When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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Another very good chapter.
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed
And Spike/Rarity.
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Yeah, though she’s referring to how Celestia, Cadence and Velvet trained her to be a slut
Glad that Twilight help Luna with her insecurities onto the pony populace.
Maybe and finally, the ponies will most likely appreciate Luna just the same as Celestia.
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Perhaps they will, I’m sure Spike and Rarity will
Well this poll is much more divided.
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Yeah, a lot harder to get a clear answer from people here
Comma after least.
Comma after which.
Period not comma.
Comma after it.
Period after Equestria.
Period, not comma.
Asked, standing.
Period, not comma.
Hers.
Comma after perhaps and before and after Luna.
Comma after Celestia.
Comma after but.
Period after head.
Question mark, not comma.
Comma after here.
Colon, not period.
Your.
Put the "and" before "a spring in her step" before "she felt".
Comma after arrived.
Wouldn't it be her neck if she wants to bring her closer?
I think you mean "to you".
I’ve been told to remove links to chyoa, or any other NSFW image, I think I got them all, but if I missed one be sure to tell me. Also there won’t be more links to chyoa in the future
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well you had a long run with them.
honestly amazed it didn't happen until now that someone told you to remove them. and a bit sad.
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Sorry it took so long to fix. All done now, thankfully the list seems shorter today.