When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
Page generated in 0.038 seconds
Total duration
878 users online
170,860 hits today, 1,753,072 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Different question. Doesn’t the site have a rule against nsfw images? I know they get on peoples cases for showing them on covers. I liked this chapter! I hope their is going to be impregnation in this story. Thanks for the update!
11367128
I forgot about that. Seems an odd rule considering nsfw fanfics are a thing. Think I need to take it down
11367129
Seems like the safe thing to do.
Also how about rainbow dash to be inducted in the harem next? She could be used to introduce other mares like her to spike like the wonderbolts!
I just wonder what the other roots would do if the root of honestly can warp reality with saying yes to every yes/no question.
11367237
So I’ve been discussing this over at chyoa. These are ideas I’ve had so far.
Generosity: People would be willing to give him what or who out the kindness of their own hearts
Laughter: Sort of like normality, people just laugh off whatever someone does. If they grope that’s just Spike being Spike.
Kindness: Ponies have a tendency to be nice to Spike to absurd levels
Loyalty: Passive loyalty from those around him
Magic: Instantly become the master of all magics and spells
I say Spike here out of connivence but I’m probably going to make it a one power per pony deal so that Spike himself doesn’t just get his slaves fall onto his lap just by standing nearby
11367262
Kinda seems reasonable if Spike starts vying for power as Rarity fantasizes about he might try to find the other roots though.
11367373
True but I’m considering writing it so one pony per root applies. As a rule of the magic itself.
Redundant
Missing word
Capitalize
This makes it sound like she is talking about Spike's tits. Later paragraphs make it clear she means him bringing her to orgasm, so this should be rewritten.
But...child support isn't automatic, and she doesn't seem like she'd take him to court. None of the mares accidentally brainwashed by him would. Plus, Cadence is rich.
11633864
Oh I didn’t realise that. I suppose she’s speaking hyperbolically
I was looking forward to Spike's hybrid children ruling Equus after he was gone.
11791917
Just be patient