When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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Comma before and after however.
Comma after Master.
Comma after bored.
Comma, not period.
For avoiding attention.
Comma after he and after wife.
Offered.
Comma after cock.
Comma after out.
Period after table and 'was' before with.
Comma after said.
Comma after me.
Comma after know.
Period, not comma.
Comma after giggled.
Should have been offended.
Comma after so.
Comma after well, period after woman.
Period, not comma.
Period after offer.
Period, not comma.
Posey, not 'she'. Previous sentence implies Fluttershy is doing this.
Grin.
Dress back over her breasts.
Fluttershy, however, did notice.
Comma after know and period after bathroom.
Not, really? Not to Fluttershy, at least.
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All fixed now, hope you enjoyed. With matter to that last point. That's true, but Posey doesn't know that
Pretty hot chapter! Love how much of a pervert Posey is.
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed
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"Comma after know and period after bathroom."
Incorrect. Comma after bathroom.
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Dialogue, when the speaker is attached after the line, ends with a comma if it would normally be a period.
Ex:
"Well, that just happened," he said.
He said, "Well, that just happened."
"Well," he said, "That just happened."
Additional examples:
"Well, that just happened." He shrugged. (if you want it that he shrugged after saying the line)
"Well, that just happened," he shrugged. (if you want it to be he said the line while shrugging)
"Well," he paused. "That just happened." (a noticeable pause between the two lines of dialogue, as if he had to think for a few moments)
He thought for a moment. "Well, that just happened." (Noticeable pause between the "thinking" and the line)
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Thanks I’ll keep that in mind for the future