Too Tight!
You’re destined to be a queen. You’ve already proven yourself by playing your part in bringing magic back to Equestria and by refounding the renowned Wonderbolts. Yet here you are, spending your time searching for Sunny again. But you’re okay with that. She caught your eye the moment you saw her. And then you learned she likes history even more than you do. Since then she has become the mare of your eye. The feelings you have for her could only be described as magical. If only there was an opportunity for you to express them someday...
You peek at the upper floor of the lighthouse. “Sunny, are you here? Say something if you are not.”
“Heh, that’s funny, Zippy.” She gives you a barely noticeable wave of a hoof. “I’m just looking at the magic stream from the three crystals. I think it’s connected with my Alicornization.”
“I could have told you that,” you say as you approach her. “Magic makes magic.”
“I’ve tried everything, but I still can’t control the transformation. I only get my wings and horn when I get excited.”
“So, get excited then.” You put a hoof on her shoulder.
“I wish I could, but I can’t just get excited on command.”
“I can.” The moment is perfect, and you’re not the kind of mare to miss an opportunity like this. “I get excited every time I think of you.” You kiss her before she can process your words.
In an instant, her non-existent wings erect into existence, along with her horn. But it doesn’t stop there. A shockwave emanates from her, almost sending you to your croup. As she levitates up, so do all the dust particles around the room, reminding you that you’ve lately been slacking on your chores.
An aura engulfs her. As it dissipates, she emerges from it with two pairs of big wings and a larger horn than you’ve ever seen on any of the Unicorns.
You respond, “I didn’t know you could become a level 2 Alicorn.”
“Neither did I. Twilight Sparkle once came close when she absorbed magic from all the Alicorns. I wish I could tell you what I’m feeling right now. The magic is surging through me. I can access innate knowledge. It’s incredible! I think I can even conjure up anything I imagine in this state.” She points a hoof at you. “Quick, make a material wish! Anything you want.”
“Err…” You hesitate. “What I wish for isn’t material.”
“Oh, that’s right. You want to be a real Wonderbolt. I think I get it!”
“Well, not really, I just admire—”
“Time’s up. I’m losing the magic. Here’s a Wonderbolt uniform for you!”
In an instant, you’re levitated into the air and violently engulfed in a magic cocoon. It presses on you from all directions, taking your breath away.
After a bright flash of light, you feel the magic around you dissipate. Yet the pressure all around you still persists.
Sunny’s Alicorn features scatter into nothingness and both of you fall from the air. You catch yourself on all four, but you don’t feel the hard surface under your hooves. It’s as if the ground changed its texture to something slick and rubbery.
You look down at your legs and instinctively jump away from what you see. Yet you can’t leave it behind. It sticks to you. The blue wrapping all around your legs won’t come off!
You stand on your hind legs and circle in the air with your forehooves, but it doesn’t do you any good. In fact, your movements only make it worse. With your hind legs’ muscles tensing, the pressure all around them increases.
Your eyes dart around your body, but you can’t see it. Wherever you look, only the stupid, tight fabric shines back at you.
You lean on your forelegs and kick with both hind legs repeatedly. “Get it off! Get it off! Get it off!”
“Zipp, what’s wrong? I thought you wanted this...”
“Get it off!” You shake with all your body, but instead of your hair dispersing as is natural and has always been the case, your whole coat just gets violently squashed even more. “It’s violating me!”
“It’s just clothes, Zippy.”
“I’ve never worn any clothes in my life and I swore that I never will. But these wrappings aren’t just cumbersome clothes, they’re rape incarnate!”
“Zipp, you’re overreacting. Wonderbolts used to wear these uniforms all the time. Possibly. I thought you liked Wonderbolts.”
“For their flying, not for getting encased in a rubber coffin!” You hyperventilate. Your whole life, you could just take a deep breath whenever you wanted, but for the first time, you simply can’t. Every minuscule movement you make is directly opposed by an opposite force. The fabric presses on you from all directions. “I’m suffocating in this!”
“I thought the whole point of the uniform was its tightness. Wonderbolts liked to wear tight clothes, for some reason. And you like Wonderbolts, so it was reasonable to assume you have the same fetish. So I imagined it tight because I thought you’d like it.”
“Aerodynamics! Have you heard of it‽” You try to stand still so that the fabric wouldn’t oppose your movements, but it still presses on you relentlessly.
“The tighter the uniform embraces you, the more aerodynamic it is, right? If that’s the case, I fed two birds with one cone.”
“No! That’s not how it works. Ugh, just forget it…”
“Regardless, stop making such a fuss about it, Zipp. It’s just clothes…”
“There are only two types of ponies in the world. Those who have worn clothes in their lifetime and those who have not. I was always in the latter camp, but you’ve made me into the former.”
“You’re making zero sense right now, Zipp.”
“I’m now corrupted for all eternity...”
“If you can’t appreciate my gift to you, just undress and be done with it.”
You pinch the fabric on your chest with both forehooves and try to push it away from your sensitive body. “Sunny, help me unzip before I lose my mind.”
