This was good.

Really good.

Sad sprout wasn't part of this!! He needs some attention

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Thanks! Sprout probably 'sprouted' in the background. If you know what I mean. Probably made many a mare very happy.

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Imagine sprout gets brought in and has a go with at least some of the mares, though definitely Sunny. Of course I'm sure all that wild earth pony magic will also lead to Sprout being reminded who's REALLY in charge

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Id love to see that. With him getting with other mares. Not the ones in this story specifically

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Yes indeed.

>no smol pipp, no Zipp

You have disappointed me.

The GOAT returns, with another clopfic that's comfortably too long to fit in the comments!

This is exactly the sort of G5 story society needs more of. Same funny characterization, same cute canon poners, but drenched in enough porno logic to satiate a filly's first heat. C'mon, people! G4 has over a decade of debauched smutfics to peruse -- the Mane Five deserve nothing less!

You captured the characters brilliantly. I liked Izzy especially, which surprised me, since it's easy to slip into writing her as Pinkie Pie-lite. Also, the entire scene with Misty was hilarious. Gotta love how even in the throes of rut, Hitch's super smart slut sniffer is incapable of penetrating the mastery of Misty's disguises. I kinda wish she'd shown up a bit earlier throughout the story, but I get she was a recent addition.

This fic also has the distinction of being the first one where Misty gets stallion-stuffed, which has gotta count for something! Opaline doesn't deserve her.

One random worldbuilding thought I had - given the overwhelming virility of the stallions in your universe, even without earth pony magic or ZESPER or quantahol or miscellaneous unicorn enhancements - why is it that Equestria isn't completely overridden by ponykind? It feels like there's gotta be some mechanism to slow population growth, but I for one can't think what it is.

Delightful work, especially in capturing all of the messy biological details that other fics might gloss over. Thank you for not just good porn, but also a quality story. G5 getting more love—especially Misty—is always a good thing.

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Predatory birds.

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Seriously though, thank you so much for the comment. Means a lot.

It is cool to get the first Misty-stallion fic on the site. Unfortunately I'm pretty convinced we'll never see anything like to what we had in the previous generation.

I just am glad you think I characterized them well-enough. I have to admit I've only watched select episodes of TYT and MYM, and have been relying on those and the greater memeology for what I created.

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Thank you very much!

Lovely work. I just want to say, I love that you're one of the few *good* writers on this platform that does cum inflation. I just wish we spent a bit of time with those bellies and the mares' reactions to them, before moving on to the next one. Filling is great, but we need some rubs, cuddles, and shocked expressions.

Always nice to see a new story from ya

Ooh new fic! It's been a while

Can wait to see Zipp and Pip with Hitch's foals next, pretty sure Zipp would be helping him a lot as she would probably be the most motherly of the bunch. Sprout needs his mommy!

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Yes, sprout does

Oh boy~ love the sequel bate

The Legend has (once again) returned with yet another great entry!
Hopefully this encourages people to give more love to G5.

But did Hitch ever get to relieve his bladder before cumming?

Great story! Good to see ya again!

🐐

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This is where Sprout and them would be good. Two princess sisters mindbreaking into doing it with maretimebay's biggest loser.

Maybe have him and Hitch fight as they cant get control of the new testosterone boost. Sprout loses and gets sloppy seconds or just pipp cause shes short, pudgy, and not the virgin of the two?

I can't help but imagine Zipp using Hitch as rocket-assisted takeoff. Like one of those old water bottle rockets, just stuck on the end until the pressure finally forces hernoff andnshe goes shooting into the sky with a creamy white stream of 'exhaust' behind her.

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Yeah. That'd be a good idea.

Him getting some love would be nice

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That sounds more like PEAT than JATO

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Yeah, she is rather lithe.

You’d have to be a bit of a perv to try to corrupt something clearly meant for foals with sex and eroticism.

I mean, there is already a monument to my (and our) sins in this website, so...

I'm strangely impressed to see an impregnation-fetish story acknowledge how much trouble it would actually be to deal with so many children at once.

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It's always disappointing to see them cut off at water breaking or just the deed, even.

Only needs three things:
- Some oral action for variety.
- Pipp.
- Zipp.

Okay, I guess one more thing: In a story with one stallion and three mares, it’s a little disappointing that it’s pretty much just one at a time. It would have been super-hot to have the other mares helping their friends and being more involved. Like helping push Hitch in, or licking his balls, or licking each other. And maybe something like a big oral orgy at the end, where all the cum-drunk mares work together to suck him off and earn themselves a white shower…

Still, though, really hot. And a great story premise. The ghost of Big Mac would be proud.

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Thanks man, yeah I opted for something a little more simple on this go-round. I've done the orgy-tastic stuff before, but wanted to keep it a little tighter as my clop-scenes tend to over-extend.

Next time.

I pray there's a sequel.

With sprout in it at some point

I'll commission one if I have to

This was quite a funny story and Hitch should really know better than to think his mares are not interested in a repeat. Although it would be wise to limit it a bit more next time.

Sunny had used Hitch’s noble self-sacrificing experiments with the powerful, ancient, thaumaturgical force to devise sufficient countermeasures and suppressants to prevent all the other earth-ponies from suffering a similar fate to Sheriff Hitch…

Good, I was already worried about that...

“Yeah, he is a great stallion.” Izzy sighed nodding, before giving a noogie to Misty. “But I think all three of us can agree that we miss that big, fat, COCK.”
“Izzy!” Both Misty and Sunny squeaked at the same time.

They may scream out, but they don't deny it, do they?

Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

🧩🐺🐉Loved the story, but I agree with some of the other comments, there needs to be Zipp and Pipp. Maybe a sequel, and maybe a birth seen, just a little suggestion.🧩🐺🐉