When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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With her power over dreams Luna could probably get anyone crazy for spike to point where once faced with him they will be doing everything in their power to resist him. And someone who probably been as lonely as Luna would probably love to have someone like spike to want her.
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Good Might be fun to have Luna resist, though I’m not as good at writing the resistance to mind control as I would like, even when they're some of my favorite stories to read. And I could see how preying on her loneliness could work
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She just try to deny how much she wants him. He doesn't even have to force her He can be courting her instead for a change of pace. Considering he pretty much gotten every other with his power can he actually court one into loving him.
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It seems like a stretch, to court her into being a sex slave maybe if he used his power to make himself supernaturally good at courting her
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Make it seem like he courting while the girls influence her into being a sex slave. That way she gets to try to resist and spike gets a challenge and a helpful ally.
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Hmm… I’ll see what I can do
Having Celestia be the first to fall makes the most since to me. Luna was already corrupted by Nightmare Moon once, doing so would make her much more wary of mind affecting magics. And with her control over dreams, she may be able to notice the changes made between the conscious and subconscious (like magic fingerprints). But if Celestia, her stronger, incorruptible, older sister fell first. Well, she have no hope and she'd know it.
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Yeah I agree, and it seems so do others as Celestia has taken the lead
Maybe for you could have her deal with hundreds of suck ups and their fake flattery and fake romance and maybe secretly wishing for someone who doesn't care about her crown.
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That’s a good idea, but surprisingly Celestia seems to have pulled out ahead in the polls
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Welll suck ups could work for Celestia too.
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True, and I could use elements of that. But I have something in mind for Celestia
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Well you are the author. I'm just offering ideas.
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And I love every single one of them, just giving you the context
Comma after so.
Comma after Gentle.
Wife. And comma after 'wife'.
Comma after him.
Comma after Fluttershy.
Comma after now.
Comma after tonight.
Comma after sinful and good.
Comma after so.
Sparkle household. Capital S.
Comma after so and after answered.
Missed a gosh.
Comma after gasped.
Comma after asked.
Comma after eye.
Comma after always.
Comma after her.
Forgot to bold.
Period, not comma.
Comma before and after Posey.
One or the other.
Comma after intersted.
Missing a word after girlfriend. Also, you probably mean boyfriend, given this is about Spike.
Comma after missing.
Comma after world.
Period, not comma.
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Thanks, will fix it tomorrow morning. Hope you enjoyed the chapter
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All fixed now