“Right. Zipper... Of course! I knew I was forgetting something.”
“Wait, what are you saying?” You touch yourself all over yet feel nothing but smoothness and tightness all around.
“There is no zip, Zipp.”
“Well, how did you imagine me peeing then?”
Sunny blushes. “I’m not in the habit of imagining you peeing…”
You look away and whisper to yourself, “I am…” For a mere instant, you’re glad that your face is covered by a non-translucent fabric so that she can’t see you blush.
“Why don’t we talk about important stuff instead? Like gee, I don’t know… What the heck did you pull on me a minute ago‽” She snorts.
“I need to pee.” You try to change back the topic. At any point since you met her, you’d love to share your feelings with her, just not now. At this very moment, your priority is to escape the dungeon that clings to your body.
“Can’t you hold it in?” Sunny sighs.
“For how long? It’s pressing on my bladder and everything else. I don’t know if I can bear it for much longer. When does this conjured torture device magic away?”
“Well, it is magical, but not in the way you imply. I used permanent magic for the first time to warp it into existence.”
“Buck this, I’m getting the scissors.” You look around. “Or a knife. Something sharp…”
“Actually, that won’t work, either.”
You exhale the little air you hold in your lungs. “Why wouldn’t it work?” You’re on the verge of losing it.
“You know how I mentioned that it’s permanent…”
“How permanent?”
“Look, I felt my magic dissipating. For all I knew and know, it was a one-time thing. And that meant I only got one try and no do-overs. I did it for you, Zipp. I wanted my gift to last, so I made it durable for your sake.”
“How durable?” You clench your teeth.
“Indestructible…”
“Aaa!”
“I thought you’d thank me for going the extra step in the little time I had…”
“Aaa!”
“Look, I only had a moment to conjure it up. I’m not even a fashion designer. What do I know about clothes? Give me a break, will you?”
“Aaa!”
“And please stop screaming.” Sunny covers her ears with forehooves. She looks you in the eyes and takes a big breath. “I’m sorry! There. Is that what you want to hear? I messed up and I’m sorry.”
“I just want you to save me from this nightmarish cocoon. That’s all I want from you right now.”
“Well, I don’t have my overpowered magic anymore.” She waves her hooves in an explanatory manner, yet proposes no relief. “I can’t magic it off of you.”
“Then do something else. I don’t want to spend another moment in this solitary confinement.”
“I don’t have a solution for you. I don’t. If I could just fix it, don’t you think I would? I don’t know what to do. Can’t you just enjoy it or something?”
“Enjoy… it…” You’re already sweating under the stifling fabric, but you feel your temperature rise even more. “You did this. You fix it! You fix it right now!”
“Okay, okay. Err, there’s a hole for your tail, right?”
“What about it? Nopony ever dared to even touch my dock and now it’s being squeezed from all sides…”
“The material is a bit elastic, so maybe you could widen it enough to… you know… pee…”
“Do it!” You turn with your behind toward her.
“No way!” she protests.
“I can’t pee if I’m tense. You have to hold it open while I do it.”
“No! Just, no! You’d get it all over my hooves. Your plan sucks!”
“It’s your plan.”
“Well, then my plan sucks.” Sunny shrugs her shoulders.
Your patience runs out. “My plan then...”
“What’s your pla—-”
You kiss her.
“Ngh!” She blushes and wiggles out of a kiss. “We still haven’t talked about this. We have so much talking to do first. A lot of talking!”
You kiss her again.
She presses a hoof on your chest to gain a tad of distance. “Talking… Consent…”
“Change!” you order her and close the distance.
She falls on her back. “I can’t just change like that. I don’t know if I’ll even ever be able to do it again. I may have just burnt my magical fuse and I’ll now be a mere Earth pony forever.”
“Change!” You insist and press your lips on hers.
She bangs with her forehooves on your neck, but you only give her one breath of time before saying “Change!” again and plunging back down on her.
With the last deep kiss, her wings and horn finally emerge.
You lean your head back. “Now undo what you have wrought!”
“It doesn’t work like that. Only a level 2 Alicorn can undo level 2 Alicorn magic. And as you can see, I’m just level 1 again.”
“We both know this isn’t even your final form.”
“That's all you’ll get from me. I had enough excitement for one day. Let’s just postpone everything to tomorrow. I can’t handle you right now.”
“We’re at an impasse then because I can’t handle your cocoon, nor can I wait for another moment, much less a day.” You sigh and close your eyes, regretting what you’re about to do. “Sunny, I planned to do this properly. A date, movie, dinner and the whole shebang.”
“Do what properly?”
“I’m sorry, Sunny, but you brought this on yourself.”
Sunny wants to object, but before she can make a sound, your lips descend on her, and so too does the rest of your body. You’ll make her a level 2 Alicorn yet!
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I love the chemistry you gave these two.
11346299 I had good characters to work with. The ingredients were there, all I had to do was put them together.
Hm. I’ve never seen rubber/latex called fabric before, but I suppose it isn’t wrong, just a little unusual. That said, Zipp’s reaction sounds very accurate to someone who doesn’t like the stuff. You definitely need an affinity (or at least a non-dislike) to last any more than a few minutes in it.
