i write stories sometimes. your resident lightning dust apologist
Flurry Heart tries to warn her father of the impending apocalypse. Shining Armor thinks his daughter has a lovely imagination.
My first attempt at writing a comedic(ish) story! Do be gentle haha. This is an entry into the Shining Armor is a Terrible Dad Competition! I don’t think there’s a worse thing a dad can do than cheerfully ignore the apocalypse, do you?
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delightful
also, lmao
This was pretty funny for your first attempt at comedy.
Delightfully goofy :D
Uhm, I think the idea is good, but the grammar is awful. It hurt and was confusing to read. However, you only get better through effort and positive criticism.
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thanks for the criticism! i’ll work on getting better in the future!
Great story!
I enjoyed reading it.
Have a picture of Flurry Heart in armor:
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Source.
It was kinda hard to tell; was she just LARPing?
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Mates, we found an IRL shining
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No, seriously. The ending made me question if the whole thing was just a LARP for her like her father thought. Why would the remnants of Sombra or some equivalent dark entity/force be cowed by a unicorn significantly weaker than Sombra commanding the dark entity's Alicorn Amulet-wearing-Alicorn host to stop as a father to his daughter?