(Rated T: Alcohol Mentioned On Several Occasions)
I never thought my life could be anything but ale and whiskey, but suddenly I'm a mulberry pony...
Wait, that's not how the song goes. *Hic* And why does my hand feel number than usual?
Everything's out of focus. *Hic* No, no, no. I most drunkenly am not assured. *Hic* Let's have look in the mirror.
Oh! *Hic* Hi, Berry Punch. How'd you get on Earth? *Hic* What? No, I asked you. Why are you copying my motions... and why are you so quiet? *Hic* You know what? Forget it. *Hic* Good night!
*Collapse to the floor.*
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I have to wonder sometimes if I have any shred of dignity as a writer.
But then I realize something.
I have no dignity.
MLP:FiM is property of Hasbro and Studio B as are respective references.
This is non-profit.
I may or may not continue this.
I'm a firm believer in the phrase, "Finish what you start."
At the same time, it's taking me forever to finish some of my long-term projects (some of which I have yet to finish).
I might be a hypocrite.
Yes. All my yes! Have a mustache!
Or two!
Or 17!
Good.
The potential of awesomeness here is amazing. Can't wait for more!
Two berry punches, then one become Berryshine. i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/187/315/71646%20-%20macro%20meme%20reaction_face%20scootaloo%20screencap.png.jpg
1518471 So many moustaches.
1518630 Thank you.
1518722 Well in that case, I just might continue this.
1518758 Your guess is as good as mine.
MORRREEE :crazypinkie:
Love it! Great premise, great characters, cannot wait for more!
A bit of a rocky start... but the whole idea that "I got so drunk that I wound up as a mare in Equestria" keeps me hooked, and if the ending of this chapter is any indication... well this should be one hell of a enjoyable random fic!
I guess I am continuing this.
Though, I'm kind of worried about going along with that plan.
Usually, the more I try to pump out of a story, the quality starts to become less and less until it's just drab.
So, all I need to do to became a pony is to drink pure-spirited liquids?
...
"Bartender!"
1537870 If all bronies in the world believed that, there would be a VERY sharp increase in the amount of alcoholics existing.
True that, I'd rather eat muffins every day. And I don't even need to be a pony to enjoy it.
Because we need more Berry stories.
This story is getting pretty fun
really hope the author hasent given up on it, wanna see what happens to "Berry Punch" next
2343192, I'm going to try to finish a couple other story-related items that I'm working on before I really start tackling this one again.
I've been letting this sit for far too long. My apologies to all sides that were afflicted by this prolonging disappointment.
While the first three chapters were interesting, this one comes out of nowhere. Why are they at the pool? Some sort of ritual, which is meant to do something to the spirit, but what? They seriously walked for over twenty kilometers? The new unicorn teleported that far despite never having had a horn before? What's going on with Berryshine, anyway? The main character literally disappears a paragraph before the ending for no obvious reason? And seriously, that's not an ending! Almost nothing is explained, never mind resolved!
You can do better than this. Are you really the same writer who wrote the earlier chapters last year? Or are you just trolling everyone? (I did think for a moment about whether or not it was 1st April. In August.)
oh god, it updated.
*hugs!*
That escalated ... obscenely quickly. D:
3122892>>3123552, Here's my advice to all prospective writers.
You want to be a good author? Don't do what I do.
...
I'm not exactly proud of myself right now. I've lost a lot of enthusiasm toward some of my past writing efforts. This one in particular was sitting around to the point where I couldn't even remember what I was trying to do with it. I'm sorry if this train-wreck waiting to happen got anyone's hopes up. I decided to go down with my keyboard flailing rather than a silent cancellation. (That was stupid of me.)
...
Here's to hoping for a better future with better paced fics.
3124031 Don't worry, everyone has bad days.
But I think if you reflect on this one for a little while, you can do much better, even if you still aim to tie it up in a chapter or two. (It does seem like a waste, because the first three chapters were good and could support a longer story, but, of course, you're the author.)
3124031 Eh, it's alright, man. Everybody's got off days. Hell, I've been having an off month. I ain't gonna blame ya for it.
its meh, nut I will continue onwards
it is just feels like im reading "this happaned and then this and then this and then this"
I think this sums up my reaction to reading this new chapter.
Oh well, it's better to burn out than fade away 'cus rust never sleeps or whatever.
I'm gonna keep my thumbs up because something in the first 3 chapters deserved it, been too long to remember why though...