Mountain Snow, Frostbite, The Shadow, The Silent Storm, etc. none of these names appear in official records, however they are enough to strike fear into the hearts of all but the most hardened soldiers. He is an outlaw and hardened thief with an enigmatic past and unknown goals.
Twilight Sparkle, princess Celestia's prized pupil and the element of magic.
When fate brings these unlikely two together each one must come to terms with their own gripping realization about their existence and if what they believed in actually mattered.
Chapters (4)
I love it!
Awesome!
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Thanks
3196045 No, thank you for the epicness that is this story.
exlante
fffffffff-WHAT HAPPENED NEXT?!?!?!?
i was totally into the story when that cliffhanger literally came out of nowhere and slapped me in the face
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I should have the next chapter up tomorrow
i've noticed that in alot fics that there are way too many ponies that go to Sugarcube Corner for breakfast... i hope they have good dental care
RUSHED?! RUSHED?! YOU OBVIOUSLY HAVEN'T SEEN MY WORK!
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Yea, whenever I attempt to write, its like twisty wtf cheerios and fruit loops and some random shit. Impossible to understand, really.
3235329 TAKE A LOOK AT MY CRAP WRITING! THEN WE'LL SEE WHO'S SAYING THAT! I have this whole rant thing in a read before story thing, and I lost my train of thought and everything turned into a disaster. I think I started talking to myself somewhere in there. Here I'll copy paste it. Read this crap!
I think this needs to be said. Don't judge my stories by their description/lack of tags/whatever is on the front cover. (No one has. Just felt like saying this.) I'm horrible with short descriptions of things... Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand I just lost my train of thought. Great... I forgot what else I was going to say. Damn you music that I constantly listen to for background noise on this site! Curse you!
Oh well. Just read the story while I bash my skull into the desk for how stupid and easily distracted I can get. Have fun, bye.
Authors note:
Stupid *thump* Ow. Stupid. *thump* Ow. Stupid *thump* Ow. Forgive me if this affects my writing in a bad way. Hey, maybe the brain damage will help! Nah, I'm just being overly enthusiastic. *Le Sigh*... If you still haven't noticed, I'm dumb.
EDIT:I JUST FREAKING REMEMBERED! (I hate myself right now) I was gonna say something along the lines of how the titles of my stories will often have almost nothing to do with them and may sound or be completely dumb. LIKE ME! Plus, most if not all my main protagonists will resemble me. Go ahead, make fun. I'd actually LIKE to see some comments on how dumb this was! Now I'll be outside in the rain bashing my skull into the cement next to the pool this time if anyone wants to... I don't know. Just leave this sorry excuse for writing already. (First chapter anyone?)
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This is why I'm scared to look in a mirror sometimes.
This is also by far the longest comment I've made. BTW, this is in one of my future stories and I don't think I'm going to let people read that. They might get scared and run, so have fun making fun of me for this. I don't care.
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Daym, that's more crazy than Reese's Puffs. And why I'm naming off random cereal, I have no idea. Maybe its because I'm OUTRAGEOUS!! Maybe because of sleep deprivation. Either way, you are not insane, you just like to kill.
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Your story is fine, I don't see what your talking about
3235628 ...eh...
I can't get enough facehoof. (My bored randomness, sorry.) I guess 'Rain' is alright, still rushed, but nothing compared to before that. I had another story, I took it down. I could explain more, but I don't think it will be good on anyone's health. (Plus, I can't think of the right words to say.) Especially with what I've already said here. Sorry about spamming the comments section with this stuff.
nicely done
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Thanks, glad to hear that after all the time it took to put out an update.
4547696 your quite welcome
Glad this is back
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What did you think about the new chapter?
4547929 glad a new chapter is out and it feels like the plot is thickening
4547929 it was good, but there were some errors here and there