When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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So I have an idea: you could either continue on the path of making Chrysalis an ally like Sombra affiliated to the harem, have it so that Chrysalis succeeds at avoiding detection and keep her alliance to Nightmare Rarity secret or have Spike say upon discovering Chrysalis: “Oh! Did you succeed in making Chrysalis my slave too?” And completely undo Nightmare Rarity attempt at an alliance which will send her in a silent fit of rage as well as making her realize that a single comment like that could also chain her to him.
However, if you have another idea that you wish to explore, I am curious to see what it could be. Perhaps even throw a wrench or two Spike’s way.
I can't imagine spike reacting to this in any way but negatively.
I don't think Chrysalis can get out of this, because even if she manages to transform in time, all that has to happen to give her away is cadence opening her mouth.
And when spike sees what she did to cadence, whoo boy will he be pissed. I think he'll basically do an uno reverse, and not only undo cadence's hypnosis, but give her Chrysalis as an apology. Then he'll take who he still thinks is rarity, and have a long chat with her about this and how he's disappointed with her.
Nightmare rarity will largely get away scot free, with some very slight suspicion from spike, and cadence avoiding her like the plague. She'll just have to be more careful moving forward.
I would say have spike accidentally make chrysalis another concubine of his.
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I love that idea in fact I thought that was going to be her role originally. I imagine her teaching all the adult girls every bedroom trick out there in order to please spike. As for flurry if she really wanted to do the right thing she would have just gone back in time before the root and convinced rarity to tell spike how she felt because that is what started this mess. Spike wanted to impress rarity in hopes that she would notice him like he noticed her but combined with the root power he was doomed to grant her wish to win her heart.
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Flurry Heart can see all potential consequences of a decision as the Princess of Time. If she prevented Spike from getting the root then someone worse would have gotten it. (Though she doesn’t tell them this it could have been Sombra or Chrysalis)
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I guess but if rarity had admitted how she felt before the sex slavery probably wouldn't have happened.
I like Mystic Chicken's idea. Spike unknowingly trashing all of Nightmare Rarity's plans is very funny to me.
It's hard to come up with ideas for how Spike will react when we don't know if Chrysalis will be able to transform back in time. I kinda like the idea that Chrysalis will transform into someone, only to realise that, that particular someone was outside the door with Spike the whole time.
Really like how Cadence was handled in this chapter. If Nightmare Rarity and Chrysalis are able to play this off, I imagen they'd have a new unwitting ally in Cadence, dangerous. Of course where Cadence is, Gleaming Shield will follow. They could take control of the Crystal Empire if they could pull this off.
Wonder what's gonna happen.
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Chrysalis won’t be able to transform in time
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I see
Well in that case I imagen Spike stare in bewilderment at the sight before him for just a moment, then gets angry immediately calls for help from the guards. Spike maybe a strong dragon but he may need a little help to deal with her, she can fly, has magic and a terrible temper. Unless of cause, Spike just asks the right question? He might even try to yell for help from other slaves around. Maybe, just maybe, he might even get an erection to the sight before him. While the guards handle Chrysalis, Spike goes to protect Cadence.
Cadence might try to beg Spike not to do anything to Chrysalis, but I don't know if Spike would listen. Hypnosis and brainwashing isn't immediately apparent so even if Chrysalis is captured, there's no way of knowing if her mind alterations would be noticed. Having said that, Twilight hypnotised Sweetie Belle before, she might recognise the signs and help undo it (or hypnotise her more).
I can totally see Nightmare Rarity betraying Chrysalis right in that moment to save herself. Maybe claiming that she came to save Cadence. If she doesn't this whole conspiracy could be blown wide open.
Looking forward to seeing how this plays out. Keep up the good work.