When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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Yup. This entire chapter is what I expected when time travel was brought into this story. Deus ex machina.
It was mentioned you had trouble figuring out where to put the female draconequus from the pole. Why not have them be discord`s alt from the mirror?
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Which mirror are you referring to in particular?
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Wait there was also the pool forgot that one... But no.
I'm talking about the alt human mirror with the spin off series.
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Would that have any reason to have a rule 63 discord? Then again I suppose he could be married in that world and have a daughter
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I'm assuming the OC were using here is Eris right? From the alt path on the cyoa. It's that usually she is used in place of discord, or like you said daughter.
Regardless I'm mostly mention it because human side has no discord to my knowledge, so ultimately you could fill in the blanks saying... there a legitimate genie in a lamp and that's why there a no show.
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Interesting idea, though I was thinking of creating a completely original OC for that role. But that OC could be human Discord's daughter, or a genie over there
Comma after so and asked.
I don't think colonize is the right word.
Raising the Sun, not just "it".
Hearth's Warming and comma before Master.
Settle. Present tense.
Wasn't the original capital of Equestria in the Everfree, not on the mountain?
Comma after you, period after youth.
Period at the end of a sentence.
Comma after so.
Hear him.
Question mark after here.
Period after power.
Comma after now and position.
Comma after face, not period.
Comma after body.
Comma after more, period after darling.
Rarity's breasts.
Comma after Equestria.
This doesn't quite line up with the previous sentence. That's what she IS, Rarity asked what she's DOING.
Didn't you earlier say that Celestia's tits weren't as big as they are in present day?
Comma, not period.
Comma after intelligent.
Question mark, not period.
Eye and comma after eye.
Comma after moaned.
Period, not comma.
Comma after now.
Comma after true.
Comma after future.
I feel like "asked skeptically" works better.
Period, not comma.
Diarch's.