When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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He, not we.
Nipple, not breast.
Comma after Ponyville.
Period after pet, capitalize the H.
Leashed beside them like a pet, was Fluttershy.
Comma after imitation.
Comma after who.
Comma after later.
Comma after fucked.
Comma after dreams.
You, not y'all and comma after something.
Comma after approached.
Every instance of this should be replaced by Apple Bloom.
Comma and add more to make it clear she's talking to Apple Bloom.
You not y'all.
Capital M.
Remaining and stock still.
Comma after show.
Period after daughters, comma after similarly.
Forcing.
You.
Flopped.
You.
Capital H.
Since it's meant to be I, that's a capital A.
Before Spike.
Comma after at.
Comma after honest.
The emotion described is at odds with what she's saying.
Period, not comma.
Right, not left. Also, the period before this sentence should be a comma.
Period, not comma.
Period, not comma.
Comma after moment.
Your.
Comma after eclipse.
Period, not comma.
And again. Sentences finish with a period, not a comma.
Comma after you.
Before she.
Knowing her? Flip a coin.
Comma after it.
Comma after hush.
Echoing confidence.
Comma after was and all.
To Luna's lack of surprise.
Comma after arrived.
Your.
Comma after look.
Comma after them and Master.
Don't think "dumb droll" means what you think it does.
Period, not question mark.
Hey man, sometimes, shit happens.
This was good. I hope you are able to recover quickly!
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I’m mostly recovered by now thankfully
11851933
Same here. You are doing a great job but as long as you don't take months just to give a new chapter I can't complain.
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Thanks, I’ll try
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Sorry it took some time to get around to, but fixed now