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oh dear... this might be bad. The Twilight emotion train appears to have derailed and then exploded. Twice.
Twilight's going super saiyan... we're all fucked.
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That's pretty much what that was... Eagerly awaiting more though...
Council, or else consolation. Either way, it should probably be reworded.
Also, holy fuck, please tell me you have the next chapter ready. Please.
Ofcourse cliffhanger of doom.
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We do...
Its written, proofread, and good to go!
We're not uploading it though :3
Ladies and gentlemen Twilight has gone nuclear in this event the only advice is to put your head between you legs and kiss your... and well you get the rest
Ladies and Gentlemen, I can now say with 100% certainty...
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It. Is. On. Like Donkey Kong.
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I see what happened here!
I wonder how this will turn out. This could go in so many directions ..
Damn you... your POSITIVELY EVIL! Leaving us hanging like this!
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Oooooh....You're Evil...
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Its all about the suspense.
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Yep...This story inspired what you saw what I did there...Ummm...
What did I just say...?
I keep the moniker for a bit...this story is the Best I'm following thus far...and close to Ever.
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Thanks for the two chapters today, thoroughly pleasant to see, as well as read.
And oh my, Twilight is gonna learn the magic of hate now huh? Rage, hate, somewhat interchangeable I would think. Patiently awaiting the next chapter.
Luna you messed up big time....
Really awesome.
But maybe, don't use 'whimper' that much.
Her parents are DEAD! Is she going to become Batmare now?
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Cue Luna: "You think that the night you your ally? You adopted the night, I was born in it!"
1770853>>1770922 I think if given her emotional state and good reasons to be upset the could possibly break down two roads of power one Necromancy which I love but is useless to over emotional individuals, basically her heart would have to shatter then freeze in place killing her emotions and turning her into the perfect vessel for the necromatic unliving magics that defy the natural order of life; Or she could break shadow magic and go straight to discords chaos magic filling herself with the very building blocks of both destruction and creation at the same time. thereby being able to accomplish what she wanted yet also being unable to control her emotions. lets just say Twilight is going over the deep end and landing in the middle of the ocean of pure hatred and destruction.
Luna will be very lucky if she and the night survive this. Because there is a good reason why Twilight bottles up her emotions carefully and with a tight lid.
TAKE COVER!!!
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A catastrophic shitstorm this way comes for Luna. I see six ways this ends. Only two of which are even remotely pleasant.
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I don't think there's enough cover int he world for what's about to happen.
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I still find you quite Evil. Anyway sir, you know when the next chapter is gonna be released?
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I would really like to know what these six ways are. I always love to hear other people's ideas, and if one of them is right, I will see it as cause to celebrate (being predictable is a good thing, it means that it makes sense)
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Whenever Loyal feels like it, probably early tomorrow.
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you bastards.
You glorious, glorious bastards.
AAAHHHHH Cliffhangers !!! Whyy !? Btw awesome fic this is quickly becoming one of my favorites. Love when Twilight learns new magic
Inb4 Nightmare Sparkle
And now for some Hate magic.
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Well, two involve a 'nightmare' Twilight. One is a 'happy' ending, that sees Twilight pretty much being held down until she finishes venting her anger with little destruction. The other... constitutes a 'bad' end, in which Canterlot would be lucky to still be standing...
Screw it, i'll just list em. Mostly morbid thoughts abound. They probably aren't more than
1) 'Nightmare' Twilight held down (by Luna, and possibly Celestia) and vents (relatively non-destructively) her frustrations. 'Good' end for this scenario.
2) 'Nightmare' Twilight unleashes her rage upon Luna, who may or may not survive. Canterlot (and the princesses, for that matter) lucky if they're standing by the end. 'Bad' end.
3) Twilight overpowers Luna, forcing Celestia to get involved. Celestia stops Twi, incapacitating her, inadvertently permanently crippling her, or alternatively, killing her. 'Bad' end.
4) Luna forced to incapacitate Twilight for her to calm down. Twilight KO'd, and conversation with Luna in the 'dream' world, everything pans out as expected here. 'Good' end.
5) Alternate end for #4, Twilight wakes up, and doesn't believe Luna at all, based on her past actions. Possible 'end of the world' scenario here. Most likely would lead to #2 as an ending in the long-term.
6) I could see this, and it's going to sound so cliche... Twilestia pairing. Luna pretty much fucked her chances of fixing this here, if the last scene is anything to go by, and drives Twilight to find consolation in Celestia. Cue the relationship. Luna regarded coldly by both. 'Bittersweet' ending for the scenario. I see this as similar to the 'Alternate Ending' to Romance Reports.
