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Two chapters in one day!!!
Commence read.
Luna. Really interesting thing going on there. Yeah...
Seems like with the goal of growing a tree would take time, then you throw in Magic in could take no time at all, if done correctly.
Happiest day of my life to refresh this page and see TWO whole new chapters to read ^.^ now to wait forever for the next one... or ones...
This image illustrates what happened between Twilight and Luna in this chapter: (Warning: Not Safe For Woona!)
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Nature magic. I've been interested in this one, I expected it to be sort of shamanistic. Honestly I figured Zecora would be the one to teach it to her. But this is good, it's more unicorn style magic, which makes sense.
2 chapters awwwwww yeaa and they did not disappoint either, lovely read!
Nature magic is communing and caring for plants and animals?
IT LIVES!!!
Indeed it does!
These comments, as well as last chapters, are being made as I read. so fun times here.
Nice to see Twilight feeling fulfilled with her life! It was a rough start, but she's definitely coming into her own.
Whee date night! nice to get some focus on them having what could approximate to a normal relationship. Though that comment Luna made about her not being around forever makes me worried that she won't become an alicorn or have a happy ending with Luna. Awesome that they finally get that make-up sex going, though its only really been a week since they made up. Wow, actually now that I think about it, it's only been a week since they made up hasn't it. And they're getting married pretty fast aren't they for having been in a relationship for a week. And if Rarity's beau was miffed by Twilight thinking/realizing she was in love after a bit of teasing, he's probably not gonna be happy about the marriage thing. Cause she's for sure gotta tell her friends and family about that... right? Hell that's probably gonna be a national thing too.
Why am I not surprised by that the Nature magic teacher is the greenskeeper? Gable seems like a decent dude. not as eccentric as people think him to be though. Excitable though, very excitable. Nature sounds right up Twi's alley.
In all, I enjoyed these two chapters very much.
loyal, welcome back to the clop zone!
Great chapter!
sounds like fluttershy and applejack will be a great asset in helping her with nature magic, but i am a little concerned about anger and hatred; she was able to withstand the insults and slights against her because she knew deep down that the princesses didn't actually mean it, but what about when somepony says those things and does mean it
The Fun has been doubled
keeps being a joy to read this fanfic
Amazing job as usual.
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awesome duo of chapters there!
i think i saw someone else mention this as well, but twilight did only get really angry once harbinger insulted celestia, that might still catch her off-guard.
the thought about what is in that prophesy is driving me insane, two reasons mostly:
i don't think you two will go with the bittersweet ending where twilight dies but leaves luna happy with the time she did have with twi, but im not sure it's gonna be an alicorn twi with this one either, hopefully immortality is involved in some way, giving the entire story the possibility of a completely happy ending, but the thing is that im not sure.
the other thing is what the climax will be, what will happen to twilight that's worrying luna to such an extent.
and how in the world can twilight not know what the specific spot she found on luna is? i mean, not only is she a mare herself, but she have to have studied anatomy at some point.
this is going to be basically the same message you get always from die hard fans , I FREAKING LOVE THIS (cantorcaps where nessa)
I've been reading this since maybe your second update to it , and well i;m caught up to date with it and been exporting the story into a word doc so i can have it FOREVERRRRRR so before i get too creepy i just wanted to say , good job , and thank you , thank you so much , this story makes my day when it updates , and its one of the things i look forward too the most every-time i get on FimFic, so not to beat a dead equine , but THANK YOU
OOOOOHH SHIT.
I have a feeling the shit is going to hit the fan again.
“Marry me.”
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Wait..... Isn't their relationship secret? That's gonna be one hell of a coming out party.
*Mane 6 are in a room*
Twi: I'm actually gay and engaged to Luna.
Everypony else:
Rarity: YESYESYESYES BRIDAL GOWNS!!!!!
On a side note, I was half hoping for TwiLuna bondage, but it doesn't seem like it would fit well to me..... But if you DO end up doing it I will bestow upon the the highest of fives.
BONDAGE!
WHERE IN THE HELL IS LOYAL!? hes not replying to our comments! or at least saying hi! quick everyone protest this insanity!
edit: in hindsight i probably shouldn't of posted this, but meh whatever, i still want loyal to say hi
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Hi
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I blame imgur...
You should put Comedy as well, some parts are hilarious as fuck :D
Great chapter :)
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VICTORY!
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i know prob not my place, but i can help
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Help... With an Imgur addiction?! That would be great, I really do need help with that.
You glorious glorious writer you.
An amazing story with a special way of writing that gets me to come back. Every. Single. Time.
