When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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The beginning of the chapter seems to restart a bit before Nightmare Rarity starts with Spike.
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What do you mean? Specifically?
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Right before they start to have sex, after Spike asks his question(s) near the beginning, it somewhat repeats itself
This chapter seems to restart. It makes it very jarring to read.
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Got it, fixed now, just need to fix it on chyoa. Sorry about that, must have copy and pasted wrong when uploading
Well, since she was trying to take over the harem, I think it would be very fitting if she was reduced to the bottom of the totem pole. She wanted authority over everyone, instead, she gets authority over no one.
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I second this suggestion.
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And basically she has to the harem fuck slave which means all members of the harem can use as much as spike would use them.
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A good suggestion, but how does one implement it in a harem of lowly slaves.
One idea I have is to remove her autonomy entirely. Make it so she can't act at all unless someone else orders in. She'll basically become a sex robot. She'll still eat, sleep and use the bathroom as needed, but she'll never do anything else without being told to do it.
If you want to be really cruel, make it so she keeps her consciousness threw-out it all. Let her know how far she's fallen. Locked under her pale, glassy eyes she remains locked away while lick at another slave's ass.
Just a thought.
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My thought process was that anyone from Spike's harem could give her commands and she would have to obey. And she, in turn, cannot give any orders, only obey. Think of it as a twisted Generosity.
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That seems way too mean. I know she a villain but she still a person. Making a robot takes that away.
OK, looks like Nightmare Rarity was handled one way or another. But that beg me one question, does the future really that bad that the future Flurry Heart has to come back to fix it? To begin with, is she really this universe's future Flurry Heart?
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She is this universe’s version of Flurry Heart, though she has visited other worlds