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I wonder what the last line is. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
Talk about cliffhangers...
Liked all this talk about the elements. Kinda reminded me of the Avatar.
What is that last line?! Nice chapter.
2592443 It's probably "Twilight Sparkle Dies".
The story's coming to an end.
I'm not sure if I should be relieved or saddened. Saddened to see a story as amazing as this ever having and end, or relieved that
there's an actual end to it. Then again, the end could be an open one. Which in turn would lead to spin-offs and such.
I look forward to the next chapter, as always.
Yours truly,
Sugarcube
Insert obligatory 'dun dun duuuuun'.
So much suspense, waiting to find that line out is going to be its own little hell.
*sniff* so beautiful
i hate cliffhangers
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You're reading the wrong fucking story, man...
*smh*
Wrong story.
2592787 but i still love you
That last line must be one humdinger of a prophecy for the princesses to react like that. If the last line is meant to be what the book says then things are going to get really interesting really quick. If the last line is how the princesses reacted to the final bit of prophecy then it will be a real shocker once the time comes for it to be fulfilled.
Heh. I make my own prophecy that will be right no matter the outcome.
twilight's a waterbender!
Totally spent half this chapter thinking, "Everything changed when the fire nation attacked."
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Or the opposite.
SUPER AWESOME NINJA ELEMENT WATER MAGIC MOVE! HYAH!
i love this story. will be very sad when its over.
also adding parts of it to my head cannon if you don't mind.
Oh. It has to be suspense. Lemme guess, you're going to finish the story with that line.
C-C-COMBO
I'm thinking for the finale I'll write a huge montage, or a ballad, or an original creation, but as it is I had to resist just doing more than two.
Do you ever feel like you need to brag
Guiding fire and wind, cause the earth to bend?
Do you ever feel, feel so overwhelmed
now you've come so far, time for meditation...
Dreams that make you feel already buried deep?
Six feet underground, but also seem to be drowning!
Did you know that there's still a change for you
'Cause there's a spark in you?
You've just got an insight to life and what's inside
Because you're bright feel the forces unite
'Cause Twily, you're a unicorn
Maybe, the best ever born
Make 'em go, whoah, oh, oh
As they're humbled by the sight-
Twily, you're a unicorn
Come on, feel how water works
Make 'em go, whoah, oh, oh
You're partitioned from the town
You now have to feel the curvature of space
The flow of time, in this trance-like state
If you only knew what the future holds
Though there are two and a prophet who do know
Maybe your reasons why to keep the book closed
So you could follow paths leading to the perfect road
And for Luna's love, your heart will glow
And when it's time, she'll know
You've just got an insight to life and what's inside
Because you're bright feel the forces unite
'Cause Twily, you're a unicorn
Maybe, the best ever born
Make 'em go, whoah, oh, oh
As they're humbled by the sight-
Twily, you're a unicorn
Come on, feel how water works
Make 'em go, whoah, oh, oh
You're partitioned from the town
Soon, soon, soon
You'll be rising sun and moon, moon, moon
It's always been inside of you, you, you
And now the prophecy's come true-
'Cause Twily, you're a unicorn
Maybe, the best ever born
Make 'em go, whoah, oh, oh
As they're humbled by the sight-
Twily, you're a unicorn
Come on, feel how water works
Make 'em go, whoah, oh, oh
You're partitioned from the town
Soon, soon, soon
You'll be rising sun and moon, moon, moon
Soon, soon, soon
You'll be rising sun and moon, moon, moon
Today I might become one with everything
I'm just gonna go meditate
I feel like being one with stone
and fire and air, if they condone
'Cause today I swear I'll be one with everything-
Uh!
The garden's partition's up
So that's a good plan
Get my Qi on, and attuned to the lands
Nobody's gonna tell me I can't
I'll be lotus on the grass,
Just feelin' earth, air and fire
But my element is so obviously water
'Cause I have passion but I still like to plan.
Oh, yes I said it
I said it
I said it 'cause I plan
Today I might become one with everything
I'm just gonna go meditate
I feel like being one with stone
and fire and air, if they condone
'Cause today I swear I'll be one with everything-
Be one with all!
Ooh, hoo, ooh, hoo, ooh, ooh-ooh
Nothing at all
Ooh, hoo, ooh, hoo, ooh, ooh-ooh
Tomorrow I'll wake up from my meditive state
When my princess, mistress, has less on her plate
And she's gonna scream out: 'This is Great' (Oh my Stars, this is great)
Yeah
I might mess around, do my archmage duty
I bet Celestia will be so proud of me
But Luna, oops, her libido's insane...
Haha
Oh, yes I said it
I said it
I said it 'cause I can
Today I might become one with everything
I'm just gonna go meditate
I feel like being one with stone
and fire and air, if they condone
'Cause today I swear I'll be one with everything-
No, I ain't gonna comb my mane
Even if it makes me look plain-
No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no
I'll just hum in this special place
That keeps everything away
Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah
Ooh
Today I might become one with everything
I'm just gonna go meditate
I feel like being one with stone
and fire and air, if they condone
'Cause today I swear I'll be one with everything-
Be one with all
Be one with all
Be one with all
Always did like water the best out of the primary elements. Very versatile. Fire is almost solely offensive, Air is unpredictable and nigh uncontrollable, and Earth is, although just as capable offensively and defensively as Water, much more clunky and extremely difficult to be precise with. Water will flow easily to deflect oncoming dangers, and can harden to ice for pinpoint accuracy. And if we go by Avatar lore, it can heal too. YAAAAY WATERBENDERS!