Can't wait for the next chapter ^^
I just started reading this about 5 days ago so I'm not entirely used to waiting for this, but I assume by what I've seen on past uploads that I can safely assume about 2 weeks-ish before worrying? o: I'm just really in love with this fic and I'm struggling to not think about it...
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It depends. We'll go anywhere from 4 days to 4 weeks before an upload. It's whenever I can write the chapter, and whenever Iroh can get around to proofreading it. I'm working on the latter, but Imgur is a mean bitch to put up with.
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Alright then :D I have (a few... very few...) things to do while I wait, maybe I can catch up on some of them o.o
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lol the other thing, but meh i can help with the addiction as well.
*tries hypnotism* YOU WILL LOOK UP PONY PR0N INSTEAD OF LOOKING AT IMGUR!
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And neither of you know ITS vs IT'S?!
EVERY ITS IS AN IT'S HERE
IT'S LIKE FARCRY 3 ALL OVER AGAIN.
ARGH!
NO SONG FOR YOU TODAY. Next time though...
I think I have a good new parody in mind, if I'm hearing wedding bells...
2084077 ....but....he used "it's" correctly, as a contraction of "it is".....
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But he didn't use ITS correctly, he always added the apostrophe
2092524 he did in the comment you were responding to. As for the fic, too busy reading to nitpick grammar. I keep my casual reading and my editing separate. It's not worth the trouble of getting worked up about its errors.
2066686 At the same time, RD and Flutters exchange a sidelong glance and a deep blush.
We have an announcement too.
Well hot damn. Some wonderful sex and then Luna drops the bomb. It should be quite interesting to see how things play out after this, and how she gets along with this nature magic.
~SolidFire
Celestia is right on one thing: I didn't quite like the implications of her speculation. Normally I don't quite mind Cutie Marks because I see them more as a mark of affinity and passion rather than a sign of their fate and, even if they were, since fate in the show usually cannot be predicted it matters little. For little fillies, the appearance of the Cutie Mark is a moment of epiphanic self-discovery, the moment when they realize what they're talented and passionate about, and they devote their lives to it precisely because that's what they're talented and passionate about. Even then, they still have some wriggle room in how exactly to apply their talent. Rarity's special talent, for example, is gemology, but she applies it to her passion for fashion and design.
But for this fic's Twilight it is markedly different and paints the entire thing in a light that I find somewhat unsettling. For one, she apparently did not realize her actual talent when she got it, which puts into question why she got it in the first place, and it was, not only an explicit mark of her destiny, but one that had already been foretold millennia ago. Worse still, it implies that Twilight couldn't have found true happiness any other way other that being the Archmage. She had loving friends and a peaceful life occasionally spiced by the odd crisis and being the Element of Magic and she still was unhappy and unfulfilled. I dunno, but I feel it just presents the worst kind of destiny, namely the kind that actively strongarms people into following it. This is compounded by the fact that the prophecy is self-fulfilling in nature. Twilight wasn't a student of Nocturnal Glow. Hell, he barely even knew her, and Celestia wasn't gearing her up for the position either. She wasn't chosen because of her power, skill or suitability. The only reason Nocturnal Glow chose her as his successor is because fate outright told him to do so. Had the prophecy never been made, Twilight would never have become the Archmage. Add on top of all this the fact that fate is stated to outright explode when defied, so even though free will exists, the exercise of such is rewarded with oblivion.
All of this implicitly presents fate in the fic as some sort of oppressive and domineering... force... that seems to have a very specific idea on how things are supposed to be and will tolerate no deviation from its Master Plan, and that's downright creepy, if not outright terrifying
Was I the only one who turned on Aerosmith's "I Don't Want to Miss a Thing" at this point? If so, shame on all of you.
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The fear of God is the only fear. ...Well, except spiders, clowns, the dark, water, fire, heights, confined areas, open areas, having a fear...you know what, I'm just going to stop now.
Woah... that escalated quickly
What!? Season 1-3 of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic "bland and unremarkable" How could you say such a thing?! But in all seriousness, this has been a great read. I've had 2 people harping on me for months to read this and now I see why. I think I'm gonna be a little sad myself when I finish it just because I finished it. Sure, I could always come back and reread it, but nothing beats reading a good story its first time.
I really want to see Celestia untie Twilight from Luna's bed now.
>>beacjere I am so happy that I wasn't that I wasn't the only one who thought of that
I rather like your take on nature magic. There is a reason earth ponies are more inclined towards it. It's something that takes literally a lifetime of experience to master, And with pegasi being generally flighty with shifting interests or drawn to more Exciting pursuits, And unicorns being more inclined towards study than action, it would be earth ponies with their Enduring, dedicated nature slowly experiencing the life of the world around them.
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Yep, and it's also a good explanation onto the few non-earth ponies who have nature magic based Special Talents.