When Spike is enchanted so that any yes or no question will be answered with a yes he tries to use this power for his crush Rarity. But when he asks the wrong question he's inadvertently set himself up to create a harem for himself.
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Given it was pre-Nightmare Moon, well over a thousand.
Comma, not period.
That's, actually kinda brilliant.
Comma.
Comma.
Comma.
Comma after her.
Majesty is a title, so capital M.
Comma after so.
Comma after time.
Period after memory.
Capital P Princess.
The latter of which, not "that". Otherwise it implies the gloves also click on the floor.
Comma after this and Cadence. Period after truth.
Comma after truth and Cadence.
I think "made of light" would look better if placed after "appeared".
Comma after warning.
Comma after heard.
Gonna want to tack the latter sentence onto the end of the previous paragraph.
Comma after So and want.
Capital P Princess.
Comma after cum.
Period, not comma.
Comma after then.
Comma after plan.
I mean, she also raises/lowers the Moon.
Comma after publicly and Cadence.
Comma after but and predicted.
Comma after fact.
Phase. Not phrase.
Comma after her.
Comma after scandalous.
Period after wears.
Comma after image.
Period, not comma.
Around Cadence's neck.
Period, not comma.
Use.
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All should be fixed now, even added a picture I forgot to add last time
Good chapter!
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Thank you
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Personally I rather screwball if we have a female version of discord. She takes after dad power wise and is already female and is better behave than him.
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I see you’re reasoning, but I was thinking it would be more exotic to have a full fledged draqonequus
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Why not put it to a vote and see which the fans would rather have.
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I’ll consider that
Seriously, where is Discord in this story? Teaching Spike to have fun with his power to warp reality on a whim has his name on it with flashing neon lights and fireworks with a social media campaign for good measure!
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I just wasn’t sure exactly how to include him
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It's DISCORD! Playing havoc on reality for giggles and hanging out with Spike for fun thanks to his character development should have been easy. Sorry. This is how I feel. Sorry.
Thinking about the equestria girls universe you should flash sentry not exist at all maybe instead just have flare warden be the substitute for him. Maybe have canterlot high be a all girls school. Maybe have all the cannon male students be swapped out for a gender swapped character.
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I don't intend on further genderswaps, sorry. But Canterlot high could become a girls only university, with a single spikey exception
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Last I saw he vista's rarity in a earlier chapter and convinced her to enjoy being bad if she was going to be a villain.