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wow you pump these out fast >>
Twi why do these things always happen to you? Also
The only music that I thought of this chapter also good chapter
The fun has been tripled! Seriously glad to see this coming along.
Argh another cliffhanger . You really don't need them to keep people interested you know .
I'm really enjoying your fic so far and I was positivlely suprised that you focused on a deep story and carracter building over a strictly clop only fic.
Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter .
Three chapters in one day!?!
You my friend is crazy or a genius
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BAD PONIES! lol
First off, now that you have reveiled that Twilight is a virgin, every horny clopper is gonna have wingboners that a pair of Peterbuilts could not weigh down. Seriously! It must be the biggest dream in all the fandom to be the first to have that succulent flesh... *drools*
Then, you just had to go enrage EVERY Twilestia fanatic out there by making it so that the SUN princess thinks of Twilight as her daughter.
(Actually, this would THRIL all the incest cloppers)
So, I think this would be the perfect time for you to bring in the incredibly awesome brother to RD, (that being one Biker Dash) and ship him with Twilight!
Just a thought...
Twiluna?
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Twilight IS a pretty awesome pony, and so is Luna, but... I dunno. I'll give it a shot, sure.
You know, one of those StudentXTeacher relationships wouldn't be TOO bad. I've yet to see one pulled off in a manner that doesn't feel horribly awkward, however.
You could use some sort of reasoning along the lines of "You are my student and this is my duty", but I'm not sure how Twiley would react to that....
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Well Biker Dash, we do need someone for Twilight, and honestly, Loyal and I have no idea who we are planning on shipping her with. Because, you know, we started a ship fic with no ship in mind.... yeah...
Anyway, the Celestia Twilight relationship in this is actually my headcannon, Loyal and I made a compromise, I get that and he gets to make it clop.
1710141 lol I'm not certain how you two would make Twilestia work here, where as it has already been established that Celestia already feels as a mother towards Twi, and, by placing her in a maternal light, it kinda blows the incest plot out the window.
Now, a Twiluna ship would work out nicely. Hell, the groundwork is already there from what I have read from the last chapter.
Also, when the mature scenes happen, I do hope that they are as well written as the rest of the story. Personally, I really enjoy good erotica that fits well within a story rather than the shamesock grade clop most seem to throw at us readers lol
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"Relationship" does not necessarily mean something romantic. I meant the mother/daughter relationship.
Anyway, I'm glad to hear that you think there is good groundwork for Twiluna... for no reason in particular >.>
great chapter!
im gonna stick with this one until i have major definite proof that it's not like that, and probably for quite a while after that!
okay, so she's kinda bi-polar and vague, but once you get to know her she warms up quickly. still annoys me that they were friends before she warmed up to her like that. to find out that luna already have feeling towards her, and still treated her like that is even more astounding. (not saying that it's bad, it's a characterization after all, and so far you've stayed very true to it)
will be interesting to see who gets intimate with her first. whether it's luna or celestia; the other one is gonna be slightly sad and jealous.
summoning something so dangerous was a serious mistake, luna is not very good at thinking things through still.
1710624 My bad... I assumed... sorry
Now, I must go rage at someone for planting a Soul Eater/MLP crossover idea in my head? Suddenly had the urge to do a Rainbow Dash x Black Star ship... or maybe Twilight x Maka.
I KNOW!!! Lord Death and Celestia!
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About Luna's personality, Loyal's idea for it can be kind of confusing. Hell, I didn't understand it for a while and I technically helped create it. Hopefully her nature in this story will become clear once we see her in some different situations. Anyway, I can understand why you think she is bi-polar (I'm pretty sure that the politically correct way of saying that is "manic-depressive" by the way) but I assure you that Luna has her reasons for how she feels.
And about Luna not being a good teacher,
yeah, pretty muchshe's not used to teaching like this, normally (and by that I mean in the world of this story, I highly doubt that its cannon) she teaches younger mages and has no time restraint. Imagine a professor who teaches, lets say, Physics, and he finds out that he will be teaching an advanced class starting tomorrow to a student who speaks a different language, and he has to cover more material than usual and well enough to be sure that the student will then understand physics to a greater degree than anyone else currently alive. Oh, and the student is supposed to be the head of the Army Core of Engineers and there are levees breaking. Not the best metaphor, but I think it gets the point across.Darkling?
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Is Luna possessed by The Darkness? Is Celestia the Angelus?
