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Aether Spark


I'm a highly imaginative and clever storymaker with a great imagination and desire to make great stories, I'm very dedicated to my stories and will always do my best to finish them. :)

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Twilight woke up feeling exhausted and aching.

As she wakes she comes to find Spike acting weird, and her friends, and all of Ponville, now she must discover what happened last night and hurry before Ponyville falls apart.

And not succumb to whatever this is in the process...

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SANAITY, IS FOR THE WEAK! (it's a Warhammer ref.)

For the bit with Pinkie Pie... some fanfics deserves to fade into the void.

Where does Rainbow keep finding all that junk to throw? And it would ALL have to be enchanted with pegasus magic no to fall through the clouds!

we need to find Zecora, she’s uninfected,” Discord said.

How does Discord know?

“She can fix this…”

See above.

If all the ponies are insane...
Then what about the pets?

Fluttershy's animals?
Angel?
Tank?
Owlowcious.
Opal.
Winona.
Gummy.

And if Starlight is insane... is she acting exactly like her old self... and she leapt head first to the OPPOSITE extreme, turning everypony she can find into Twice As Fancy ponies?

Is Trixie acting meek, mistakes Twilight for her mother, and acting super clingy, "Dog leave me like daddy!"
"And suddenly everything makes sense."

Very nice touch with fluttershy assuming roles of various animals! A real wild card this one. Mind alteration with a pinch of pet play is right up my alley.

Here's hoping we'll stumble upon some more interactions with her. Amusing work!

Salute!

Twilight turned to the book and wondered if there was a solution,

WHAT BOOK? I don't think Zecora would have one book in her entire house. Sorry. This is a bit jarring for me. Sorry.

This was nice. I think this could work as a episode.

Aww shucks... You butchered it! Fluttershy kink has gone rather repetitive. Damn you, fan service! You're supposed to work for me! Not against me!

Thanks for the show. Truth be told, there are not so many stories that involve things getting out of hand, be it for comedic purposes or grotesque ones. Seeing it all devolve could be a nice setup for a series of one-offs.

Here's a pitch.

Discord is bored, right? Afterall, he's not allowed to be his cool chaotic self anymore. All because of some dumb goody princess constantly keeping a close eye on him.

For you see...
When something smells...
Its always discord who's being at fault.

But wait. Maybe instead of unleashing chaos all at once (like he always does), Discord begins doing it with a lil' more... Pizzazz?

How do you fix a smoker? Why, apply some nicotine bandages, of course! Chaos is addictive but perhaps doing it on a much smaller scale can finally satisfy Discord's urgers to go baroque?

With each snap discord would plant his seeds of wisdom waiting to blossom.

Things like...

Changing twilight's eating habits.

Or influencing spike's lifestyle by making him walk on all fours.

Without raising suspicion. Discord will slowly keep altering the mundane life of the forever unsuspecting residents of Ponyville. Warping their minds, things around them, one by one untill the whole town goes KA-BOOM!

And since it's a slow process, it'll take long before Celestia finds a true culprit behind all these small adjustments. And that's a big IF since she's also be getting her adjustments to follow shortly.

After everyone else's.

Celestia is left for dessert, you see.
Like a cherry on top of a perfect sundae.

So, lke an addict, discord would keep popping social cues in and out of existence, breaking one norm after another. Always eager for piling more notes atop of his symphony of madness. Never satisfied with cutting one life's strings, replaced only by a hollow essence of despair keeping it afloat.

Now that's something I'd dig my peepers into.

Maybe I'll write something like that...

Bro this story is wild, but in a good way, Nice story!

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