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Very promising start to what seems to be an interesting story. I look forward to more.
Despite being a "pony", and defending a town from the Changelings. Luna already determines that he could be a possible "threat", despite being a hero!? Sheesh, who does she like she is, Batman!?
Buen inicio para la historia, el personaje diciendo que utiliza cuchillos me hizo acordar a kratos XD
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I’d say that’s a pretty normal government reaction, actually. “There are reports of this incredible soldier in action on our side that we have no file or other background information whatsoever on; it’s like he just suddenly popped fully-formed and -trained out of thin air!” “...find out more, I want to know what the hell is up with that.”
And that’s without yet taking into account that the nation was just attacked by shapeshifters pretty much the other day and Chipped Shield could well turn out to simply be another one of them acting as he did while pretending to be a pony for who knows what reason. Luna has every cause to be suspicious, I think.
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That's called a normal reaction. They know nothing about this pony. Yes, he helped them, but as Luna said, he could also be a threat. They can't know that for sure until they get to the bottom of it.
Plus they just came off getting their asses handed to them, and Celestia let it happen. So of course, nopony is really thinking straight at the moment. See 11570667's comment to have it said better.
Nice little interlude and a hint a a backstory. Amazing work.
I am absolutely loving this so far. And I love the ongoing plot. The talks of Ancient Magic makes me suspicious of something like immortality but we'll see.
Huh, this may take a turn for the worse. But I love where this whole rise to power is going. And in one of my previous fics I've written. I too have made a sibling rivalry between the sisters. Though long story short, my human choose the seat made by Luna instead of Celestia's during the national meeting, making the sun princess jealous and Luna smirking about it.
But yeah, I want to see more of how this would develop. Hopefully you put in cool ancient weapons.
Missed opportunity it might have been but also a lengthy one you would need to deal with. Plus you know politics.
My boy, Chip, is like the pony version of a numenorean
Ok, this is interesting, and I see what you're doing, showing little slices of different sides and locations to set-up the world. It reads a little disjointed, But I think it'll be good when the threads you're setting up start to come together.
Cant wait till things come together.
Wonder whats in the tomb? Whatever it is will probably piss the mc off.
That was an awesome chapter.
Loving it
Forgot the quote here
Celestia's face contorted in shock*
You are not really good at writing emotions hmn?
And the horse like sound is called a snort
You know, the word He exists for a reason, stop writing his name so much we know he's Chip, no need to remind us three times every paragraph
Something like this?
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Dp is short for what again?
Chrysalis is little more than a monster
Somewhat unnecessary to divide this
Gods? As in actual ones and not pony princesses that can be defeated by a random creature?
The vault*
Another awesome chapter.
Hmm, so he has a chance of eventually coming back every time he is killed.
I wonder if he can fly. He has a bandaged wing, but doesn't seem to be too annoyed at being grounded. I'd assume a human-turned pony would be less likely to be naturally good at flying, but the suggestion that he is stuck in a cycle of constantly being reborn (isekai'd) might mean he's had multiple lifetimes to get used to that body.
Also, what does "DP" mean?
Hmm, the original body of an isekai'd human? At least Chrysalis gave him something to do instead of punishing him for interrupting her.
Reading the story not sure what is going one really at the moment. Still wish you luck dude.
Ok, I must have missed it somewhere. What is a DP?
Very glad to see an update of this! Very interesting chapter. Thank you!
I'm confused
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The best kind of surprise!
New chapter for this?
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Yessirr, gotta smooth out some Jank but it's gonna be a good one.