Apple Seed

Applejack gives her son a tour of Sweet Apple Acres, and thinks about the kind of pony he'll grow up to be.

This story was written for the second A Thousand Words Contest.

The cover art is by Graphene.

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i_am_the_jam

i_am_the_jam #1 · Jul 30th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Who's the father?

bahatumay

bahatumay #2 · Jul 30th, 2023 · 2 · ·

Not even born and already he has a connection with the trees. He'll do just fine.

zx29b

zx29b #3 · Aug 17th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Trivia: "Apple Seed" was Apple Bloom's original name, and she appeared as such in the 2009 Official Show Bible.

Bicyclette

Bicyclette #4 · Sep 18th, 2023 · 1 · ·

“Mama once told me she put me against a tree, and I kicked an apple down for her. Now, the interestin’ thing is I wasn’t born yet. I wonder if yew can do the same for us.”

that’s definitely a very Apple Family thing.

thank you for writing!

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #5 · Sep 18th, 2023 · 1 · ·

There’s some unfortunate timing here, since I read an AJ x Anon entrant shortly before this one and I have to keep telling myself that 4chan isn’t the father.

… but instead thoughts about facing Nightmare Moon, dragons, and most recently Discord flashed through her mind without end.

Woe betide the changelings who dare challenge an eleven-month-pregnant Applejack at the royal wedding…

The bit at the end was quite cute. I can definitely see it as a tradition among mothers in the Apple family.

In all, a lovely little tale that is, appropriately enough, straining at its confines. There’s a lot more to tell here than you could fit in. Still, thank you for it.

cheshcat2

cheshcat2 #6 · Dec 15th, 2023 · 1 · ·

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I think that's suppose to be up to the reader.

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