When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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Good chapter!
11791755
Thank you
New Commission Opportunity, with new options for sex scenes or Hatchlings to add to the story:
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/1030562/late-minute-commission-opportunity-new-options
Heh. Wow. Somebody doesn't like me.
Very nice work.
11791997
Do you mean the dislikes? That’s normally just some guy with a grudge against the story and everyone who comments in it
11792000
Thank you
11792299
Here a interesting idea that you can use at any point later down the line. Spike uses his special ability to make it that the erotic pony r63 version of Doctor Whooves or a original character that is similar to the concept into existence/becomes cannon within his world. Spike is a huge action sci-fi nerd and back when he was a bit younger he used to write his personal own action erotic sci-fi stories that features a sexy female protagonist goes on erotic adventures through time and space in her small spaceship/time machine that is "bigger on the inside" battle against sexy aliens. And she is a part of a advance race that have long form and mastered technologies that allows them to time travel and manipulate time by using sex (sex energy) as their main source that powered their technologies their race are call Time-Sluts and their culture/civilization revolves time and sex. The character could be a hyper busty erotic r62 version of Doctor Whooves that could goes by the Doctoress (or some other name if you want) and I imagine her behaving similar to both the early Tenth David Tennant Doctor and the Eleventh Matt Smith Doctor (kinda like this Derpibooru 1055759) while wearing clothes similar to something like this Derpibooru 1738260 or to what Luna is wearing in this pic here. She would also have her own version of the Sonic Screwdriver which she calls the the Sonic Vibrator (which is basically super advance multiple-purpose vibrator sex toy/tool with many other features and purposes that uses sonic to open or hack almost anything like hacking hardware like computers and other devices but it can also hack into living beings too by using sonic waves to stealthy hack a unaware individual to see and search through memory or even erase or alter part of them by using sonic waves to manipulate their target's orifices at a distance that would suddenly freeze the target in pleasure and finally climax in confusion when the Sonic Vibrator is done). Spike would unintentionally bring this character and her continuity into existence while doing something like Spike and Twilight was tidying up or moving things Twilight was going through Spike's old stuff and came across his old sci-fi writing materials Twilight would ask Spike about them. Seeing them would bring back Spike old memories of him writing stories and explains to Twilight that he is a huge sci-fi nerd and a very horny young adult that like to write smutty erotic action sci-fi fics and created this amazing sexy hyper busty slutty female protagonist that goes on sexy time travel adventures through time and space. And while Spike goes all nerdy as he talk about his character and her backstory they were unaware that Spike reply to a question that cause all of his erotic sci-fi stories about his character to come true and as he just realized what he did he and Twilight would suddenly hear some strange "vworp"-like sound coming from Spike's room (or outside). And when they go to check it out they would find a strange person sized box that seem to crash from somewhere with smoke coming out of it and then Spike is shock to see a attractive young mare with huge bouncy breast with tits peeking from of her cleavage that barely contains her hyper huge bust steps out of the strange box coughing and after noticing Spike and Twilight she introduce herself as the main character from Spike's erotic sci-fi stories. You can use this character however you want and you could use her as the main character for a spin-off story that take place within the same universe of the your A Truthful Dragon fic starring her and of her adventures before she encounter Spike and becoming a part of his harem you could even do that story after you're done your A Truthful Dragon fic. And I forgot to mention that all of your enemies are pretty erotic female versions of enemies from the Doctor Who series like her version of The Master could be call The Mistress (or The Dominatrix) who is a evil crazy Time-Slut mare with huge bouncy breast (it is ones of the noticeable physical traits of the Time-Sluts) and dress like a sexy Mary Poppins, she is constantly trying to take over the universe and destroy her arch-nemesis The Doctoress (or whatever name that you give her). I would like to see you do sexy erotic take on events and enemies from the Doctor Who series like you could have at one point The Doctoress trying figure out and stop the plan of her arch-nemesis, The Mistress, with The Mistress successfully executed her plan revealing that she will takeover the world by turning every-creature into her like here you could easily do a scene where The Mistress have a orgy with herselves. And/or do a sexy erotic take the Doctor Who enemies, The silents, by turning into sexy busty voluptuous mares that everyone will forget their entire existence when they are not looking at them they could goes around Equestria getting mares impregnating with the mares being completely clueless how they are getting pregnant.
That all of my suggestions for story ideas for now. And if you want more details about this idea just ask. I also have some more ideas that you might like but I will them post later.
Comma after time.
You can remove the "but" and comma after thankfully.
So, it's like working retail.
Comma after um.
Comma after enough.
Comma after you.
Period after yourself, and Celestia, not Celestial.
Your Highness. Capitalized.
Comma after Princess, which should have a capital P.
Too big, comma after big, and you added an extra "her"
Period after arrived.
