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Huh
This is something very interesting. Very special. I like it
Is hot. Me like.
Im going to like this story
Wow, talking about an attention-grabbing chapter! As always, you've outdone yourself Leech!
I haven't read this yet but is this like. The first fic we have of your oc? Cause that's pretty cool
A sucker for your wholesome fics leech! Can't wait for more
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I've written several with her, although it's easiest to consider them as separate timelines/universes
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Oh neat
You know when you're getting some serious stuff when artists use their most personal OCs as the protagonist of their stories. without canon characters involved, no less!
And it's about their love story without Anon this time, what a breath of fresh air~
Good luck on the tale!
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Stay tuned
Chapters 3 and 4 are going up this afternoon in about 4hr
nice to se some romance clop its a nice change of pace ever once in awhile
Man, what a great way to open a story. I absolutely loved the first and second chapter, and I'm probably going to reread them before I start on the third and fourth. I'm not sure why, but I feel this story is different than any others I've read from you so far, and I am absolutely loving it!
Plus it's always nice to see your OC!
Honny came in and she caught me red handed, geting jiggy with the mare next door.
I personally wouldn't consider infidelity 'wholesome'.
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One knows they picked a winner when she says "Bitch, can't ask him with asking me too."
Been reading your stories for a while, love how you do different things. I love how the story is so wholesome and yet dirty at the same time lol
Man, I love this story so much! It just feels so different, so personal and connected than anything else I’ve read from you, and I loved every single second if it. I am an absolute hopeless romantic, so the fact that we see the sex scenes between two ponies who are filled with love and joy just by being around each other is so amazing. Leech is just perfect and witty and truly cares, while Light just has a heart of gold and a wonderful sense of love, and even if the two of them make mistakes with each other, just how they’re written so far, you can tell that this relationship will be solid and strong.
It’s not even finished yet, and I’m already so excited. I think I can confidently say this is one of the better stories I am reading on the site, and defintely my favorite one from you, Leech. Keep up the good work!!
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Glad someone said it, as a smut writer who also writes cheating themes...definitely should put a tag for infidelity my friend. Just in case!
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It'll make sense...
Cheating on your partner has never been this wholesome
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Wow. I can’t believe it’s over already!
I absolutely loved this story! At first I wondered if they would ever acknowledge that they were the same fillies they met at the bridge, but I’m so happy they did! It truly was fate that brought them together, and seeing just how happy they are is just…ughhhh its so perfect!!
The romance and the sex and the little but real life challenges they were having was written so well, and it never felt like it was just porn, even if they were getting steamy in the second chapter. The sex was well written and very hot, but it just adds to it knowing it wasn’t just lust, it was love and passion! God I sound like a broken record but still!
I can genuinely say, this is the best story you have written so far, 100% certain. Everything flowed correctly, the characters were just perfect in every way and written so well, and the hopeless romantic in me was very satisfied with their relationship and soon to be parenthood.
100/10, excellent job Leech!
Do I hear a part 2 😲
Oh fuck this can only go 1 of 2 ways lol
“I’ll never leave you again…”
I've been waiting since the prologue to read those words. Beautiful story!
I never thought a smut story would move me this much The romance was blended in so beautifully, you could feel the passion and pure adoration these two felt for each other! It had me kicking my feet and giggling
I have been reading your stories for a few years and it's amazing how good you have gotten, this story is short but forfilling which feels harder since you only have so much to tie everything together and make it feel right.
The lewd scenes were good and ingaging,the main character were fun to read interacting, the moments of tension were just right to give us some worry for the characters without it feeling like it was forced to get a reaction and the amount of depth that you put into the world in terms of the characters struggle was good and made thing feel more grounded/relatable.
Thank you for the great story and I hope you have a good future.
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Comments like y'all's are what fuel the fires that keep me going.
With the utmost sincerity, thank you.
This makes me happier than Mr Crabs with his Millionth dollar.
Aww shit man, happy endings always make me cry.
Thank you author for the best romantic pony clopfic I've ever read. This story made me cry 😭.
Dog gone! I am truly blown away by this lovely romantic fic!
Oh, and all of you people out there, this isn't porn or mere clop. No, this is erotica, plain and simple. As a writer of such, I knew exactly the kind of romantic story this was. Still, I was blown away by the ending twist.
Thank you very gladly for this inspiring tale. I have always found your OC engaging and cute, even sexy, but this went beyond. Far beyond.
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Glad y'all enjoyed it
I hope those two assholes are never able to get a good night's sleep after what they did.
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Really enjoyed this one! Great job!
Man, this is truly heartbreaking. I wonder if she'll ever see that blanket again?
I always love when Leech finds someone who reciprocates her affection... Well, "wholesomely", at least. She deserves it
Man, fuck Tidbit and the consequences. These two were made for each other.
That's a happily ever after if I ever saw one
Leech is the only writer I know who can add their personal OC to a story and still make it an actual story. Other writers make it it obvious that they’re just writing down and posting a self-fulfillment fanfic.
I mean… Leech is probably doing the same thing, but they do it in a way where it’s not obvious. In fact, Leech’s OC is always getting abused in her stories. Again, it probably is Leech’s personal kink considering how often it happens, but she writes the story in a way where it doesn’t feel like a self-fulfillment fanfic.
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> self-fulfillment
Or a coping mechanism
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We all cope down here. My poor humor aside, great work as always.
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So I finished reading this story a while ago, and I meant to reply to you saying it'll all make sense...it's still cheating? I mean just because the wife cheated on him first without him knowing, that doesn’t make it any less cheating on Light's part? I'm really glad other people enjoyed this story. In my personal opinion, the romance doesn't really land for me because the narrative seemed indecisive between romantizing a relationship techinically born from infidelity, and pushing the cheating under the rug entirely because of the plot point I mentioned in the spoilers.
To me, this story would've been a whole lot better if it leaned more into the dirtiness of cheating and owned it in a sexy way, or if it didn't include the cheating at all. Great stories from you otherwise, this one just wasn't my cup of tea.
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So he took after his uncle then? For a bit it was hard to confirm this was the same colt from before and that this was a significant timeskip, but that color set seems to have confirmed it.
This is what happens when there's no reciprocation.
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"it wasn't me."
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It only makes sense. They were supposed to run the bakery in tandem. There's only so much "sleeping alone at home" one can reasonably do....