Either she's on the way to becoming an alicorn. Or she's gonna have some sort of showdown or something with Discord and forcibly rehabilitate him or something else violent. Pfft! Yeah right, she ain't that powerful!
2592891 2592443 Ahahah I think I know the last line... Inferring from previous iterations it might be "The Archmage will ascend."
EVERYTHING CHANGED WHEN THE FIRE SPARKLE ATTACKED!
This whole chapter was just one huge Avatar reference The dream, the elements, all of it
So frakin sad it's gonna end, and you BETTER tell us what that line is!
2592568
Nah, if that were it the princesses would have had a much different reaction... It's gonna be a humdinger, but it's more than likely not that
2592488
Only kinda? This was basically the whole series of Avatar wrapped up into one chapter (minus all the trials and fighting and shtuff)
2594679 Shh.... Let me have my fun in hoping something bad and totally twisted and evil happens
but really, it probably ends with her being turned into an alicorn, but the way it's worded makes it just one possibility with many other possibilities.
2594689
I was thinking the same thing about her becoming an alicorn, I see no reason that wouldn't work. Plays right back into the series.
2592488
Really? I thought more of shamans in WoW.
...Why do I imagine Ragnaros popping up while Twi is messing around with fire?
"YOU CALLED, LITTLE SHAMAN, AND THE FIRELORD HAS ANSWERED!"
2594194
Not just Avatar, but also WoW. A shaman's healing spells are all water-based. "Healing Wave" indeed.
2594194 You can also control other people by controling the water inside of them. Yay for Blood Benders!
2594720 Actually, that would be f#cking awesome
So, what was that last line about? Is Twi about to go all alicorn? Or is she supposed to release and reform Discord? Save the world again?
Nice story! I would've cut about half of the clop here, but otherwise it's very good!
They looked down and read the last line together, " The Archmage shall Transcend Mortality."
2595131 Half the clop?? There is no clop in this. There are some explicit scenes but no actual clop. The sex scenes aren't long enough to be clop, and the story doesn't revolve around them. Unless you consider any kind of sex scene, clop.
2595567
Yeah. Probably too lose of definition, but I did mean sex scenes.
That's actually why I think that there should be even less of them. Deleting them completely would be damaging, but the way they are... they are not intense enough in contrast to the rest of the story. They feel off. Having them overall is good (love and sex go well together), but the way I feel — we could lose half of them in their current state and get a better story in the end. Only my opinion, though.
2595607 I think I'm gettin where your goin. Kinda like how Lapis-Lazuli does his dark Twilight stories. Not quite as in depth as these, but plenty enough to know about whats goin on.
And then everypony died.
2593817 dayum. respect bro
2592568 I sure as heck hope not.
2593817
Sorry I didn't get around to replying to this sooner... But I have a challenge for you. Accept or deny, I just wanted to see if you could do it...
>.>
<.<
Do "Sometime Around Midnight" by Airborne Toxic Event.
P.s. I got chills on the fireworks one, and laughed more than once for Lazy Song. Likely your best yet, and you always leave me stunned. Thank you a million times over ^.^
The last line?
2592569 With as massive an undertaking as this fic, spinoffs will happen. Some will be good, others... not so good
.2593817 And yay, more MrNumbers originals. Your work gives me goosebumps mate.
Am I the only one who hopes that this fic never ends?
That would be cool with me.
2592962
Wrong! Twilight is the avatar. She just happens to relate to water over the other elements.
Another great chapter! Keep it up!
2606516
well, I was going to say that she was the avatar, but then I realized that Celestia and Luna also can control all the elements, and theoretically other unicorns could too, so I just decided she would be a waterbender
I loved it.
I was thinking this was going to be the final chapter, but I was blissfully mistaken. Twilight mastering the elements was a master stroke. Water surely does suit her best, and I'd be lying if I said I wasn't a little scared when she was mastering fire. The partition bit was also done beautifully. Most folks understand what a "partition" is from a computing standpoint, and it was the perfect word to use for the magical barrier.
So many feels. So many...well you know...
I will be waiting with baited breath for the next and (maybe?) final chapter.
2606516 shes not just any avatar.... shes Korra
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i would say ''twilight brings change''
a change in what?
love?
pain?
desire?
greed?
oppression?
revaluation?
evolution?
live?
or as you said death?
it's in no way to tell what it would bring and only time would tell
2611963
I'll give you fair, honest warning right now. There is full blown sex involved, and there are parts of the early story that do revolve around it. But I promise you, there is a legitimate plot and plenty of character development here. I don't want to lay on the horn being the author of this fic and all, so I'll just let you decide for yourself if you want to read it or not...
But I will say this:
The story is as well-rated as it is for a reason.