When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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Comma after day.
Comma after so.
When they arrived.
Comma after approached.
Not sure what word you meant, but pretty sure unflattering is not it.
Comma after home.
Comma after slaves.
Comma after so.
Comma after lightning.
I think you can just cut "soon".
Comma after wonderfully and comma after slut, not period. And Period after Master.
Comma after that.
I mean, she absolutely used some magic. She was just (sorta) subtle about it.
Period after fuck and comma after out.
Period after finger, not comma.
Same here.
Comma after smile, period after lips and comma after night.
Comma after pussy.
Comma after delicious.
Period after Mistress.
Period after gasped.
Comma after girls.
Comma after her.
Comma after want.
Daybreaker is part of the poll? How is she a background character?
The chapter is good by the way.
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By background character I mean any character who was below a certain number of votes in a poll. (So ten in this case) it originally just those characters in the background but I felt this was better for the sake of variety.
And technically since Daybreaker only appeared for a small part of one episode one could argue she’s a background character
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Thank you
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Thanks, fixed now
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