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Nice
Could be a fun read, I wonder what tribe he is. Looking forward to see more of this.
Great start!
"A realistic down to earth story"
I love the description, cant wait to see the rest of this story
child barges into your orchard, eats your apples, says hes dying, refuses to elaborate
what a chad
Good start
Good chapter, interesting to see where this goes
Why would a hospital be the place to go looking for someone's parents? Other stories that do that have the oc injured and being treated so it makes some sense, but not here. The guard should be the place to go.
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The idea is the hospital would be the place to make sure he's uninjured or without scarring of any kind and a guard would likely be at a hospital. Also y'know, they are at a farm so kinda have to walk either way.
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Hospitals have an obligation to notify a child's guardians if one is brought it, if they can't find any in the child's files, the authorities are notified. She's just killing two birds with one stone.
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Would help if she gave that reason instead of just "taking you there to find your parents" Hospitals are there to treat the injured not find lost parents. Even if there is one there why go to the hospital and not directly to one?
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Yes, when you are being treated. Did I say otherwise. No, I said as much. My question was why bring him there when he isn't injured or described as such? Why not directly to the guard?
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Thing is he's still in a kid's body (a colt) he's the one initiating conversation with talk but she won't speak to him as an adult and telling him everything. And if you ask why would she tell him about finding his parents well, she is the element of honesty so- kind of her first response and probably thinks he won't be something part of her life. She's first and foremost caring for his safety and environment but other than that she has no obligations with telling him things so yeah.
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Element of honesty you say? Then why if she is taking him to the hospital to see if he might be injured she didn't say that along with trying to find his parents? Usually lying by omission is willing to let slide, but not for a pony your response makes a great deal to spout about how honest she is. Dude just admit you made a mistake. It's not that big of a deal and it's easy to fix. You doubling down here is only making you look bad.
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They're going to the hospital because a random kid is saying he's dying over and over and is showing clear mental issues. Sometimes you don't need to hear people say things in stories because you can read between the lines. Right now you're just acting especially asinine for no apparent reason other than to satisfy your urge to get a GERMAN level of social autism in the conversations of this fic.
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I'm not doubling down? I'm just trying to explain that the process is connected to the idea of worry and care for a hypothetical fictional kid. Like yeah I didn't explain it nearly enough and I had this chapter half finished but the idea was it's a kid that needs to make sure he gets proper care first, a hospital has records and proper procedures for things as such. Not the fact he's injured doesn't take away proper procedures to make sure the kid is all fine and dandy, you get exams and stuff to make sure everything is working fine.
Anyway yeah I didn't make it clear enough and I totally admit that, not trying to avoid it or anything, I'm simply trying to just put the light on it.
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>using a copy paste film vid from decades back as a comeback
Whatcha want me to do? Cry about it? Go back to reddit
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fair enough nice to see you finally admit it.
Interesting chapter
Nice to see an update on it again, still not much happening yet, but it's nice to see an update on it.
Yoooo!
Poor AppleJack!!!
Damb It!
Know I'm curious on what would happen 🤔