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I'm quite confused as to why this comment got so many downvotes. The original comment was "Swag." Nothing more, nothing less. Yet I came back a couple of hours later and it already had 11 downvotes and only 2 upvotes. I wasn't looking for upvotes when I wrote the comment; I simply posted how I felt about the new update. If anyone would like to explain to me why it's such a bad thing to write the word "Swag" in a comment, feel free to PM me. As you can see, Lars took the initiative before I edited and displayed his immaturity.
Anyways, I suppose this is a comment on the chapter, so I will talk about the chapter. I could have made another post for this but I felt that it would be redundant to post twice on the same chapter (not counting replies). I previously stated that I disliked the clop in this story and I am sticking with that opinion. But in the recent chapters, there has been less clop and more action and storytelling. I like this and appreciate that the author was able to balance out the romance and storytelling aspects of Archmage.
Luna Dun' care 'bout no lookers....I bet she likes people watching
swag swag
Truly storytelling at its finest here with this chapter. Can't wait for more.
Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes.
Yay for more TwiLuna.
Btw is it bad how much i am torn between wanting an update for this and for Melody's Tale.
Why must you have multiple amazing fics that tear me between them?
Good chapter.
Except you messed up dialogue punctation a lot. Kept using periods instead of commas. You tend to be quite inconsistant with this, occasionally getting it right, then wrong again.
Check here for more info.
That ending... That was a good ending
For this chapter of course!
cute
An excellent chapter.
That ending, all I can say is:
ABOUT. BUCKING. TIME.
Calling it now: if/when Twi gets back, Luna is going to "show her the ropes" if you no what I mean
I'm so, so very sorry for that
I dunno if you can answer this but
Do we get to see the wedding?
Awww... It was a sweet ending!
Luna know how to cause a stir!
-Mis
Best coming out scene ever. Looking forward to the next chapter!
You know loyal... Those last words were spoken several times in ADKoL: melody's tale....
I'm tempted to respond with 'See you later, space princess.'
Either that or, 'You're gonna carry that friendship.'
That was awesome at the end! Can't wait to hear what Rarity says. (I do know she knows but still)
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You lot completely killed the word "swag." It used to be short for "swagger," for when someone is full of themselves and knows it.
But noooo, you had to overuse it until it became meaningless. You are both terrible people.
great chapter! the two things which bother me now: 1. rarity, if she is some kind of sleeper agent or if her behavior is completely natural (if that's the case then i really want to know why and how she left cross stitch...which you really need to tell us about anyways...) 2. if twilight's 'destiny' is supposed to happen in this library; how the princess worry tell me that what's going to happen is unavoidable, but it will still be something none of them wants.
2492354 I don't understand why I got so much hate for using the word "swag." I promise you I would have gotten the same amount of hate for using the word "swagger." It's just a word. There's nothing wrong with using a word to describe how you feel about seeing a new chapter update. So please mind your manners and think about what you're going to say before you come to idiotic conclusions about other people. Thank you and have a nice day.
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Actually I'm using it #hipster #ironically. #hashtag #yolo #zipzopzoobidybippidypokepokepokemon
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2492522 Because posting a picture of a troll with a caption that says "Come at me bro" is better than me using the word swag. Way to be a mature user of the internet.
Well after the letdowns in some of the other stories I've been reading, I NEEDED THIS AMAZINGLY DONE PIECE OF WORK <3
Now I can say my week was a net plus instead of a soul-crushingly bleak net minus
There better be some political storm for this! A princess and an Archmage? Think of the posiblities.
Plus, I love a good drama now and then.
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Success.
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No. No it's not.
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Message received. Shutting up now.
Dang. That's an emotional farewell.
2492751 Thank you.
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Let me just say, I absolutely love computers.
That is all.
ermai, loving these chapters more and more now. Archmage is slowly pulling it's way back to it's rightful first place position
Commence read.
Alright then. Seems like it went well.
2492675AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW i think sickiny sweet (and mabe sexy) of twi and luna. P.S DEATH TO THE PEAS AND DOUCH BAGS,AND MUSHROOMS (not the ones from mario),AND STUCK-UP RICH PRICKS,AND MOST OF ALL PEPOLE LIKE REGAL MAY THAY BURN IN HELL OR IN (thunder sounds and a flash of lighting "gulp".) NEW JERSEY(sreams of fear.)
This story has captivated me. Although, that is very easy for a story to do.
But anyways, This story is awesome! I can't wait for an update.
I swear to God, if you do a cutscene.
*reads shower scene*
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You will never realize how unbelievably close that scene is to what I clop to. All it's missing is my fetish to be complete.
Oh right, plot. Yes. Evil library, probably gonna die, hilarious political shenanigans when she returns due to the Twiluna becoming public, hopefully more clop.
I think you overloaded my feels-o-meter.
I'd appreciate your input
Sweat princess sweat princess sex in a shower's hot
You and I share the kind of love that would make Prince Bluebood's poor brain clot
So take your hooves out your shoes and cum into my shower
"Yes Dear Sister, No don't stop yet" and you're screaming too much out
You've had enough of secret love you want it known your love is shown
I want you public want my love-licked like nothing you have ever known
Come quicker than I expect, this is such good sex, you know you are inclined
To make me rise an hour early just to raise the sun on time
Do it now
You and me baby ain't nothin' but equine
So let's do it how we do because the sex is just divine
Do it again now
You and me baby ain't nothin' but equine
So let's do it how we do because the sex is just divine
Gettin' corny now
Love the kind that will leave a mark but fuck it.
