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Wow.
Just. Wow.
That was...something. I give this story a 10/10 for such creativity, but the necrophilia part did catch me off guard thought haha
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I must have strayed seriously far from my origins if the mere mention of necrophilia is catching people off guard now
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Oh I apologize if my comment was rude sir/ma'am. It's just that with all the sex stories I've read on here, none of them had necrophilia in it, and it wasn't too strange, it was just surprising is all. I didn't mean to sound rude at all. I love your stories, especially the Sunset Shimmer ones
I read this eight-ten times over the weekend. Unbelievably hot and well-written. The tension ratcheting up, the roulette, Starlight's point of view as it spirals out of her control, and ending on some necro. Just fucking perfect. :D Honestly, I'd commission a sequel if possible. Got an idea in mind, too.
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I'd be open to continuing this, if you wanted to commission it. You know where to find me :)
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I was just teasing, you're good bro
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Oh my apologies haha. Anyway I want to say keep up the work hon. I love your stories : D
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Pardon me for being thick, but is sending you a DM here all right?
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Or on Discord, I'm lewdchapter on there
Okay, time to do a review. I like this story. I like it a lot. It just hits that perfect balance of genuine depravity and fun casualness that i think really embodies the the theme of the contest. Plus, it's a hot read. I noticed like one typo, which is minor but I noticed it so I had to bring it up. Overall, an outstanding story.
Points docked for teasing me with necrophilia and not following through though.
Well that was fucked up, yet startlingly hot. And well written, too!