When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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Comma between world and not.
Comma between sleep and Fleur.
Can’t wait to see the reward Fleur ig going to get from Spike, for how much time she has been without fucking, Spike’s cock could be too much for her.
I thought Spike planned to change him to Bluebell. According to most fanfics I have read, Bluebell has a better personality than Blueblood.
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Since the author doesn’t like gender bending it’s unlikely. But if enough people ask for it maybe. I could see spike changing him as punishment for stepping out of line.
"Aren't you Fancy's husband?"
There is a mistype here.
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I very much doubt they’ll be a Blueblood gender swap, if Bluebell is included it’ll be as a until now unheard of sister
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I’ll fix it
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Fixed now
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It's still there. It still has Blueblood asking Fluer if she is Fancy Pants' husband.
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That’s strange, I checked myself and it’s fixed on my screen
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I believe you, but I checked the chapter and appears to have not been corrected. I don't know why.
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I got nothing then. I tried resaving the chapter but if that’s not solved it I’ll just have to hope it sorts itself out
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Sorry. I appreciate that you tried. Your story is going great so far. Can't wait for more.
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Thank you, there’s nothing to apologise for. Not your fault, hopefully these things work out
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Okay please forgive me if I'm off the mark here, but sometimes the obvious can escape our notice so I just want to confirm.
I notice it now reads "Fancy's husband" instead of Fancy Pants' husband" The 'mistype' isn't that. It should actually read "Aren't you Fancy Pants' WIFE" That is what they mean by a mistype. Is that what you fixed, or did you think the issue was with Pants?
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Oh well now I feel like an idiot, thanks for catching that.
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Actually that would make a great punishment for blueblood make him live out his old male life in dream where the female version is bothered by his bad deeds but he doesn't realize the 2 versions are the same person.
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I see where you’re coming from, but as said before I’m not a big fan of gender swaps and don’t want to make a habit of it. Not to mention there’s not a lot of fan art of Bluebell at derpibooru.
perhaps someone might make a branch story over at chyoa but I wouldn’t count on it
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Maybe just save it for the ultimate punishment for the really rotten eggs. After all we do need some guys around to keep pony kind alive. Sure spike most likely gonna get the cream of the crop when it comes to girls but the other guys do have a right to love too.
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Maybe, but I’m just not a fan of writing genderswaps
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Well nobody going to try force just keep the idea around in case you change your mind.
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I’m sorry
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Feel like I disappointed you. Probably silly I know
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Relax the story is great so far and you haven't been making wait forever for new chapters unlike some authors. I seen the other copy of the story and it good too.
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Thanks, support like that is always appreciated
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There is some fan art for princess bluebelle though. Not to say you should do it. Far from it but there is some fan art.
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There is some, just not a lot of it. Nothing that particularly strikes my fancy
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Not to say you should do a gender swap but you could introduce her as a fraternal twin to take over from blue blood after he suffers a “accident “. A accident maybe caused by Gilda.
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Sorry I didn’t want to pressure you. It’s a good story.
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So I actually had an idea for a Bluebelle thing.
Now before I begin I realize you don't like to do genderswap, and I have a proposition at the end of this for that.
With that in mind, so I have no idea if you planned to have Blueblood do anything else obviously, but I'm thinking he would get really angry at what happened. He knows he can't challenge Fluer, but he keeps an eye on her and discovers her going with Spike, and how Spike seems to be 'playing' with a different girl every day. Thinking he can get some dirt to bother Fluer, or reveal to Fancy Pants that she's 'cheating' (Again he probably has no idea what's really going on). However Spike is naturally on guard around him, and he knows Fluer wouldn't just let Blueblood get proof, so he decides to use some form of magic to turn himself into a mare. Then as 'Bluebelle' she tries to seduce Spike and expose the cheating and maybe even get some dirt on Spike to blackmail him back.
Of course Bluebelle doesn't know that anything Spike says that can be considered a yes or no question automatically becomes 'Yes' so the story she tells of who and what she is begins to trap her...
Now given you don't really like writing that type of stuff. I'll offer right here, that I am willing to write it myself as a sorta guest chapter if you want. (And don't worry, I completely understand if you're not interested)
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That might be an idea I prefer. I’ll consider that
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That’s an interesting scenario, but it’s still a gender swap in my mind. If you want to write it yourself you could go over to the story on chyoa. Because that site allows you to make branch chapters, allowing you to write your own chapter there
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Oh it's absolutely a genderswap. It's why I offered to write it as I know you don't really like writing those. It just happens to be my trademark in a manner of speaking.
Sadly I don't have any interest in the CYOA site, so I likely won't be going over there to write it. I'm perfectly fine with just giving you the chapter to post here and just say something like: "Hey I got a fan chapter!"
My idea is if you don't plan to use Blueblood for anything else, this could be a one and done deal. I write Blueblood into HER new role, and everyone gets the genderswap they're after, you didn't have to write it, and you don't even have to bring up Blueblood/Bluebelle ever again.
Of course if you DO plan on using him later, then yeah this wouldn't work and I perfectly understand. It's an offer, but if you are just that against genderswaps I'm not going to push the issue. I have an idea for the new role Bluebelle ends up as, and if you did decide to go forward with this I can tell you the details in PM, but hey if you aren't interested that's fine. I'm sorry to any readers that I'm not interested in doing this on CYOA.