This is an Infamous 2 crossover. We all know that the good guy ending from Infamous 2 is that Cole kills the beast and all other conduits by using the RFI. What Cole didn't know was that he was being watched by Celestia and after seeing Cole's selfless she knew that she had to save him from the cold hands of death. SO she took his soul and brought it to Equestria. when he gets their Cole is left near ponyville. What adventures will Cole have.
I'm not good with summaries so sorry if it stinks. also this under a pure good version of Cole
Chapters (17)
Wall of text. Different colored text for speakers.
Didn't read. Needs work
Authors' notes should go before or after chapters. The color is unnecessary and somewhat annoying. Same with the video. Your grammar and spelling needs work or an editor. I'm fairly sure first person is difficult to pull off well. Also, you're telling too much and not giving enough details. Show, don't tell.
That said, all the other Infamous crossovers I've read are oneshots or lost my interest. I'll see where this one goes...
"We all know that the good guy ending from Infamous 2 is that Cole kills the beast and all other conduits by using the RFI."
I was not aware of this.
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Sorry, sir, but the cold hard truth is...this story is kinda suckish. The color coding practically earns you three strikes off the bat. If you need colors represent a certain speaker, then you're not doing your job as an author to help make things clear and concise. Second, if a fic does a good job of telling a story, the addition of a video should be unnecessary. That's another three strikes. Add together the abrupt POV changes and the grammar mistakes pointed out by our resident Grammar Hammer, and you've got yourself yet another three strikes.
That's three outs. You're done. Move along for the next inning. And hopefully, if you do play another inning, it won't be as...painful as this one.
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I can't stop staring at it...
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Well, he doesn't need it in the story itself, if it's needed then he can put it in the eescription.
I know I'm being random but...
Look out it is the most colorful Ninja in the multiverse Ninja Dashie
No offense but it is slightly out of character for Cole to be bragging so blatantly
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Cole was trying to get her ego down to size so bite me
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K I will fix that
1498908 Hey no need to be rude but i see your reasoning
Wait, you jumped a little. Where's chapter 2-3
can't wait intill next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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finally some one is giving some positive to this story
1664998 WHAT
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!how? this is a really great story i love it
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thanks and from here on in thing will get better their maybe even under standing standing Pinkie Pie
1665445 good luck with Pinkie Pie? you WILL need it
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I know I will because I barely under stand what goes on in her head well that is better the most of the cast any way
1665550 good point. quick quastion? on infamous 1 and 2 wich side do you like. good or evil?
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Good for both my at the choosing for Ice or fire in 2 me being a cold lover picked ice
1665592 nice. same here
1665604 you play Infamous?
of corse. i have both infamous games.and i love them both to death.i am on another playthorough on infamous 1
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Good man have you found all the blast shard in both games?
1665639 see here's the thing. my ps3 harddrive crashed. so i had to get it replaced. so i had to do it all over aging getting data and trophies.BUT on the playthorough on 1 i got over 50% AND i am not done with the main story. after that i will do 2 and hopefully i find all the bastshards in that game. so no i haven't found all of the bastshards. what about you. did you find all of the bastshards in 1 and 2.
1665722 I found all but one in the first game and in the second game I found them all
excellent. just excellent. i love it
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thanks I'm trying to keep the love and tolerate Idea going threw it so that is why I had Cole try and talk Alden out of his rage.
1666346 cool. can't wait for more
can't.wait.till.next.update!!!!!story.so.awesome!!!!!!
love it. awesome story.
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I try to make this story as good as I can
1696141and your doing a wonderful up.keep at it
Revert back to true hero Cole.
THAT was a mistake!
Have Twilight deal with his little 'I am evil' problem and revert him to hero
good hero cole.with princess celastias help.and awesome chapter as always.
awwwwwwwwwwwww maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan.
i was hoping for evil cole to win. BUT i chosen good.
oh well.awesome story my friend.
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must resist hugging applebloom to stop her crying it's too sad it's as bad as fluttercry
1716424 sorry man.my bad
YOU GOT THE BLADES IN!!! OMG YOU FINALLY GOT THEM IN plus you get them in the first and you can make them stronger but requires XP from beating up enemy's so... he got the XP from the changlings hurray
awesome.just awesome
i choose E.cole should help rainbow dash.in a way or 2
Okay so what are the problems he needs to help? Also NEVER PINKIE!!!! she could have cloraform or however you spell it... i say d and see gets sucked into equestria by a new more powerfully conduit then the beast and for some strange reason looks like Cole again... (spoiler don't read tiny line if you don't want to read what i think should happen!)future pony Cole goes back in time and brings Zee back so he can have some fun with him and have a close familier friend when he needs it and challenges Cole for see and aldin helps younger cole (end of spoiler)
D. trish
Okay...wow... i didn't think you would take my idea... i guess I'm happy maybe? I'm not sure how to react
loving this awesome.keep at my friend. have some
also its time for the “The Brotherhood tournament”. i cant wait intill zeke to say cashola.it's going to be awesome.
it dousent suck.but when you put that hole brother speech.
BEATIFUL just BEATIFUL. you made my day my friend.
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glad I could be helpfull
1778551you are welcome my friend.and i can't wait for zeke to use his gun when cole or his self get into trouble. that gonna ROCK.
Well i didn't give much info in my wanting to happen... a little shortfall but still... I'm honorees you choose my version ... yes i splayed the game and i am surprised Zeke even survived it all... the gangs, keslar blasting him, the beast, sometimes even you, Alden, and others
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ya I think Zeke might need therapy for all the stuff that he has gone threw