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Mockingbirb


A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)

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"Be creative!" Pinkamena Pie's new chess coach said.


This might be an entrant in "'the dobermans' 2023 Cozy Glow Short Story Contest."
(A Note to Contest Judges: contest prompts include...
* Cozy Glow vs ... (Pinkamena Pie) [chapter 1]
* Of all things, it was love that Cozy needed. [chapter 2]
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Chapters (2)
Comments ( 21 )

"Oh," the librarian said. "You got your cutie mark when you vowed murderous revenge. This is very bad. This is very bad indeed."

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Well i got some talking to do to her

everypony gangsta until somepony plays the Nakhmanson Gamit

"OKAY!" Pinkie agreed exuberantly. "THIS IS HOW I NORMALLY SHOUT!"

This is gold.

jmj

Fun story.

Comment posted by TwistedSpring deleted Sep 9th, 2023

Oh hey there's also some horrors.

So Pinkie basically did what the Italians did on Earth (although she still seems to have castled out of check, not to mention that castling had a few different versions at first).

I guess at least one of the rule got somewhat rewinded to before Pinkie happened: In the current version of chess, you can't castle out, into, or across a check.

The two parts don't really seem to belong in one story, but I'm loving this anyway.

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Pinkie: *Makes her move* :pinkiehappy:
Cozy Glow: Holy hell!

wait why is cozy in a wheelchair did something happened to her when she come to the human world?

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I'm guessing undoing the petrification this way didn't return her ability to move.

11689862 that makes sense thanks

Delightful tale of Pinkie learning how to Pinkie... and Cozy failing to escape the grip of karma. Thank you for both.

she'd be in a world with no magic! Instead of a magically petrified pegasus, she would be an ordinary, unpetrified girl of flesh and blood!

... Well, I'll give you points for creative ideas ...

When I first saw "Pinkie isn't allowed to play chess anymore", and "Pinkie got creative", I was thinking you had Chat GPT write her moves.

I think this is better.

Yeash now she gets to age as a vegetable instead of a rock

Wait, I just realised. It's you. Oh, my.

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