And after privacy. Period after every full sentence, really.
Comma after though and friend.
Comma after but and period after research.
Comma after matter.
Comma after standards.
Comma after so and Twilight.
Comma after reasons.
Comma after asked.
Period after "with her".
Comma after correct.
Comma after thankfully and capitalize the R in Root.
Comma after know.
She's clever.
Comma after be.
Comma after then and visibly.
Comma after gone.
Comma after year.
Nopony and comma after her.
Exclamation mark, not period.
Comma after gasped.
Comma after no.
Comma after hard and me.
Your.
I think you mean Spike.
11792339
That sounds like a wonderful idea, but would take the story into a completely different direction. It'd be good for a branch story on chyoa
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/61934/chapter-37
When you mentioned how you wanted to turn Celestia into a secret sex tyrant, my mind instantly remembered this fic about that exact scenario.
Maybe you can find some inspiration here as I think that this interpretation of Celestia will fit your fic very nicely.
11792405
I’ll check it out, though I’m not a fan of foalcon, hence the anthro tag, but it could serve as inspiration
11792408
Basically that Celestia finds out the depraved and deviant fantasies of her political rivals, abuses her power to help those rivals indulge in those fantasies, then use that as blackmail to extort them.
This could work wonderfully as Spike could manipulate Celestia into doing the exact same thing here, trying find out Spike's and Rarity's depraved fantasies and help them indulge in it, so that she can gain leverage over them. However, she doesn't realise that the situation is being turned around and SHE is the one that will be controlled.
It might also be interesting for Luna’s corruption for Spike to change history so that one of the reasons why Luna rebelled against her sister is because Celestia was drugging her and pimping her out as part of her machinations.
11792408
You don't have to replicate the foalcon aspect, but I was referring to the general characterisation of Celestia in that fic, it could work well here.
11792408
Also having Celestia be a behind the curtain political backstabber and machiavellion schemer that can manipulate the vices and debauchery of overs would fit perfectly with how you have set Celestia up in the previous chapter:
11792411
On no don’t worry I understand. I could take inspiration for her characterisation, though I intend to have it so that Celestia was always Spike’s slave from over a thousand years but though still a secret deviant behind closed doors. But shes been secretly engineering her kingdom for when her Master is ready.
But I could still incorporate certain elements of that
11792424
It certainly would
11792350
Sorry there were so many correction you had to catch, hope it wasn't too much toruble
11792440
All good.
11788290
Yeah she seems like the submissive type. She has to be in charge and strong all the time to give it up to someone who doesn't care about the crown would probably make her happy.
11792469
We’ll have to see
11792359
Okay. Let me know whenever you decide to do the branch/spin-off story l would like to be aware of it.
And here's some interesting notes/facts that you can use for the Doctoress character:
* Even though she was originally born and raise on her own people planet. She mostly grew up on a sister planet to her birth planet and where she basically grew up around an alien culture where their main language is twerking.
* She can speaks and understand many alien languages but she is fluent in Twerking due to it being her second language.
* She is the masters of several non-lethal alien erotic fighting styles known throughout the galaxy like the Nipple Points (a erotic fighting style that revolves the arts of disabling and manipulating the opponent's restricted body through the use of grabbing and pulling the opponent's breast), Breast Guard (a erotic fighting style that is mostly use for defense that revolves around using the technique of temporary enlarging and using their breast to shield or block attacks), Free Breast Style (a erotic fighting style that was created by a legendary female space stripper/nun/monk use in fighting against multiple opponents the fighting style revolves around erotic dancing techniques to dodge or avoid multiple opponents attacks while attacking with the momentum of their huge swinging breast), Nude Offense or Nude Fighter (a offensive erotic fighting style that revolves fighting while while completely naked it enhances the user fighting prowess and capabilities and it helps keep opponents unable to focus), the Private Erotic Hold/or Grapple (a non-lethal erotic fighting style that revolves using the arts of grappling or holding/locking a opponent with their body while shoving their privates or breast, butt within the opponent's face sometime also even pleasuring them), and she even created a erotic fighting style that is a mix of multiple erotic fighting styles in freestyle form.
* She have the ability to temporarily aged her body up or down.
* One time she got drunk at an alien party within an alien kingdom and the night after she woke up to find that she is married to an alien prince that is a person sized psychic sapient cock with huge balls (who is an prince to an race of huge sapient psychic cocks that speaks telepathically) which she is still legally married to. And there was an another time when she got drunk she woke up completely naked in her time spaceship with a huge hangover and a heart tattoo tattooed around her anus which she still have no clue how she got it.
