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Twilight finds a restricted forest fenced with wires outside Ponyville. When a guard chases her away, she's eager to find the answers for the mystery behind it.


Huge thanks to RB_ for prereading this fic!

Updated description part: This fic is inspired by SCP-2316 written by "djkaktus".

Now with a Russian Translation by NovemberDragon | [ponyfiction.org] [tabun.everypony.ru]

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Comments ( 22 )

Why isn't there a tragedy tag?

Freaky. Very freaky. Seriously nice grimdark story.

This could be a scp right
Creative and scary Just How i like.

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Scp 2316 is very similar in concept

You'd think Celestia would invest more than a wire fence and a hoof full of guards for something like this.

There's a reason why Warning signs are a thing, beyond being able to say "we told 'em not to."

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That the one about not recognizing the bodies in the water?

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You are correct but I need you reiterate you do not recognize the bodies in the water.

gapty #9 · 2 weeks ago · · ·

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Because me dummy and having tunnel vision focused on "I see mystery, now it's three blue tags". Fixed and thanks for pointing it out :twilightsheepish:

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I do not recognize the bodies in the water.

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But how will the story happen? :trixieshiftright:

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That sign can't stop me because I can't read!

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I̶ ̴d̶o̴ ̴n̷o̸t̵ ̴r̵e̵c̴o̸g̴n̵i̸z̵e̴ ̷t̴h̵e̷ ̸b̴o̷d̸i̸e̴s̶ ̸i̶n̵ ̶t̶h̷e̶ ̶w̶a̸t̸e̸r̷.̷

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Technically, everything paranormal can be an SCP :derpytongue2:

As others pointed out, the concept of repeating a phrase was indeed inspired by SCP-2316, but otherwise thanks for the comment :twilightsmile:

Edit: Actually, there are more similarities. I have updated the description to credit the inspiration :twilightsheepish:

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Thanks a lot for all the comments and the kind words :twilightsmile:

Huk
Huk #11 · 2 weeks ago · · ·

Very nice story. This needs more views :twilightsmile:!

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I do not recognize the bodies in the water.

Never seen them before in my life.

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At the time of the comment, only half a day after the publish has passed :trixieshiftright:

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Thanks a lot for all the nice comments! :twilightsmile:

This needs a sequel for sure—it's so great I can't get enought of it!

Cool to see SCP-inspired stuff, mostly people just look confused when I mention SCP. :ajsmug:

Holy cow! If you go in the forest you turn into one of them and can't leave because the guard sees no foals!

Remember: you do not recognise the foals in the water.

PLEASE REPEAT THE FOLLOWING PHRASE SLOWLY AND CLEARLY INTO YOUR TERMINAL MICROPHONE

I do not recognize the foals in the forest

VERIFICATION INCOMPLETE USER'S CRV IS BELOW ACCEPTABLE PARAMETERS, THE USER HAS BEEN INFLUENCED BY COGNITOHAZARDOUZ MATERIAL, PLEASE REMAIN SEATED WHILE FOUNDATION MEDICAL STAFF ARRIVE AT YOUR LOCATION

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