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Kassaz


I prolifically produce prurient pregnant pony prose, previously per Pregchan, presently preferring here and there. I'm currently commissionable.

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Crotch sniffing has become a problem in Ponyville lately, with the arrival of Equestria's only human, such a problem that mares charged with it are sentenced to Crotch Sniffers Anonymous in the hopes they may change. Rarity, there for her first offense, meets a Ms. Mare.

This story is written for the crotch sniffing thread in /mlp/.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 13 )

Loved it, now make a sequel *pulls out gun* this isn't a threat I promise (lies)

OK... I'm interested, I want more of this

It was a pretty funny first chapter although a little short, I give three stars to the first chapter, an entertaining chapter ⭐⭐⭐

I look forward to the next chapters!

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I'm very glad you liked it so far. I'm going to try to update daily from now on, but don't hold me to that.


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Tomorrow's chapter will end up shorter, but from then on I'm going to try to have at least one thousand words per chapter. We'll see how well I keep to this.

Well... what to say? a fairly short chapter that doesn't offer much, I think it would have been better to combine it with a next chapter, but it is not my work and it is just an opinion.

Another thing I want to mention is the fact that it seems to be a RGRE story Rarity keeps calling the other females "darling" and considering that in this theme the gender roles are supposed to be reversed (as I understand) it shouldn't be very It's typical for a female to call another female darling, I think the treatment would be more like between "gentlemen" but it's just my idea (It goes without saying that everyone has their creative freedom to do things as they see fit).

Anyway, I want to see what the two of them are up to, I really don't have an idea.

I give chapter two... one star ⭐

It's not that it's bad, I just don't see that much can be taken from this chapter to give it more stars.

>Narcotics tag
kek

I see ... So this is the direction that this story is going for...

*-Mutahar Laugh dot mp4-*

I never thought I’d be so intrigued with a story about crotch sniffers trying to cope with their crimes by doing what? MORE. It’s freaking hilarious and I hope to see more of this lol

Holy wow, this is extremely hot, good job. The level of weird kink obsessiveness and not-quite fully explicit lighthearted comedy is very well balanced. Cute mares.

Did anypony point out sentencing Anonymous-Crotch sniffers to Crotch Sniffers Anonymous? It feels like they had to invent the organization afterwards, and maybe that was a loaded choice of name...

God... those mares are sick

All joking aside, it's a bit disturbing to put yourself in Anon's shoes, even worse when you consider the possibility that Celestia actually consented to such dealings on Twilight's part... it might as well have been more of an impetus for him to go live alone. .

I give three stars to chapter three ⭐⭐⭐

An entertaining chapter, I hope to see more soon!

Fuckin' Loved reading this chapter. Needless to say I'm infatuated with the situation these two mares got themselves in and I'm very excited to see what Chapter Four has to offer next.

There isn't a porn tag so...

Oh Rarity :facehoof:

What? Not even a phone call and getting bailed out by one of her friends?

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