Good stuff. Almost expected there to be more, even, but it stands on its own as well.
11346321 It's a reference to the scene:
where Sweetie Belle says, 'dumb fabric'. Or was it 'stupid fabric'?
Zipp is kind of in the same situation, being attacked by fabric, and has a similar reaction.
Er, not sure if that first "I'm" was supposed to just be 'I,' but given the situation I think both kinda work…
Good stuff. Definitely see Zipp being opposed to full-body clothing (though there was a story here about aerodynamic sock choice that I thought was amusing).
Congrats on the feature!
Get that knife you were looking at earlier and start frantically running at Sunny. I think someone trying to murder her would get her "excited"
Something tells me that wording was very intentional.
11346546 I can't believe that grammatical mistake evaded me through so many re-reads. It's probably because it makes sense in a way that it wasn't jarring enough to erect my suspicion.
I haven't come across the sock story. Feel free to post it here if you stumble on it again.
Easy-going stories seem to be the magic bullet on this site. On the other claw, if you write a story about the meaning of life, you're sure to erect the interest of 0 readers.
11346576 I guess that would work too, but it would require Zipp to move a lot. With every step, she would be reminded that she's encased in an opposing rubber barrier. It would be torture for her, and her claustrophobia in the making would only erect to the surface more.
11346590 It's just an innocent little word.
11346826
I figured you meant just the 'I,' but like I said, both uses technically work in the situation, so I could understand it slipping past you.
On the other note, I hate posting links to other people's stories in an author's story's comment section without getting permission first, so with that given, I do believe it was this one (still don't want to embed— I personally think it's a bit tacky, but that's just me).
And yeah, Slice of Life stories seem to be on the rise lately. I'm personally a fan, so I don't mind in the slightest.
11346850 Either way, thanks to you it's fixed now.
Thanks for linking that story. I haven't come across it before, but it does seem to draw on some parallel ideas as my own. Will give it a read.
Personally, I like profound, mind-shattering brain-openers. Slice of life usually doesn't have much of those. Hopefully, I brought the best of both worlds with this one.
dumb fabric
11347231
Interesting choice of ship, looking forward to reading for the contest!
11348736 You're in the contest too, right?
I'm the world champ, you know? I bet you can't beat me, *squee, *squee, *squee
11348926
I'm running the contest 😂
11348927 Oh, I better play nice then.
I've seen the submitted stories. I'm going against some strong contenders. Your contest is everything a contest should be like. Great rules, great participation.
So I finally read it and it was well written, but it left a few questions that are obvious.
Like wtf is a level 2 alicorn.
How did she hold her pee when she was about to burst just to kiss?
What about getting the suit off?
These should have been addressed.
But I liked it, regardless.
11353223
The show did it and didn't address it. Suny only had a virtual horn and wings. But in the latest shorts, she's a real Alicorn.
And there's nopony to teach Suny about the ways of magic. Everypony is just trying to figure it out for themselves.
And I did kind of address it with:
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Who says she did?
The thing is, Zipp more or less just wanted to change the subject because Sunny wanted to talk about the kiss, so she made a scene to avoid it.
There are two options:
a) Either Zipp breaks all moral limits to make Sunny level 2 Alicorn again.
b) Zipp wears the furtight bodysuit forever.
Pick your poison.
Thanks for the review. I sometimes edit stories for a year or even more, but I had to finish this one in a month. I was a bit weary that the story might not be polished enough. I'm glad to hear you found it well written despite all that.
Mm.
11359774 Things escalated a bit, didn't they?
"¡You are too tight!" is what I tell my marefriend; to which she always responds, "¡You are too big!"
11368719 It's a good thing that it stretches.
11368769
To quote Teal'c and Tuvok, "Indeed.":
Almost sounds like a lewd dirty comedy, but Im still intrigued. That edited pictur with her in a WB uniform is seamless.
11406093 It does, doesn't it? Well, I went to great lengths to keep it Everyone rated.
I like Zipp's expression in the picture. It's not one of happiness.
Really good.
I wonder if sprout will pop up at all later
I could ask, what the buck is wrong with someone who puts an "E" rating on this story.
11460356 What's the problem? It's just a story about Zipp wearing clothes.
You wear clothes every day and I don't go to your profile calling you lewd because of that. In fact, I'd probably find you lewder if you weren't wearing any clothes.
With that, all E stories that feature nacked ponies should get at least an M rating before this story should get T rating.
I will admit that both Zipp and Sunny are nacked at the start of this story. But very soon Zipp wears clothes, making this story 50% less lewd.
And sure, Zipp has a special way with words, but they're just Zipp's over-exaggeration of the innocent situation.
Aw, you'll get the hang of this uniform way quicker than you think, Zipp. And soon enough, you're actually going to like it.
Good story, mate.
11477016 It's not like Zipp has a choice in the matter, anyway.
I'm glad you liked the story.