When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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Good chapter! Now let’s see if Octavia wins the poll!
11877969
It’s early enough to still be anypony’s win
Luna should also have the Powers of Denial, she would have the power to enter a Mare or Stallions dream and prevent the Stallion from feeling Sexual Needs, while with a Mare she would increase the Sexual Need.
Stallions will only have Needs when the need to produce children is present and Mares while unsatisfied, will allow Stallions to breed them only with the Hope that she will produce a Filly so she can grow up to Serve the Master.
11878186
Hmm that’s an interesting point. The idea for the stallions in the world would be that they would still get married, but they would always know they were second best. I’m not sure if it should be Luna’s power though. It might work better as a simple change induced by the Root of Honesty as it doesn’t really fit the role of the Princess of Whores
Comma after surprise.
comma after asked.
Lower case S.
Remove "as".
Period, not comma.
Period, not comma.
Comma after women.
Comma after model.
Comma after you.
Comma after purple.
Period after Spike, capital H.
Comma before and after Spike.
Period, not comma.
Comma after smokescreen.
Comma after Rarity.
Sugarcube Corner.
Comma before and after however.
Comma after sister.
Period after smugly, comma after response.
Comma after it.
Comma after so.
Comma after so.
Lowercase s.
See above.
Spike smiled.
You use for example just after. Remove one or the other.
Comma after correctly.
Comma after elegant.
Comma after now.
Comma after oh.
Comma after excited.
Comma, not period.
Comma after everypony.
Period, not comma.
Comma after suggested.
Comma after back, lowercase S.
Period after so.
Comma after up.
Period after ass.
Period after Master.
Comma after hand, lowercase S and period after hand.
Capital E.
Comma after me.
Comma after yes.
Slutprincess.
Comma after slightly.
Comma after fuck.
Comma after erect.
Comma after down.
Exclamation point after Master, lowercase S.
11878846
All fixed now. Though I'm not sure you're right about lower cases after periods
How much longer will the poll stay up?
11881956
Two days after the next chapter