When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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With this story's length and how many times I see it updated, I can't tell if it's smut with a story or a story with smut.
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A little of colours a a little of column b
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Not gonna lie I wish this updated more frequently but I don’t mind waiting for quality content
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So sorry, been sick recently and these recent chapters have been longer. But I’m glad you’re enjoying it
Great chapter. The longest yet, if I'm not mistaken.
The only thing that's stood out to me as a negative is that you sometimes use the same words or phrases too close together.
It's an admittedly minor nitpick, but it was something that stood out to me.
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Quality over quantity my friend
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Thanks for the feedback, I’ll try to correct that
Two Ls.
Lowercase C.
Comma, not dash.
Lowercase C.
Don't think that's the word you're looking for.
My friends'-FUCK-dreams.
Commit, not do.
Couldn't.
Diarch.
Strode.
Comma after anypony.
She was like.
Period, not comma, capital T.
Period, not comma.
Comma after you and subjects.
Period after lie, no "and", capital I.
THAT stepped.
Comma after moment.
Period after Luna, capital S.
Semicolon, not period.
Two Ls.
Comma, not period.
Comma.
Comma.
Period.
This is redundant.
Period.
Comma after her.
That's a very redundant statement.
This sentence doesn't make sense.
Comma after one.
Exclamation point, not comma.
Comma after want.
Remove "one".
Comma after anything.
You want, not they, or else you said the same thing twice.
Being leered.
Comma after soon.
Comma after so.
Period, not comma.
Comma after arrived.
Comma after apart.
Lowercase T.
Comma after later.
Comma after heel.
Comma after both "enough"s.
"Luna" is redundant here. She's speaking to her directly.
Period, not comma.
Comma after best.
Comma after adventure.
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All fixed up now, thank you