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Wanderling


Whale, whale, whale, now that's what I call a fluke.

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One night, everypony went to sleep. They were Earth Ponies, Pegasi and Unicorns.

When they woke up, they were not.

Shenanigans ensued.

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A new spin on one of the Standard Pony Cliches - Alicornisation.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 230 )

I have no idea what I'm doing. :pinkiecrazy:

This is my first story on FiMFiction.

Any significant errors? I'd love some constructive criticism.

So. Beginning with Rainbow Dash. This was fun. Started with her because I wanted to imprint Princess Tank into everyone's minds, bwahaha! :rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by Esme deleted Sep 11th, 2020

okay, if EVERYTHING suddenly has alicornization? yeah, this could be amusing. Faving to see where this go's.

Wow... by the description, I expected everypony... then Tank.

I'm torn on which I what to see more: Spike's or Pinkie Pie's reactions to being alicorns.

A interesting concept, I like it. Everypony is a alicorn; I can't pass that up.

Aww, thanks everypony! :twilightsmile:
>>Esmelthien
Oh, I definitely think they would have suited him better, but they are as they are for a purpose!:pinkiecrazy: All shall be revealed in due course...
>>Zeromant
Hehe, thanks!
>>Zephyrus Scary
Well the next chapter is Rarity, so you won't find out just yet! :raritywink:
>>The Kings Man
Thanks!

Comment posted by Esme deleted Sep 11th, 2020

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...right. Ahaha, not really used to posting yet! :facehoof:

Hmmm... this should be good :pinkiehappy:

Wait, this sounds suspiciously like a story I was thinking about. You didn't happen to read a story prompt on the Cloudsville forums a few weeks ago, did you?

Also, it's a good start, but I think you should leave the pets out of it and just stick to the animals that can talk.

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A fan-fiction Scootaloo! Whadd'ya expect? :trollestia:
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:twilightsmile: Thanks!
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...I had never heard of the Cloudsdale forums until your post. :rainbowderp:

Also, I'm about to post Chapter 2! :raritywink:

Whoop! Chapter 2! :pinkiecrazy:

Any massive errors?

It's either Applejack or Pinkie next. :ajsmug::pinkiehappy:

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Because I have to do one before the other! :derpytongue2:

How in Celestia's name did Sweetie Belle cause a fire making a bowl of cereal?:pinkiecrazy:
I can see Applejack totally freaking out wondering what the hay is going on here. Pinkie, however, is going to be trying to use her new horn and wings right away.

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Maybe...friction between the flakes? :pinkiecrazy: Yeah, we'll just go with that. :unsuresweetie:

I did not know that there was any fire-extinguishers in Equestria. Is that even possible.

Now that the topic of Prince Blueblood has been brought up, I kind of want to see his reaction to waking up as an Alicorn.

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Well, I think they ought to have them if they don't. :pinkiesmile:

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Heheh, that could be interesting... :pinkiecrazy:
No reason I can't go see how the other non-mane-six ponies react after all!

Everypony pile into the library -- We need to know if you can fit more in there than in a fleet of VW bugs. The main issue is going to be if Spike the Alicorn can send off a letter with green flame anymore or not.

I just had the most brilliant thought!

What if... Celestia and Luna (and Cadance) woke up as... Earth ponies?! Dun dun dunnnnnn!

Also, Derpy = Princess of Bubbles?

Ah, but what was Opalescence doing at this time, or was she still asleep as cats are wont to?

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Well, there was a big party in Golden Oaks when Twi first arrived!
Well. The issue may not be the ability to send, but if the recipients are willing/able to reply...:pinkiecrazy: Maybe...
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Pfft, Derpy is the Muffin Queen. :derpytongue2:
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Yup, Opal is a lazy b:yay:h.

AJ's Chapter comin' up.

Aaah. These accents. :applejackconfused:
So many 'Ah's and contractions. I also ran out of 'stare' and 'look' synonyms!
Pfft. :pinkiecrazy:

Anyway, are there any glaring errors?

Hope you're all enjoying the story!
:trollestia:

I really liked this story. I should have known that AJ and Big Mac would worry more about the farm. Granny becoming younger really surprised me. It makes sense when I think about it. I wonder how Applebloom will take this? Anyway, I can hardly wait to see Pinkie's reaction.
:pinkiehappy:: WHEE! I have wings and a horn. You know how much easier it will be for me to throw parties now. I can't wait to try these puppies out.
Something of the nature only more hectic. I know Twilight is going to be last. A though just occured, Angel Buuny be able to use magic and fly...poor Fluttershy.:fluttershysad:
Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter.

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Heheh, Pinkie is next. *rubs hands together in glee* :pinkiehappy:

Poor Fluttershy indeed. :flutterrage:
*cackle*

Winged jackalope Angel Bunny

Trouble with synonyms? I know that feel...