* One time she defeated an evil tyrant-like alien race with a culture that revolves around never wearing any clothing or armor (they are too prideful to wear any) by giving their entire species huge breast and cock by traveling back in time to altered the alien race evolution all in order to weakened them by giving them weaknesses through evolutionary physical traits (it's kinda hard being taken seriously as one of the self proclaimed race of strong warriors throughout the galaxy when your race have huge bouncy breast that restrict their speed and movements in battle and a huge soft squishy and hit-able hanging junk that is completely expose to attacks due to them refusing to wear anything to cover them up). And because of the evil alien race became the enemy of the Doctoress ever since as they vow revenge for the Doctoress of robbing their race former glory and for making their race evolutionary joke.
* One time she used to have a huge cock that was sapient and conscious gain from one of her adventures. Her cock have the ability to telepathically speak to the Doctoress and temporarily enlarge itself the cock prefer itself as a she/her. But at some point the Doctoress remove her in order to give her ex-cock a female humanoid body and for a time they becomes lovers but they eventually split up on good terms with her ex-cock to explore the galaxy and to discover herself.
And here some idea suggestions on changing Equestria's history in the past with Celestia:
1. You could have Celestia change the culture of Equestria by changing the laws of the past that will effects the present and future. Like Celestia changing the laws of what is normal fashion and what is normal to wear in public she would start a popular fashion trend that states something like the lesser the better or more erotic the better and with Celestia herself supporting this erotic fashion revolution both in public (normalizing erotic fashion and by publicly wearing erotic or little of clothing as her normal clothes while making it law) and behind the scenes (by secretly funding the erotic fashion movement and secretly designing most of the erotic fashion design herself under many aliases).
2. You could have Celestia form a religion that revolves sex and Spike as the religion's all powerful god of Sex and/or male dominance (or just sexual dominance) and make it the one true religion of Equestria. This would change Equestria in the present and future creating a more sexualized Equestria with a culture and traditions that revolves around sex and Spike as it's god due to Equestria now having a sexualize religion that been a part of Equestria's history and culture for centuries. Thus making the very concept of sex and worshipping Spike a big part everyone lives in Equestria.
3. Celestia would starts changing her image into a more erotic sexy dominance image that still keep the image of an powerful but kind ruler. Celestia would wear more erotic and dominance clothes that match her new image and to battle or to war she would wear erotic sexy battle armor that barely covers anything and exposes her privates for all to see while still giving powerful ruler vibes. And because of Celestia's erotic sexy battle armor sexy battle armor thus becomes the status quo with Equestria's armed forces and military among Equestria guards and knights even within the present and future.
4. Celestia could introduce a new sexy form of doing and performing magic by performing magic through sex and sexual pleasure. Eventually it becomes the norm and only way of performing magic ans spells.
5. Rarity could uses her Root of Magic ability to create and use a more powerful version of a possession spell that allows Rarity to possess Celestia in the past and uses her to alter and corrupt Equestria and Princess Celestia by doing all the other previous suggestions before this. And Princess Celestia herself would be completely unaware of the possession and after the possession is over Celestia would remember all the things that Rarity done during her possession but even though Celestia acknowledge that she was acting out of character like some force was controlling her she would still believe that it's all her own actions as she continue going down the path that Rarity set her down on.
11792686
I’m sorry I think I misled you. I wasn’t planning on writing a branch story, just mentioning it would be fun to see someone else do that.
Those ideas for Celestia certainly sound good, especially the outfits one, I also like the religion idea, though Nightmare Rarity is meant to be the one who worships Spike and Rarity so ideally I’d make it so she plays a role.
Good ideas though, thanks for your comment
11792699
Oh, that's okay. I also forgot to suggest that to have Spike make himself immune to any effect of time being alter from the past, present & future.
11792789
Good call
11792789
Also that nobody outside the group even they know about his power can use it without the total agreement of the group.
11795006
Which power are you referring to?
11795016
The truth Power. Remember before the villains were caught they tried to get control of spike and the power. I know spike made plots against him backfire in his favor but what if they didn't care about anything but getting him to benefit him without some big scheme. Just the usual buttering up that big businesses and politicians do with each other.
11795033
It would kind of undermine the whole harem master dynamic if he did that
11795041
Would it Considering he would hopefully doing something besides just sex related stuff and and even the girls have stuff besides sex that define them and once the big wigs figure out that spike is someone important you think no matter how much they privately hate him they won't try to learn the secret of his power or use it for themselves. It be only matter of time before they notice even blueblood isn't so dumb as to never notice.
11795046
That could be more easily averted by Spike asking if Spike just asks if no one knows about it unless he wants to. No need for a unanimous vote
11792298
Oh yeah, I have notice that somebody is doing the same thing on the Game Crossovers Group. There are a bunch of post that have been disliked by one person for no reason. It's almost seem like the person just hate all things related to video games. But if that is the case then why even go and join the group.
11797033
I know what you mean. In this case it’s someone who has a problem it’s the morals of a mind control fetish. They used to be spamming the story with sock puppets