Like the lost library I leave for once was secret now it's public
Want specifics? Let me be terrific! I wanna go down where it's deadly.
But I think it's tragic that this magic used for fabric is locked away for eternity.
So fantasize, be wise, no lies, Before you sink Twi-Lunaship
I won't be too long I'm Archmage Twilight with a good friend for the trip
Then I'll be yours for all of time, your Twi, you'll love it just like I'll
And then we'll do it scissor style so we can both gaze your skies
Do it now
You and me baby ain't nothin' but equine
So let's do it how we do because the sex is just divine
Do it again now
You and me baby ain't nothin' but equine
So let's do it how we do because the sex is just divine
Gettin' corny now
You and me baby ain't nothin' but equine
So let's do it how we do because the sex is just divine
Do it again now
You and me baby ain't nothin' but equine
So let's do it how we do because the sex is just divine
Gettin' corny now
You and me baby ain't nothin' but equine
So let's do it how we do because the sex is just divine
Do it now
You and me baby ain't nothin' but equine
So let's do it how we do because the sex is just divine
Do it again now
You and me baby ain't nothin' but equine
So let's do it how we do because the sex is just divine
Gettin' corny now
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I laughed so hard my co-worker called our boss on me. I actually had to explain this to him. You fucker.
You brilliant, brilliant fucker.
Two little mistakes…
Equines don't have collar bones
made
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1. I'm gonna go with the fact that cartoon ponies DO indeed have collarbones, for the purpose of sexiness.
2. Thanks >.< We tend to miss small shit.
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1.
2. Sure, no shame in that. All in all your grammar and spelling are impeccable.
2494880 If you want to rationalise collar bones, how about this.
Ponies don't have them, but Birds do, in which they fuse to form the Furcula (Wish Bone), because they need extra stability in their torso to cope with the additional directional forces of flight. Now since Pegasi and Alicorns would be taking on these forces whilst ordinary ponies wouldn't, mayhap they developed a collar bone to make their body more airworthy :P
But I'm just hypothesising.
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>Hypothesizing
About cartoon ponies. That have filthy sex.
AND MAGIC.
2495360 Magic is just unclassified science ^^
And it's spelt hypothesising here. We in Britland despise the overuse of Z ^^
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>Spelt.
Yes.
>Britland
Double yes.
>Zed
ALL THE YES.
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No, it used to be 'swag', a term used to describe a style of walking peculiar to the scots. YOUR lot removed all meaning from the word by turning it into swagger.
OR MAYBE both groups advanced the meaning of the word, and we should stop being butthurt over the changing definition of a single word? Nah, that's crazy talk.
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swag |swag|
noun
1 an ornamental festoon of flowers, fruit, and greenery: ribbon-tied swags of flowers.
• a carved or painted representation of such a festoon: fine plaster swags.
• a curtain or piece of fabric fastened so as to hang in a drooping curve.
2 informal money or goods taken by a thief or burglar: garden machinery is the most popular swag.
• informal a large number, amount, or variety: a swag of events including fleece competitions, poultry and water fowl competitions, and a tractor pull.
3 Austral./NZa traveler's or miner's bundle of personal belongings.
verb ( swags, swagging , swagged ) [ with obj. ]
1 arrange in or decorate with a swag or swags of fabric: swag the fabric gracefully over the curtain tie-backs | (as adj. swagged) : the swagged contours of nomads' tents.
2 Austral./NZtravel with one's personal belongings in a bundle: swagging it in Queensland | swagging my way up to the Northern Territory.
3 [ no obj. ] chiefly literary hang heavily: the crinkly old hide swags here and there.
• sway from side to side: the stout chief sat swagging from one side of the carriage to the other.
“I know.” Luna muttered. She stepped closer, wrapping her forelegs around Twilight. “I just don’t have to like it…”
Then how about you just go with her, no one need you for 1000 years to rule and I am sure you can arrange it so you can protect pony you love so much while having exciting adventure with her, but nooooo.......
“Well…” Celestia sighed and frowned at her. “Just know that I’ve sent many ponies to this library, Twilight… None of them have returned.”
Yes, you send many ponies to die to get back something for you instead of going yourself or joining them to protect them, jezz, I am sure that organizing some ponies form council and government to rule during your very short absence so you could use your power in very important mission to make sure that important knowledge will be recovered without hundreds to die in your name, but noooooooo.....
( Being powerful ruler is bad because it mean doing paper work instead of using great power for greater good ).
“Take this.” Luna said as the necklace finished materializing. “And wear it with you always. Wherever you go, Twilight, you’ll carry my heart with you.”
Unless it is a necklace enchanted by Luna to protect Twilight from being killed or eaten by a giant monster in time of danger, it is once again " please remember me my love while you will fight for your life, I am sorry I can not come with you to protect you because my duty what was not need for 1000 years is more important then safely of pony I love so much "
I think the best plot twist would be Twilight dying or being near death after this adventure and Luna crying " why I let her go, why I did not come with her to protect her, how could I let her face all those dangers alone without me by her side ".