Still, excellent addition! Funny, perfectly in character... keep it up!

Oh flip, I totally forgot the indents in this chapter. :facehoof:

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Heheh.
Y'know, I suddenly have an urge to draw this. :rainbowderp:

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<3 Thanks!:twilightsmile:

Well. Pinkie is a pain to write. *fistshake* :pinkiecrazy:
Fun though, just difficult. She's just so, random. I kinda felt I was going in circles and may have exaggerated her too far? idek

Cookies and three internets to anybody who can name the 'quiet as a fish' reference. I don't expect it of anyone.:derpytongue2:

Also some Pinkie vs 4th wall action.:pinkiehappy:

Any horrible mistakes? :twilightblush:

Well, I think you wrote Pinkie pretty well!

And-!... Oh, Celestia, I just realized... if everything is an alicorn, then Gilda-... and what would Trixie think if this happened while she was alone on the road?... Does this mean the hydra has five horns?! The ursa major can fly, and the diamond dogs, and-... Now I can't wait until we see Fluttershy with all her alicorn-ized animals!

Any horrible mistakes?

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YOU MADE PINKIE AN ALICORN!:trollestia:

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Heheh, now you're getting it. It's all a bit chaotic, isn't it? Oh dear I said too much.
Or maybe not anything at all.
:trollestia:

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Hmm. Yes, I did didn't I? :pinkiecrazy:

1688131 Yes, I believe you have.:pinkiecrazy:
Anyway, I can see why Pinkie gave you so much trouble. You got her randomness down packed. Poor Fluttershy and her alicornized animals (especially Angel *shudders*). I wonder where Scootaloo is and who she is with when she discovers her new horn (she probably still won't be able to fly.)

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Ahahabbppllttthhhpt - CUTIE MARK CRUSADER PRINCESSES GO!

Oh.
Oh Celestia.
This will be a thing.
:scootangel:

Did Discord turn into an alicorn too?

Discord: Gah! I'm capable of so much less now! Change me back!

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

You get twenty out of five moustaches
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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Heheh.
Hrmm. Would the statues change though? Is Discord a 'living' thing at the moment? Hard to say. *wiggles eyebrows* We'll see. We'll see... Maybe.:pinkiecrazy:

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Aw, thanks!:twilightsmile:

Wheee~
Fluttershy! :yay:

Any errors? :pinkiecrazy:

Right...no errors... And SPIKE AND TWI NEXT :D buuuut have Spike be an equine, that way... Rarity x Spike :D :pinkiehappy:

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Oh good, thanks!
And pfft. There be no shippin' in this story ya varmint!:pinkiecrazy:

CDR

Twilight, Spike, Owlowicious, and PeeWee.

4 things live in the library remember?

Every animal got wings and a horn?
Yay for jellyfish-icorns, no parameceum-icorns!

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Harry motioned for her to let him in again, bu she raced back to her bed

That's the only error I found on an initial read thru.
Are you sure Fluttershy should leave Angel 'the slave driver' Bunny alone with the rest of the animals?
In any case, I believe Twilight is next. I just wonder how she is going to get woken up. Is somepony going to be rapidly knocking on her door, she going to see herself in the mirror and start going all neurotic, by Spike yelling her name at the top of his name, or what?

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Yup! :twilightsmile:

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Snailicorns! Whalicorns! Orange-frogicorns! :pinkiecrazy: Or something.

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Thanks for the catch! :twilightsmile:
I figure Fluttershy thinks that Angel won't misbehave again. :unsuresweetie:
And, you'll see...:twilightoops:

Whee, Twilight! Hahaha.
Ah, Twilight. Your breakdowns are fun to write.:twilightoops:

Are there any hideous typos/grammar mistakes/ridiculously out of character moments?:pinkiecrazy:

Dun-dun-dun...what'll happen next? Who knows?
Well I do obviously.

Now for a vote, should I continue the Mane Six for a bit or go off and find out what the other characters are doing? Both'll be covered eventually, but which first?
:twilightsmile:

CDR

Other's first.
Blueblood will probably shit a brick.
Trixie will think she's the only one, (out on the road alone).
Vinyl won't give a damn.
Octavia will probably spaz for a bit.
Cadence will probably jump for joy when she sees Shining.
Fluer & Pants will probably take it in stride.
Zecora is probably crosseyed trying to figure things out, or on her way to Twi's.
Derpy is probably having a blast with Dinky.
Gilda is probably losing it, but thankfully not the same way Twi would.
Discord has almost got to be free.
Dear god help us, the CMC were bad enough before...
Diamond Tiara & Silver Spoon, they're both going to get all worked up, then crushed.

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