Can't Invite You Anywhere

When Pinkie Pie misses Twilight's Hearth's Warming party to investigate her twitchy tail, Twilight ignores every one of her own defense mechanisms and investigates with her.

_{Merry Jinglemas, Hyper Star!}

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new55

new55 #1 · Dec 26th, 2023 · 4 · 1 ·

That was a good story.

Miller Minus

Miller Minus #2 · Dec 26th, 2023 · 3 · 1 ·

11783757
This is a good comment.

Fuzzee

Fuzzee #3 · Dec 26th, 2023 · 3 · 1 ·

That was so cute! Keep it up

Hyper Star

Hyper Star #4 · Dec 27th, 2023 · 1 · ·

…And Rarity was sprawled on the couch, wearing a red-and-white-striped Hearth’s Warming sweater that Applejack had savaged her for during the entire party from the moment she walked in. ( Gee, Rarity. If you’d warned me that candy canes were in fashion, I’d’ve painted white stripes on my barn! ) Applejack was now wearing a white-and-red sweater—the inverted version of Rarity’s—a gift she’d received from a ‘secret admirer’. Applejack was also asleep on the couch, wrapped in Rarity’s arms.

Rarijack?! If so, heck yeah!

“I’m going out for a bit,” she announced to the room. The response was a few mumbles, a loud snore from Applejack, and a honk-shoo-mimimi from Rarity.

Honestly, it would be easier and clearer to just say that Rarity snored as well

“You two have fun!” Mrs. Cake announced. And then she trotted off, mumbling something about how she just loved spending her Hearth’s Warming Day as a courier for Pinkie Pie’s nonsense .

Well, Mrs. Cake, you're being salty today

Pinkie’s mouth fell open, and a tiny, tinny version of Twilight’s voice came out of it.

... I did not need that...

“And that’s when I realized I was gay!”

Oh! Definitely not beating around the bush here

“I know!” Pinkie blurted. “Much blood was shed that day.”

Can I hear that story?

The Stargazer XL Swivel-Shot MK III

Sounds like a gun

“Don’t you realize?” Pinkie said in awe. “The stars really did fall. They fell for me .”

That is... IT'S SO FRICKIN' CLICHÈ buuuut ADORABLE

as the clock in the library showed midnight, they ended their Hearth’s Warming day the same way Pinkie and Twilight would end most of their days from then on—holding onto each other for dear life.

That, that is an amazing ending.

Some of my words might have felt passive aggressive, but I truly did enjoy the story, it's cute. But... the rating is a little ruined due to the "voice recorder" part. This gets a GOOD from me!

Miller Minus

Miller Minus #5 · Dec 27th, 2023 · · ·

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed.

... I did not need that...

Forgive me, but I should ask what you're picturing here? The idea is that Pinkie is acting as a speaker that's playing a fake conversation. I don't see how that's inappropriate?

Hyper Star

Hyper Star #6 · Dec 28th, 2023 · · ·

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I am picturing exactly what you say it is, it's not inappropriate just that it was very absurd and over the top and it caught me off-guard.

Miller Minus

Miller Minus #7 · Dec 28th, 2023 · · ·

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Gotcha. thanks for clarifying.

The Iguana Man

The Iguana Man #8 · January 1st · 1 · ·

Applejack was also asleep on the couch, wrapped in Rarity’s arms.

Hooves, I think you mean.

Also, I fully expect that Pinkie set things up so that, after their telescopic greeting, Rainbow Dash would be at the bottom of the slope ready to catch the most important thing: the telescope. A decision I think Twilight would agree with.

Anyway, delightful bit of sillyness, thank you.

Miller Minus

Miller Minus #9 · January 1st · · ·

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Eh, I mean, I've seen "arm" used to describe the foreleg/forearm area of a horse inside and outside of fimfiction. But I've also seen a friendship come to an end over an argument about whether or not it's acceptable.

...on second thought, hooves is better.

Thanks for stopping by!

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