When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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Now all they have to is force rarity hand before everyone is after her dream. I imagine that knowing that every girl is after him will make her jealous enough to make a move and as long as he doesn't know that anyone besides twilight and cadence are affected he will be tempted like crazy because he would love a bunch of girls trying to put the moves on him especially one girl in particular.
Maybe in between vote chapters you could write slice of life chapters highlighting the changes from spikes power. Maybe more of spike getting it with his growing harem or more sweetie belle and rarity scenes.
In the last couple chapters, I thought it was played a little poorly, but this chapter explains why that was. The payoff was pretty good here, thanks for the chapter!
A small list of things that are False, with his Question: "Is Absolutely everything on this List False?"
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Remember when Spike made a change suggesting that he would do anything to make Rarity’s dream come true, it made it so whenever he tries to use his power to undo or sabotage that dream it backfires.
Seriously. With Starlight inhibitions removed, she should have turned Cadence into an empty doll before she'd finished speaking. Sorry. :-(