spammed your inbox's with update messages, my mouse and PC is... Crap and it kept publishing then unpublishing.
Anyhow, I also wanted to let you know that I will be leaving soon, not by choice. But I use my cell phone as a wifi hotspot to get online, and this month I just can't pay the bill. Updates will slow down... a lot. However, if I get my way I might get a used laptop and just highjack a mcdonalds wifi from them.
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1707195 That's good xD
You work fast, and there doesn't seem to be any loss of quality =P
And,
1. Who can't treasure The Doctor? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png
2. Ridiculously easy to make you smile? Good, I like it when people are happy xD
3. Good luck with the internet dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
EDIT:
aye
Sorry for the delay,
After a couple of hectic days I had a bit of trouble getting into the write frame of mind to do this. (get it? Cause write and right... Ah I am so funny.)
Anyhow, For those interested, I need an editor to help me!
EQD keeps denying me for my punctuation and they say my dialog is... weird. So I need an editor, anyone that wishes to do so let me know in any way that you can!
Also, as I write this story I will be in need of OC ponies for different scenes back on Equestria, if you have one, or wish to make a cameo, let me know in the comments, or PM me!
Thank you,
P.Q.
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I think this was already used on a previous chapter by someone else, but
SCREW THE RULES
Tragic Nightmare Moon is best pony
You just keep the update train rollin' don't you?
Tough Faust love huh, I said it once and I'll say it again Nightmare Moon is best Tragic pony.
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Ahem
really good chapter as usual, but the corrections xP
art thou xP
Either just 'lowered the moon' or 'brought the moon down' should do, I think even 'lit her horn and lowered the moon far below the horizon to make way for her sun to rise over in the east' but that's just a stupid suggestion
Also, "tale tell" - tell-tale is mostly used but that's not really a big thing.
"knelled" -
(of a bell) Ring solemnly, esp. for a death or funeral.
Proclaim (something) by or as if by a knell.
I suppose you were going for kneeled
Once again, awesome chapter dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
I'm really liking this story, i'll be honest at first I thought I might not like it but now, that past me couldn't be more wrong xD
Anyway, obligatory corrections xD
their
entire
"knelled" again, kneeled =P
God, you must find me so annoying xD
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Me? Find you annoying?
Hex no! I love it when someone corrects me! Then I can fix it instead of wondering Why the fuck is this getting down voted?
(I am a high school drop out, but I got my g e d later on) Also, Ye Olde English does not bode well with my grey matter.
I honestly prefer people to just out and tell me what I do wrong instead of letting me sit thinking I did good,
I would only be upset if you were to put a comment saying "Fix your spelling" and leaving it at that... thats how I usually get told theres something wrong and I spend hours looking for the fuck up.
Anyhow, I got a new PC from a friend... well new to me, and its missing a few drivers and other minor issues, after I fix this I'll be getting to those issues and a new chapter.
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Yay on the new PC xD
You'll get the hang of Ye Olde English eventually xD
Oh and one more thing,
"Fix your spelling"
Nicely done,Phoenix.
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To, oriwori.
Don't get too comfortable here on FIMFIC. Reporting you for using posts as an advertisement space.
i think there are several areas where you don't need commas or have strange wording such as
"I just, am worried for you" sounds confusing. It might make more sense as "I am just worried for you"
good chapter though
Well hay :D
1. Good chapter as always
2. Fyre's suggestion should be taken into consideration seeing as how he has a point xD
3.
You're*
4. you should probably separate the thoughts and the dialogue a bit, putting them both continuously in " is confusing.
Example:
'Surely it must be important if she has come this late',"Yes? What is it?"
Also, I put if she has come since the rest of it is in the present tense
Would be a bit better
So, yeah.
Once again,
Thoughts: 'Wow this is a really interesting story, glad I followed it'
Dialogue: "This is one awesome story"
(Joke) Alt. Title: Only Shadows Of The Past...Can Write Tragedark Fics
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Pretty funny there, you a funny guy.
Have a picture of something that will never happen in this story.
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Y'know, I bet you anything that the only reason she came back from the moon was because she lost her last quarter for that thing... And that's also the reason why she's missing between S1E2 and S2E4: she found ANOTHER QUARTER!
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Maybe... but now you are distracting from my head canon!
Another awesome chapter....but I want to leave here on a happy note
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What's funny about that pic?
I have a mustache like that IRL just... not as big.
1811994 Except now I'm imagining this on NMM throughout the whole chapter......plus I couldn't find the pic I had in mind.
approached*
their*
stars'
You missed that little ' =P
Well,
1. You're getting better, those mistakes were probably just overlooked
2. As i've said on every chapter, I'm liking this
3. .....I got nothing xD
So have Luna.
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Interesting looking story. Will have to give it a look through, though at them moment all I can really say is Dat Cover Pic!
Good chapter.
First things first, though:
Remove that never before truly and you're good :3
Change there to their
When I saw this in my updates box I'm pretty sure I heard it say this:
Also love the imaging of Ye old Nightmare Night, most ghost stories have some spec of truth to them, but people forget over time.
That was good, but:
poured
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YES I AM!
but you take me too serious to have Vegeta say that for me, it's much more like this...
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Fixed!
2193880 Awesome
If this is how Nightmare Moon is after 100 years, how will she last 1000?
P.S (Yes Celestia, you are petty.)
Great way to start!
Daww... Nightmare. You're so adorable playing with figurines!
Poor Nightmare...