It's been a bad day. Posey grumbles over her seemingly cursed fate. Why does nopony seem to understand it? A pony approaches with an open ear and heart.
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David Silver
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Nice fluffy read, though I gotta ask; was this intentionally marked as Incomplete?
I really like the story! If this is the first chapter and not just a stand alone story then I can’t wait for the next chapter!
The picture reminds me of one of my stories, i'll say that right now.. The synopsis, (And, by extension the storyline) however, is completely different, though.
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Marked as completed.
This is wonderful.
It's an interesting point that Maretime Bay more or less doesn't have a police force these days, even when it technically has a larger amount of problems than it did in the first place.
But at any rate, the conversation with Posey and Fluttershy was cute, tender, and well written.
Interesting in a meta sense, too, given that at one point, they were almost going to be the same character. 
Fluttershy as Posey's "spirit guide" is an interesting idea, and I'm surprised that this is the first time I have ever seen it.
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I won't call dibs on the concept, that was the patron's. I just took it and ran with it. My heart could feel the validity in the idea and I rushed with fingers pounding the keys to share the idea with the rest of you, heaving and panting with the giddy rush of a story that had to be told. It felt... right to me.
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Kudos to the patron for coming up with the idea, and you for running with it.
I'm glad you had fun writing it, and it seems like your muse was quite satisfied as well.
sometimes all we need is a little kindness
What a sweet portrait to help us understand a rather put- upon mare.
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Just this sweet small change.