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Great chapter, my friend! enjoying your story and can't wait for the next chapter!
Love and Tolerance,
RecklessRush
Wonderful ending to this part!
nice i like it
Good Chapter!
HAVE TWI AND LUNA HAVE BABY WHAT A TWIST plus a baby form them will be ...........? not sure what a baby from them will be (P.S thay can maybe have a baby by magic(or use magic to give one of them a penis) but wicth one will carry it will it be twi or will it luna but find out on the next episoed of dra.......oops wrong show/fanfic.)
PREPARE THE COLISEUM!
Dat cliffhanger
The story that got me into pony fics is still one of my absolute favorites!
More waiting tho, I might have problems with that...
Yay!
This story is just amazing. I want more! But keep up the good work
For a second there, I thought Twilight was gonna get pregnant.
Ah, I love the little interactions between Twilight and Luna. Pure adorable.
Archmage has now become the longest story (in terms of wordcount) I've read on this site. So, congrats I guess. And I wouldn't be disappointed if it kept on going until it was twice the length it is now.
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Nope, Luna!
So many feels.
I just can't take it, man!
IT'S TOO MUCH MAN!
*Hnnnnnngggggg*
Hmm, from the title of the chapter, I thought it would be about Discord. :D
Another wonderful chapter of an amazing story.
The quality of each chapter more than makes up for the wait
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It's just like that one episode of Doctor Wh--*is shot*
2564830 My first thought was she was gonna create her own library and seal
herselfher echo in it like Bolt did ^.^Probably "gave" instead of "have."
Good chapter. I have one small problem with their return. If Rarity and Twilight spent a week in the library to recover, shouldn't they be in better shape and shouldn't Rarity not be limping? I don't recall her being so grievously wounded that she couldn't walk properly. I'm pretty sure that she got cut by a monster and fainted from blood loss.
I also feel like you're avoiding the whole Rarity Cross Stitch relationship. You should probably give some closure on their little dispute, whether it be good or bad. Rarity's relationship might seem insignificant, but you shouldn't leave such blatant loose ends.
Nice resolution for this arc. Can't wait to see what other troubles are ahead.
I wonder, will Twi becoming a Princess come into play in this story... Hmm...
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Thanks for pointing out the gave/have thing.
And I have plans for Rarity and Cross Stitch. Relax.
Commence read.
That's a cute necklace idea. Reminds me of the Zelda/hearts T-shirts.
Made it back alive, don't you worry,
But that prophet aside I think you taught me well.
To raise the sun, and set the sun, and guide the sun
To raise the moon, and set the moon, and guide the moon
And in your winsome night sky what's entailing
Looking up to your bright but distant stars.
I shared their fate, I shared their fate, I shared their fate;
Aid your escape, aid your escape, aid your escape.
Howling out I have ennui (Pronounced On-We)
And cursed with my mortality
But I'm in love and you're an immortal
Il.
[Luna]This crown it's so heavy with this burden
Never forgetting lives of the ones that were left behind.
Along the way, along the way, along the way
Still feel the pain, still feel the pain, still feel the pain.
[Duet]Howling out I have ennui
And cursed with immortality
And I'm in love but your fate is mortal
And in the night that's painted black,
Memories will come flooding back
But I'm in love and you're Twilight Sparkle.
And as my life comes to an end
My love for you will still stand
'Cause you're bequeathed my diamond cutie mark.
Cutie Mark. [8x]
[Luna]Howling out I have ennui
And cursed with immortality
And I'm in love but your fate is mortal
And in the night that's painted black,
Memories will come flooding back
But I'm in love and you're Twilight Sparkle.
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WOW dude that was moving
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Ditto. But looking back, the necklace makes perfect sense. Luna giving her one to comfort her on her trip, and with how much Twilight touched it in this chapter. . . The answer was under our noses the entire chapter.
Clever author.
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'plot twist'
I'm sorry, how does two ponies in love having a child count as a plot twist? To me that screams 'natural progression of events'
not like we don't already have a googol of fics in which two females have a baby.
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enope
2573315 No no. Equestira doesn't die in those fanfics if they leave, THEY do.
Fantastic ending to the arc Loyal. I await with baited breath how you plan to top something this amazing. It will be fraught with difficulty (and minor grammatical errors ) but if any author can do it, you can.
2568650 Wow that was just.... breathtaking. Cheesy-sounding? Maybe, but anything else wouldn't do proper justice.
.....ok, I have now listened to that song version about 10 times now... you should find a brony artist man. That has much potential.
great ending to this arc! so now there is only one (possibly two) arc left?