In all though, I'm really enjoying this story, though I find myself agreeing with Mossflower's appraisal of Luna's teaching methods and reasoning behind said teaching methods, though it does make sense if she sucks at teaching. As for the personality, I'll withhold judgement of that, though it is kinda manic-depressive. While I like the Twiluna that's being built here as well, never been a huge fan of out and being like "I love you!" though it is nice to see Celestia questioning Luna about it and Luna kinda taking it to heart.
Luna berating Twilight on the current social norms of communication, that's funny.
1710012 Eternal and Composure say hello
well no Twilestia I suppose. Doesn't really seem like a mother daughter relationship to me when a single mean sentence from one can reduce the other to tears, but I don't know what everyone else's mother-child relationship was like... :pinkiepieshrug:
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Celestia sees it as a mother daughter relationship, we've yet to mention how Twilight feels about it.
1712905 or even if Celestia means what she said. She did seem rather...forced. Still, I suspect trolling to the nth degree is involved in such comments, given my previous experiences with the comments section of this story. Still, I can troll right back *watches Iroh*
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How the hell did you know!
Being watched! My one true weakness!
Bsbzbfzfvadfnkj- *dies*
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Ahh... man, no offense, but reading about the oh so lovely compromise you made up there ticks me off. I did that little weight in my head "A non-romantic Twilight/Celestia relationship in exchange for Clop scenes." And all I can think is that I'd ditch the clop in a heartbeat if it meant I got to see more Twilestia romance.
Ah well... I'm not like, violently opposed to TwiLuna... I just don't think it's as interesting.
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Ummm... that was a joke... I need to be more careful with what I say around here.
Anyway, one conversation between the two of them does not set everything in stone, or maybe it does... I guess you'll just have to keep reading. (*sigh* I feel bad about that, I hate when people end things like I just did)
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Huh... I guess then I just failed to read the proper tone out of that. Sorry if I took it too seriously then, it's not like I'm just going to stop reading such an interesting story cuz' I don't like the pairing. I only do that for really ridiculous crap like Harry/Draco or Hermione/Snape.
I didn't see that it was a joke probably cuz' I've made extremely similar sounding deals with various friends of mine regarding backstories for tabletop characters. "Okay, since we're brothers we need to have basically the same backstory. I'll let you choose the country of origin if I can choose our family name."
If that's the case though, then I suppose I'll await with bated breath the thrilling conclusion to this ship tease. Here's hoping for either Twilestia or Twilunestia, because Twilight is Best Pony, Celestia is Best Princess, and Luna is just plain Awesome.
Edit: And, you know, because in situations where both princesses have expressed even mild interest in Twilight, the one who loses out in a normal monogamous relationship always inspires tears of rage from their personal fans, and tears of pity from everyone else.
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What Iroh is trying to say is this:
The story is a work in progress. There are many details that we are still hashing out and have yet to decide on. I'm not saying the shipping is among those decisions, and I'm not saying that it isn't. In short: We don't even know yet.
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Coincidental. I've never played The Darkness, so I didn't mean to do that... Still. This isn't a crossover fic >.<
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Don't let the ship stop you from reading the story... This is my first attempt at a serious character development fic, and indeed, most of the shipping will fall by the wayside in light of all the progress Twilight must make as Archmage.
It'll be there. Don't you worry, loyal cloppers... It'll be there.
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I dunno, maybe it shouldn't even HAVE shipping. At least, not the "chapter-after-chapter, consistent" kind. Maybe it should just be a fling here and there.
But that's just my opinion. Tell you what, keep being awesome and writing quality chapters and I'll make sure to read it.
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I have no idea what this is. Eternal and Composure? Explain?
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heh, I know. I was making a joke. Though now I kinda wanna read a Darkness crossover...
1713048 Eternal and Composure are two of the best loved and best written stories on this website. The first deals with Twilight entering the mind of a very sick and possibly dying Celestia to uncover the truth behind how she has stayed alive the past several thousand years, while simultaneously dealing with the gap between Twilight and Celestia that has grown ever since she was appointed Archmage of Equestria ten (or so, it's been a while since I read it ) years ago. The second deals with Celestia's constant attempts to mask her thoughts and feelings to avoid the discomfort of her friends, family subjects around her, through the fallout of a disastrous lab accident during a groundbreaking experiment involving herself and Twilight Sparkle. The remaining story revolves around her recovery, her guilt over still fearing Luna after thousands of years and never sharing these feelings of fear, and her frustration with a subtly building infatuation for her beloved student, and her trying to explore which of the four loves she feels for Twilight. Both can be found on this very site, or you could just visit the group page for Twilestia and see what you like
1713030 I'll...take your word for it. Not sure how I feel about Tsundere!Luna and Flip-Flop!Maternal!Celestia, but I do quite like your Cadence and the concept.
