When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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I think this was your best so far.
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I’m glad. I admit I was worried, sex scenes are often my weakness
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I’ll admit that this felt more natural than your other sex scenes you have written. I’m not saying they were bad. But this one feels to me at least improved.
The innocence is the easiest to corrupt. Though, in this case, I don't know whether this would lead to bad or good end.
Hmm... now that I think about it. If Spike manage to convert every villains into part of his harem, then it might be considered a good end.
This was a nice chapter. I like seeing Fluttershy like this. Also do you plan on having a threeway with Miss.Cake, Spike, and Fluttershy?
Can I once again suggest the root of kindness being mind reading
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Don’t worry I’ve taken your suggestion
Are not the other powers except maybe Magic a little underleveled? I mean, Honesty can literally warp reality and while Magic could do that the others don't seem to reach that level of power
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Perhaps but if every power was as powerful as honesty then this story would spiral out of control far too quickly. The root of honesty is only kept in check by the reluctance of Spike. If some harem member got a similar power the story would become far too easy for the harem.