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If I say anything about this (that includes saying that it is one of these, that it isn't one of these, or that it is almost one of these, so don't try to read into this comment to find out what happens, the answer is not here), it would be a horrible spoiler, and it would make me a bad person. However, I would like to acknowledge this and thank you for sharing, as I said before, I like to know what people think, and you have satisfied my curiosity.
awesome chapter! i was at the edge of my seat throughout a lot of it!
i hope luna won't just throw a fit, scream at twilight a little and use some superior magic that makes twilight afraid of her and basically turn this around, that would be incredibly dull, cause we would basically just end up at a different shade of square one...this HAS to result in something, something that doesn't null everything. (in other words; this has to change twilight in some way...). granted, i don't think that will happen, but i have habit of spelling out my worst fears.
twilight opened herself to the night again there at the end, which is basically what "possessed" luna apparently, meaning that she can't be twilight's biggest fan, im not sure if this will impact twi in any way, i just thought it noteworthy.
one thing i can think of is that twilight will want to use the night's power against luna in rage, the night REFUSES, thus twilight tries to force it, which turns out isn't such a good idea...(although, if that happens; what use is power if you can't rely on it?)
that cliffy was slightly evil, but i doubt twilight can actually do something against luna, maybe harm her a little with the element of surprise, but in the end luna can always use all of her power and crush twi (at the moment at least), so im not really worried about that; im more worried about how this is gonna affect things (as i said above). although, that said; that extreme destruction spell might do something if not expected.
you know which fic this reminds me a little bit of: Romance Reports
the relationship with luna to be specific, with a little twist of course; luna basically uses twilight's feelings in both, while she actually does like her, she just never really says so, leaving twi to believe that luna doesn't really care about her.
edit:
question: where are we in terms of story progress? i read a comment and just happened to get worried that we're close to the end of the story.
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Not a problem. This is the third time i've been asked my thoughts on how i see a story might progress, and i'm honored to have been able to provide my input on the matter.
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Oh no.
NOnonononononono.
Much, MUCH more left. We're MAYBE halfway done with the story. Maybe.
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great! i was getting a little worried there!
If you tell me this is just a ploy by Luna to teach Twi the magic of Hate, I wont be happy.
Also, Celestia seema to be rather bitchy, is there a reason for that?
Shit is gonna go down, and when it does, it's gonna be biblical.....
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Archmage displays her full power at the graveyard, hundreds of bodies found...
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Celestia cares for Twilight, and specifically warned Luna not to do exactly what Luna did. Now Twilight is hurt, and a decent portion of the blame can be put on Luna, of course Celestia is mad.
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Or Twilight asks the night to help her to punish Luna for her actions.
Perhaps the night agrees that what Luna did should be punished and helps her by giving her some power.
And at the end when Twilight is actually winning Luna will yield and give up. Which suprises Twilight and makes her stop attacking Luna cause she still knows that she won in the end.
This is what i think that will happen :) It looks like it is the best way in my opinion. Twilight still shows respect to the night and knows when to stop even in rage.
Hmm. My guess, this was all part of Luna's plan to teach Twilight the magic of hatred. It WAS next on the list, right? Which means all of it... Twilight's parent's dying being concealed from her, Luna's seducing and leaving her, all of it, was part of the plan.
Luna's not one for half measures... but we're talking some serious risk taking here.
And then Luna died.
The End.
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I was thinking that Celestia thought Luna wasn't malicious enough. You're probably right though, in hindsight.
What's the bet that the Night talks Twilight out of it?
"Yeah, you wouldn't happen to believe who just turned down this same offer five minutes ago. Something about unrequited love? Eugh. Damn Princesses.
"Yeah, tell me abou- Wait. What?!"
Got yourself a fan here mate, great stuff.
Knowing how this story likes to snub and troll me, umma say inb4 anticlimax disspell by Luna rather than Big Damn Heroes moment by Celestia or Twilight fending off what appears to be her impending Superpowered Evil Side.
aaaand i'm out, sorry loyal
Anybody else remember that hate magic was the next thing she had to learn?
iroh its past early morning tell loyal to hurry up!
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Sorry about the delay, but Loyal decided to make a change and we're going to have to have a conversation about it before posting. This wouldn't be a problem if he and I didn't have contrasting schedules.