When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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Those are both good ideas. I can’t say I can think of any alternative.
As a suggestion as for who gets one, we are in The Everfree Forest. Zecora somehow joining the situation could be fun.
the generosity one sounds like a unique one.
An alternate idea for the root of generosity:
Instead of the power's recepient being the source of its power, why not have them be the recepient. The first person to enter the root's cave will forever be entitled to its riches. Whenever they need something, be it material or even just a word of kindness, they will find it inside the cave. The wielder could also bestow an entry to another person at their discretion. Either by saying it directly, "I grant you an entry to the cave of generosity" or implying it "I think I saw what you need in that cave over there."
Examples:
- Sandbar wants the perfect gift for Yona to cebrate their anniversary, the cave gives him a yak-sized **ck and an unbreakable pelvis
- Rarity wants to show Spike he's still special to her, cave gives her a 12 pack of condoms
Spike could always move the cave to his closet, or the castle's basement, with a question. To make it more convenient. I'd also make him the wielder because it would give him access to holo-Rarity... then again, the cave can't grant anything he couldn't already gift himself with the root of honesty.
Root of Loyalty:
You have a straight forward idea but it feels somewhat vague.
How would one define loyalty?
The inability to lie or betray?
Complete fidelity in bed?
Forced proximity to the bound person?
An unexpleinable unpleasant sensation in the back of their mind that grows with prolonged separation?
All of the above?
i'd suggest branding all of the ponies within a certain loyalty circle. Could be a ring, like I've already suggested, could be an invisible magic handprint or whatever. From there on, the power's wielder could then apply rules to the entire loyalty circle at once.
You could nerf the power by making the branding process needing both party's consent.
I called them loyalty circles because if, for example, AJ finds the root I don't think she would want to break up her brother and Sugar Belle. I would assume she would put them in their own separate "circle".
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Really great idea for the root of genorisity, that may just be one that I’ll use.
I think Twilight should be the one to bet the power from Loyalty as it would allow her to continue to with her manipulation of the population by slowly going through the town and making people loyal to Spike.
As for the powers from Generosity I think it would be funny if it actually went to someone random not part of the mane 6 or the harem so far. Someone like Derpy or Sunset Shimmer, you could almost make a poll of it and have people vote from the non Mane 6 and members of the Harem to see who stumbles across the powers. You could then have it as the next goal of Cadance and Twilight to get this perosn into the harem next to bring the gift into the fold.