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Well in THAT case.
Gonna go read them.
1713266 mmmyesss. Let the Twilestia floooooowwwww through you
Twilight has to run faster than a guy at the running of the bulls RUN TWILIGHT RUN!!!
oh i hope you update this soon.
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when looking at my comments in hindsight; i think i might have given off the wrong impression from my thoughts i love the story so far, and i "love" (in a very complicated way) luna's personality. i didn't mean to sound so negative, body-language and tone of voice is hard to convey through text
as i said, luna's personality isn't necessarily bad; her personality not being very clear-cut is great, more depth in a way. i just reacted quite strongly towards her when i read things from twi's perspective (getting a strong reaction isn't bad in all cases).
well yes, manic-depressive and bi-polar are the same thing, however; i just wanted to point out that she had mood-swings and is slightly bad at conveying her emotions properly
i can understand the problem luna faces when trying to teach twi, it's entirely different from what she's used to, i just happened to react a tad early to how she started out. i should wait for luna's view on things.
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well, im glad you've not excluded any of them yet (the princesses that is), just a friendly pointer though: don't dig yourself into the pit of "twilight must choose between them", twilunestia is great as long as stays through the ending, doing it for most of the story and then having her in a romantical/sexual relationship with only one by the end while the other is "happy for her sister" is not.
in short: please plan the romance properly
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We think we have it hashed out. Difficult to tell for certain, but we might just have found the formula for success last night.
Anywho, chapter 5 is up for editing. Pre-emptively, it's 8k words.
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great!
8k; yay!
Boy, that escalated quickly. From lesson 'imma beat you until you submit' to 'you need to fuck somepony, and I wouldn't mind being that somepony'.
DIS GON B GUD
*pulls up chair*
oh hell, you've got a good level of dark and light Loyal, keep it up! i'm in for more (as if you care xD)
1713280 the dark side has Twilestia?! im gonna sign up right away
1750839 another minion. Goooood....gooooood....everything is as I have forseen, oh masters. *munches on cookies while readin ship fic*
“Heavens help me, I was about to take a virgin into the night…”
Haaa, this was funny. Maybe it wasn't meant to be, and it served a number of other purposes too... but yeah. Hilarious.
Oh Twi, you are so screwed... //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
You know, it bothers me when innocence is equated with virginity.
It's stupid! And it doesn't make sense! Innocence isn't ignorance! Nor inexperience... honestly, like a virgin can't do no wrong nor have naughty thoughts about another.
Sheesh, that is a mistake that disgusts me.
1987487 Oh be quiet. Think of the spiritual view on virginity, not the matierial view on it. This is magic we're talking about
Virgins have long since been a symbol of inocence, Virgo being the best non religious representation I can think of.
And it disgusts you? It's an opion of the subject, not some dirrogitory statement. Plus, you are on the internet. Trust me when I say that if that disgusts you, then maybe this be no place for ye
its. its. its. its. its. its. its. its. its. its. its. its. its. its. its. its.
I bet she/he will do this:i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/294/755/f35.gif
Just started the chapter.
Woah, slow down!
Wait, didn't Luna say...
Yeah, and when was he...
Derp?
Anyhow, back to reading.
Edit:
Done. Welp, Luna you dun goofed. Really. If silencing spells are not applicable then at least act like she's not there... Unless, of course, it's a test.
Gotta go read more!
this is so INTERESTING! I've been reading this for a while now (It is 0510) and I can't stop! I am glad I started late!
“For your studies in the night and shadow to be complete, you must lose your virginity.”
When I first read that sentence, a couple of things happened to me, completely Serious here:
A. I KNEW where this was going.
B. I KNEW I couldn't stop reading this fan fiction, it was simply too good.
C. I went half insane and stopped reading to laugh at my predicament.
D. My sugar fueled sleep deprivation comforted my insanity.
I swear that you would have driven me insane if the rest of the fabrication, all 40+ chapters, were clop. I'm glad it's only a few points with some warning.im glad I'm not insane.