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Commence read.
The crystals serve an interesting purpose.
That was amazing progress for Twilight. That is a little unnerving. Though I could see her being able to do so.
Celestia and Luna's little conversation was funny.
Two chapters, in one day!? Yes please!
You know... when Celestia and Luna was trying really hard at making Twilight angry, I was waiting for Luna to whisper into Twilight's ear, "Shining Armor was better."
And that was the end of Canterlot, and everything in a 40 mile radius!
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Well this is a pleasant way to start the morning, not gonna be super in-depth though. Fallout: New Vegas's siren call calls to me.
Sucks to be Harbinger. my favorite line in this chapter is
by far.
So Twi's learned anger magic huh. heh, I wonder if Harbinger would be happy to know he helped teach her that. One wonders however, why she didn't call up anger magic like that when she confronted Luna in the graveyard.
It was strange for Celestia to say "I can't allow you to run the investigation" and then one paragraph later say "I can't stop you." She can totally stop her. She's kinda a princess.
Poor Spike, kinda getting the shaft from Celestia there. She did give him a window though so maybe not.
Nice to see her channeling some stuff I mused on - like how stupid the plan was. And I really want her to start saying crrrrrryssstallls.
awwww...
In all, an excellent chapter.
he updated!
I think I see what the princesses missed. When Harbinger insulted Twilight she brushed it off with a little effort when he insulted Celestia is when she nearly blew. Twilight can shrug off insults to herself no problem its insulting her friends and loved ones that set her off.
Celestia and Luna's conversation reminded me of the one between Twilight and Cadance ...
Something I thought of in regards to the crystals that wasnt written, but might be interesting to include. . .
Have them function as a sort of feedback loop.
They grow as the unicorns anger grows, and serve to feed that anger back into the unicorn. By feeding more and more anger into the caster, the caster will expel more in the form of crystals, and it continues on and on. The result would be the unicorns power growing to levels they cant contain, being channeled into either destroying their targets, or overloading the caster and destroying themselves.
Just a thought.
Now, ONWARDS! To the next chapter!
Oh God, I've been staying awake past 3 in the morning every day just to catch up to this point. The plot, the emotional conflicts, it's just so--jeez, I'm at lost of words. I am loving this so far. If only I had started reading this story sooner . Till tomorrow, I shall continue.
I thought twilight was the one that was hesitant about sex, not Luna ? Luna brought up sex when twilight mentioned her period a couple of chapters ago and she seemed pretty eager? Great story , just some little clarity things that need to be refined here and there that would make it even better!!!
This part is so great to me because you're explaining something that doesn't exist in our world (the magical aspect of it, that is) in a way that makes perfect sense. It's described in a way that makes me say to myself "if this magic existed, what's written here would definitely be true about it because it reflects real life". Made better by the fact that I probably wouldn't have even pondered over the differences between anger and hatred magic if Twilight and the Princesses hadn't been discussing it in this part. You're bringing realism to the unreal, and that makes excellent writing.
Good to see that Twilight is getting along in her studies so well. Soon she'll have mastered all the different schools of magic, and then... what's after that? The different duties from the councils? That should be interesting.
~SolidFire
If the magic of Anger and Hatred can manifest involuntarily in times of great emotional distress, you'd expect Canterlot's Cementery to be a crystal garden. Twilight was leagues more pissed at Luna that Harbringer could ever possibly make her no matter how much he might try, but she still did not manifest her rage, drawing instead on the night. I wonder if something's changed...
And Twilight doesn't think big enough. Forget about distrubed sleep cycles and shot schedules (that is SO her ). If night lasted eternal, every single form of plantlife would slowly wither and die, from the smallest tuft of grass to the mightiest tree in the Everfree. Without plants to feed herbivores (ponies included) they would then proceed to starve and, without prey, predators would soon follow. And all this would happen while temperatures continuously dropped, the land deprived of the warmth of the sun. However, assuming the sun doesn't dissapear when it's down, you'd have one side of the planet being scorched while the other froze and the pressure imbalance would cause massive typhoons ripping appart the land from the one side to the other on top of everything else. Every living thing in Equestria would inevitably die in just a few short weeks.
Every. Living. Thing.
No exceptions.
Good thing Celestia's master plan worked during that Summer Sun Celebration ,eh?
“Anger is a destructive magic. It creates nothing. It has no benefits. It has no ulterior motive. It just wants to destroy. To watch things break under its power, to see the object of its torment destroyed completely. Hatred wants to watch things suffer. To inflict pain and see them miserable and downtrodden. It uses its power to suppress and overthrow, to dominate and harm.”
i imagine that these are the only types of magic humans would be able to use
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What do you mean "would"
We already do! If you can control your emotions, anger can be an incredibly useful tool (although I just use it for lifting heavy objects) and hatred makes it so much easier to turn off the annoying morale principles that affect humans at times.
4408593 Wow... You sound some what like a psychopath when you say that... .
“I don’t see why not…” Celestia sipped at her tea calmly. “This means you’re free to do as you please with her. Just, do me a favor? Don’t tie her up?”
I LOL'd
wait im confused wasnt time magic mentioned earlier in the book
4258657 yeah cause us humans have never ever been humble to a higher power (shadow), or forced control over a subservient power(light), or done anything with complex math(magical) formulas(barrier).
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Cap. (since it's all caped in it's Acronym all of the words need capped as well).
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Nightmare Moon back for… Generations now. My father, and his father before him, and all the way back a thousand years.
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Don't forget relationships (friendship and love), chemistry (elemental (alternative energy, fire based / causing products, siphons, etc.)), and gardening / terraforming (limited) (nature). We can do all of those types of magic. In a relatively loose definition of magic (well we're doing that magic the earth pony way).
> yesterday. We have a total of forty-seven ponies in custody
I see what you did there