When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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Will I liked the questions twilight asked. I will say I didn’t like twilight modifying her body so that her breasts grew to stupidly large size. Their is a point where it stops being erotic and more off putting. Also I do hope their is a variety of body shapes for spikes harem.
To follow up variety is the spice of life after all. Maybe some in his harem are fit and even muscular and others are chubby. Morbidly obese however I find at least to me is a turn off.
I can see with her new confidence and powers of manipulation, Twilight sneakily adding extra things to her list to effect her friends and the town but won’t say them out loud and will just get Spike to ask is everything she wrote down on the list true. This then allows us/Spike to discover later what Twilight has written to change as the story continues.
Also limiting it to ponyville for now would be best.
If it helps, for the structure of Spike's new harem, besides Rarity as Queen, I can see Cadence as the Recruiter, Twilight the Manager and the one who alters a mares body to Spike's taste, Rainbow Dash and Applejack as the "educators, as in the ones who tell them how things work in the harem, and Pinkie Pie as the one who "welcomes" new members and organizes "events" for her master. Fluttershy and maybe Zecora could actually be the ones who "punishes" harem members who step out of bounds.
Princess Celestia and Luna could be ranked just beneath Rarity, equal to Cadence and Twilight but beyond that, I'm not sure what role they would have. Fleur, however, could be the one who dresses the harem members and maybe acting as Rarity's right hand mare.
Starlight, Sunset and Trixie could be the assistants to Twilight.
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That’s some really good ideas. Thanks.
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Thanks. I don't know who else you intend to join Spike's Harem but when it came to Gleaming Shield, I wasn't sure what role she would have besides being Cadence's main assistant.
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Mostly planning on playing it by ear. Seeing which candidates are the most appealing and listening to suggestions as we go.
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Gotcha. Sounds like a plan.
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Maybe twilight could also have sci twi and moon dancer as a brain trust or more assistants. Also pinkies entertainment could have maybe the dazzlings or Octavia and vinyl put on some sort of “show”. Also maybe fizzlepop and/or the wonderbolts could act as the harem guards? Or maybe even gleaming shield could have the role of security for the harem seeing as she was a guard captain?
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Those could be good ideas for them.
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These are also great ideas
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Also forgot to mention last night Fleur was suggested for the role of dressing harem members or acting as rarities assistant. Sassy saddles and coco pommel or even suri polomare could be suited or added to those roles as well. Not saying they displace fleur just saying they could be added to that role because you know thier job is designing clothes.
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Yeah that makes sense too.
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One last suggestion rara and maybe the shadowbolts from Crystal prep could also act as entertainment for spike. Also vignette could also act as rarities assistant a fitting role for her considering how she made mirror rarity her assistant.
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I’m definitely looking into potential EG options soon. Likely after Ponyville
We also need to get some of those non pony girls involved as well, Ember, Gabby, Skystar, Chrysalis and Caelano
Although mind you, this is just my preference, but I am really not into huge breasts or butts. Muscular is more my thing. Oversize chests just look wrong
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I won’t go into hyper breast territory but I can understand your viewpoint. But it is a large fetish for me
"“I didn’t write that last part,” Twilight noted with a smile of glee."
Spike never made Twilight aware of the changes, you think that would retcon it to BE part of the question, or Twilight remarking she ALREADY WAS turned on.
To add some surprise conflict in this story, I can imagine Chrysalis stumbling on one of the other Roots, and given the nature Changelings feed, Spike's changes to reality actually begin to increase her power exponentially, making her a creditable threat that Spike ends up having to play mental chess against as each pervy change to reality makes her MORE dangerous.