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It's very unlikely to meet four other strangers, all at once, who happen to be Bronies like you.

What's even more unlikely is to be sent to an Equestria that you never expected by a character you thought you knew with said strangers.

Oh, and getting turned into a dragon. I think that's the weirdest part.

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Comments ( 61 )

"Don't write a HiE fic," they said. "Don't write a self-insert fic," they said. "They're probably right," I said. "Too bad, I'm doing it anyway," I said.

1496591 "What an arrogant prick," the reader said.

...still gonna follow it though.

Maim them ponies jason, maim them.

If you can respect yourself when you look in the mirror, there should be no problem writing a story you want.
Sidenote: "Taking yourself seriously all the time is bad for your well being," the wise troll stated.

Glad y'all are liking it! Much better turnout than expected.

1498426 Damn right! :derpytongue2:

1499604 Good thing I take myself seriously about 5% of the time, then.

I shall refrain from making the obvious joke. Mainly because I know someone else is going to do it.

The sooner this is said the sooner people can be disappointed that it isn't as clever as they thought it would be.
FUS RO DAH!

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I DID contemplate using Shouts as magic... but... nah.

1507397 Save that sort of thing for crossovers, for it is silly and not deserving of being deigned with the title of 'original'.

1507422
Well, I AM sort of stealing this idea from a book series... but, good thing not to many people read books. It'll go mostly unnoticed!

1507429 As long as it's not obvious, you can get away with it. :P
What book series would you be speaking of, anyways?

1507441

That would be telling.

FUS RO DAH!
BBEEEEEEEEYYYAAATCH!

silly humans its not fus roh dah, its the royal canterlot voice dragon version!

1509413

you win an muffin for that :pinkiehappy:

1496591 Self-Insert?

What are you 15?

(I guessed from the character but still)

Self inserts are frowned upon, not due to the fact that it's uncreative but due to the fact that you will get lost from what you will do because you will instinctively want what's best for yourself. Leading to Mary-Sueism. If you don't go down that path well then good for you!

1507387 FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-

1524744

Enope, going on 19 in December.

I just act really "immature", because it's quite fun. I don't believe in wearing a false mask to satisfy others' expectations of acting "adult." :yay:

love it deep keep it up i want MOAAAAAAR

:moustache: look forward to seeing more soon.

If y'all are wondering what I was referencing with the "Will and the Word" and "Belgarath," I strongly urge you to find and read the book series called the Belgariad. It's one of my all-time favorites.

The main character is over powered but if author is going to keep good drama and less violence... Well go on.

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Dun worry, the overpowered-ness is there for a reason.

Main character: fly, shapeshift, breath fire, magic, eats knives, sharp teeth, claws, scales, is a dragon, has hands.

Other humans: ???

But other than Chaos' blatant favouritism, the story's pretty good.

LOVE IT I LOVE OP CHARACTERS

1611121 PREDICTION TIME!!!
The characters are going to have a dispute about something related to the main character's powers. Then they separate and go on their own adventures. Each of the characters will have some kind of spiritual revelation and the non-dragon characters discover they have their own powers. Then they all come together to face whatever the reason is that you made the main character so overpowered. :moustache:


or not. You know, since it is your story....:twilightblush:

YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!

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We regret to inform you that with exams coming up, the author of this story has exactly 0 time for writing, even if he wishes he had said time.

I feel really bad - I haven't put up anything for any story in such a long time. I hate it, but I can't do anything about it until exams are over next week.

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I understand, so don't worry about it! :twilightsmile:
Just update it when you can, no need to rush

I've finally cut down the chapters of story I need to read from 215 to 70. :yay:
Great chapter, by the way.

Celestia allows slavery?
Holy *Buy some apples*:pinkiegasp:

Nox

DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUN!

Well this will turn out very interesting to say the least.

I say try your universe.

did not see that comeing

Oh crap, is this going to be some stupid 1984 thing?

That was an awful book. :raritydespair:
Don't even reference it! :raritycry:
EVER!

Also, the start reminded me of Saw. :twilightoops:

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