Ah, that was a wonderful wrap-up to a great part of the story. Now though... now what is going to be in store for us? It's like starting a brand new story once again. Onward to the next chapter!
~SolidFire
I swear, each time Fate is mentioned in this fic I wish it was a pony so Applejack could buck him in the nads for being such an insufferable, spoiled and petulant dick
So, in essence, either Twilight liberates the library or dies trying, and if anypony ever succeeds in the future, Fate will kill everypony for their impudence. Who the fuck does he think he is? How dare he!?
On a different note, I feel Twilight's friends are poorly handled in this fic, in the sense that they're barely even there. I understand that Twilight herself is the main focus of the story, but her relationship with the rest of the Mane 6 is a very important part of her character. She ain't the Element of Magic just for her arcane prowess. But they almost never meet, they never write, they didn't see them off when they left for the Library or were there to welcome them back, Pinkie isn't throwing them a "Glad you weren't killed horribly" party... It's been going throughout the entire fic, but this last arc put the issue, at least for me, into the forefront with Rarity's impact on the story.
She had none.
She could've stayed safely at home and almost nothing would've changed in the slightest. She didn't provide crucial moral and emotional support for Twilight (it was the other way around, actually), she didn't impact the story in any relevant way, neither as a help nor as a hindrance, and didn't provide any support or insight into the final challenges. Even when she was taken by the storm Twilight was forced to abandon and forget her, so she didn't even get to play the "damsel in distress" role! She embarked on the journey to make it up to Twilight, but I fail to see how she did anything of the sort. Essentially, she was a complete non-factor, and I find that to be a shame when Friendship is supposed to be Magic
AH! I love this STORY!!! Love love LOVE it! I had to take a break for a few days before Twilight and Rarity began there journey just so I could fully process what all had happened thus far. I realize on of the tings I love most about this fic is how much happens, how there's plenty going on, mini arcs, characters, side stories and all the while building up to whatever Twilight's destiny is!
The adventure to the library was fantastic with a solid conclusion. Twilight and Luna's relationship continues to be a major fav part to all this and seeing Rarity be able to come to terms with her past mistakes and hopefully now be able to move on was nice. I have no idea what Celestia and Luna know, but I understand why they can't tell Twilight and more importantly I feel that Twilight understands that as well.
I'm both thrilled and sad that I only have ten more chapters to go. It's been a great read and I'm off to see what is in store next!
4133529 She did play one role, actually.
Free trip to the Library, thanks to the fact that Guilty Gilda had stolen her marefriend.
Oh. My. Fucking. God... This chapter is so heartfelt it brought me misty-eyed. This is insane, no other book has ever gotten me this engaged. The fucking necklaces were so clever and so heartfelt. I can feel the love, I cen tell it's completely genuine and it's crazy how the author can explain in such a way that it all makes sense to me. This has never happened to me before, Everything was right, I was like yes yes yes throughout the entire chapter. Everything so perfectly written. And for the author to end like "It's not over, there are worse things to come..."
- Mind officially blown, please bury me with this story in my hands.
Anyways, I really do feel like this is at least 2nd best chapter, Twi's love for luna just seems so high that you couldn't possibly add more. I feel like some things were forgotten though. Rarity just feels left in the dust, only to be picked up when useful or helpful. The engagement felt like it was forgotten by Twilight, because it hasn't been brought up for a while now. The magic of friendship seems to be getting the cold shoulder based off of all the other magics, but I can forgive since you can argue that before this story was even set into place on the mlp timeline, Twilight was doing nothing BUT learning thrle magic of friendship. I think the only real problem the author has is that sometimes he rushes particular matters too fast for some reader's likings, which is forgivable in my book. Since nobody is perfect, this book is absolutly free to read, and the error is so complex that you have to be one of the top writers in the country to actually pull this off successfully. I'm for the most part, nitpicking on small things that most people wouldn't notice, but damnit if I wont say it now, someday somebody will, so I might as well say it.
I am realy hoping for a bonus chapter or something about cadence meeting bolt again... Please let this be a thing
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Well twilight is a lot more busy than before. She has to master a lot of magic and she has deal with every idiot who ends trying upset the way things are supposed to be for power sake. Her friends probably don't wish to interrupt her in her in her new life but there was one time they should have. Right after the funeral they should have been there for her. It might cut down on that close call that she created in her pain.