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Comments ( 12 )

Wow.
Just. Wow.

That was...something. I give this story a 10/10 for such creativity, but the necrophilia part did catch me off guard thought haha

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I must have strayed seriously far from my origins if the mere mention of necrophilia is catching people off guard now

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Oh I apologize if my comment was rude sir/ma'am. It's just that with all the sex stories I've read on here, none of them had necrophilia in it, and it wasn't too strange, it was just surprising is all. I didn't mean to sound rude at all. I love your stories, especially the Sunset Shimmer ones

I read this eight-ten times over the weekend. Unbelievably hot and well-written. The tension ratcheting up, the roulette, Starlight's point of view as it spirals out of her control, and ending on some necro. Just fucking perfect. :D Honestly, I'd commission a sequel if possible. Got an idea in mind, too.

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I'd be open to continuing this, if you wanted to commission it. You know where to find me :)

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I was just teasing, you're good bro

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Oh my apologies haha. Anyway I want to say keep up the work hon. I love your stories : D

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Pardon me for being thick, but is sending you a DM here all right?

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Or on Discord, I'm lewdchapter on there

Okay, time to do a review. I like this story. I like it a lot. It just hits that perfect balance of genuine depravity and fun casualness that i think really embodies the the theme of the contest. Plus, it's a hot read. I noticed like one typo, which is minor but I noticed it so I had to bring it up. Overall, an outstanding story.

Points docked for teasing me with necrophilia and not following through though.:derpytongue2:

Well that was fucked up, yet startlingly hot. And well written, too!

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