...Name's Mike.Past 3 weeks have been hell for me.And I'm starting to loose it.Tonight I'm drinking my problems away.But I hope things will get better...
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Your proofreader sucks.
I saw so much errors, its insane.
weird, i had a dream almost exactly like this last night!!!
Well, I'm listening to Dimmu and you're not changing that, writer! Not while I'm alive!
Ok, a tad overdramatic so just forget what I said, now about the fic: It's great so far. Never played Prototype however so any lore from it I might not understand but hey, that's whats the interwebz is for, right.
Looking forward to more.
Edit: Oh yeah, I agree with the first guy. It's chock full of errors. I don't personally mind it but most will.
more! and get a more/better proof readers.
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Also how much power Alex give him or is he gonna have to start over by consuming the beasts of Everfree,etc?
cant wait till he actually meets a pony, id like to see how he reacts.
yea there are a lot of spelling errors, but thats not a big problem personally, its the story that matters which so far is really good. next chapter plz!
oh, and btw, awesome music, here have a stash
414022 WHOS GONNA FIGHT FOR THE WEAK? WHO'S GONNA MAKE 'EM BELIEVE? A HERO'S GONNA SAVE ME JUST IN TIME!
This music is pratically SAYING how he is going to get his powers
419027 Losing my faith today. I am just a man, not superhuman. Just a step from the edge. Just another day in the world we live. - How Mike will be feeling later on the history.
I need a HERO - How some certain ponies will be feeling
I've got a hero Livin' in me I'm gonna fight for what's right, today i'm speaking my mind and if they kill me tonight I will be ready to die! A hero's not afraid to give his life, a hero's gonna save you just in TIME! - How Mike is going to feel a bit later on
This history is pratically telling the history.
Soon, another chapter will be there
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cant wait!
Hmm. My judgement shall wait till a later date. So far, so good.
by the way you make him sound, the question he should be asking is, "Why do i even like this show?" Seriously the character focused more on the negatives than the positives in each character. Anyway great story thus far, keep goin and stay golden^^
424319 Its because he also read fanfics in wich ponies wanted the human dead,lol
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So,They're going to be attacked by a rare seven headed hydra who's size and power puts Spike's greed form to shame?
432178 nope,worse
You might need a proofreader to go through this...
Just sayin'.
But apart from that, good job!
NOT GOING TO UPDATE IN 1 MONTH, SORRY
i hardly find a good fanfic i enjoy. this is one of them.
Well i like were this is going, and as an added bonus I don't think I've ever listened to Skillet before and they're not bad. So cool fic and a new band for me to check out? thank you kind sir
whens the next chapter
Despite the need for a proofreader (hell, I even need one myself), I'm enjoying this fic so far. Although the most recent chapter made it feel more like a human in Equestria then a prototype crossover.
But still, despite the long wait for the next chapter (based on that post above) I'm looking for the next update
...aaaand tracked. English isn't my first language so grammar and style mistakes didn't bother me. This has potential. Oh, and I like your music tastes.
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You lost that:
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im so happy your back
YES!!!
I'm glad your back and running, because this chapter was stuning
I LOVE IT!!!! moar,and please don't go away again!
what? you're back? YAY!!
Hum... It changes POVs out of nothing. Try separating with ***** or things like that. Otherwise, I like it so far.
Amazing story bro, inspired me to start my own fic.
Also, cant wait for the next chapter!
I'm looking forward to achieving the goal of making one chapter at a week.
The next chapter that gets here will be followed with another in the maximum time of 1 week
864152 three words: Hell fucking yeah!
100'/. approval
what about the rads?
i like it! you should continue it. im curious as to how he will react when he discovers his new powers and meets the mane 6
864152 I see no update
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is this story dead? ( PLEASE DON'T BE DEAD!
Faved and liked
1891009 I'm sorry but there aren't any life signs so i'm going to pronounce it dead.
~T.MC
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Please Re-Write this with the spelling mistakes and VERY FEW Grammar mistakes fixed please and thank you i am typing this while listening to Monster by Skillet because why the hell not?
Great taste in music man.
Some Rammstein would do you good