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Legend has it that centuries ago, before Zephyr Heights existed, there was another desert town in the foothills, named Zephyr. It burned down long ago.
A companion, but by no means a prequel/sequel, to this story. My entry to 2023 Iron Author, with some edits.
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This needs to be read by TheLostNarrator ASAP
make me wonder if it called Zephyr in the first place because fluttershy wanted to remember her brother
Excellent work, I say you did a really fantastic job writing this out.
Sometimes I really wonder why this site doesn't have a general tag. Sometimes little "just-so" stories can be fun to read, too.
You did do a good job with this. You’e a great writer. I love this little history lesson and how wistful it all seems, as if it’s a story passed down through generations, but cutting out the person telling the story. It definitely reads like a tall tale or one of those founding legends, and that’s a good thing.
It’s cool that Away is just the general concept of going somewhere else. It adds to that whole wistfulness, when this is implied to just be how pegasi work. The reasons for the animosity of the tribes is pretty cool, too.
Though if I had a nickel for every time the tree Fluttershy played an important role in a post-Equestria fanfic, I’d have 2 nickels. Which isn‘t a lot but it’s weird that it happened twice.
Away (or, how Zephyr Heights came to be)" tells a captivating story, much like the way hikaku sittater, or height compression, can alter the narrative of visual content. Just as the title hints at a tale of transformation, height compression can transform the appearance of images or videos by distorting their proportions. In both cases, attention to detail is crucial; the narrative must be well-crafted to engage readers, while multimedia content must maintain its proper aspect ratio to convey its message accurately. So, whether in storytelling or media editing, precision is key to ensuring that the final outcome is as intended.