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Kelvin Shadewing


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The day I first found the portal gun, I didn't expect to discover an alien race with it. On accident. Nor did I expect to get stuck on their planet. But I'm here now, so I might as well make the most of it. Let's just hope I don't get myself killed.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 77 )

not bad not bad. pretty good:pinkiecrazy:

this one is definitely starting out better than the last one

did you just delete all the original chapters?

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I noticed that too, I guess the author is rewriting the story, well, more to read then!

Definitely nothing to scoff at. Keep going, 'cause this is a solid rewrite.

sorry but with how far you were on your original story i cant read this

I thought this was discontinued? not that i'm complaining.

Finally! a rewrite that's at least as good as the original!:pinkiehappy:

Oh. This is actually a rewrite. I thought it was just you making small changes with things you weren't completely satisfied with.

Interesting change in concept.:pinkiesmile:

So, why did you start over? I really liked the story....... But this is still good!

NEED!!! MOAR!!! NOOOOOAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

Kiki's Delivery Service? :unsuresweetie: I see what you did there...

2073882 There was a MLP charity auction going to a girl named Kiki who I think had cancer. At least, that's what I've figured out.

I am so glad you are writing on these again, dear Author.:pinkiehappy:

The city we were in was called Nagrabah. I don't get the pun on that one.

I do! :rainbowlaugh:

When I saw this I thought it was a weird premise, but elected to give it a try.

The first couple of chapters didnt really do it for me, but I was curious as to where you were going with it.

Now, you have a thumbs up and a favorite from me, I'm looking forward to further installments in the story :twilightsmile:

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo MOAR :flutterrage:

Bet the "wisdom" on the stone is just a classic Philosoraptorism.

Comment posted by Jack Kellar deleted Feb 6th, 2013

2081116 For a corny, stupid little joke?
I really hope you're not serious.

2081144 you have me interested at what kind of joke it was :trixieshiftright::derpyderp2:

2081116 is the last part a reference to Lara Croft :ajsmug::derpytongue2:

2088738 A philosoraptor macro about 9/11 happening in July. I can send it to you via PM, since someone apparently can't take a joke from an event that grew stale over a decade ago.
No need to block my ass, Midi, I'm leaving on my own.

2089655 say no more, I can see where the joke went from the reaction of the author. must have been pretty offensive, but somehow quite funny. like jokes about WWII "they there's safety in numbers... try telling that to 6 million Jews":derpytongue2:

2089655 Yes, losing someone I knew to a terrorist attack grew stale. You are a class A fucktard if you really think that's funny. I'm willing to forgive you if you just admit your joke was tasteless and uncalled for.

2090735 in case you didn't see it, I already did that down there almost a full two days ago.

2090735 Oh, and in case you haven't understood that from what I've implied, I don't have a freaking crystal ball to know when a fib will unfortunately sting harder than it should. And you could have made me feel like even more of a dick for blurting that out if you'd just been polite.
Now excuse me. I'm not gonna appreciate the stories written by a jackass that insults people over misunderstandings.

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Hey. I need to tell you that I'm sorry for my behaviour earlier. I'm not going to make excuses for what I did; just because I was already having a bad day, there was no reason for taking out my frustrations on you like that.

And I have no right to insult you, especially when my response was as bad, if not worse than, what you posted. I used the memory of a tragic event to guilt trip you, which did nothing for either of us and only showed disrespect for those lost that day.

I understand if you don't forgive me and still want to leave. I deserve no better. But please know that I am sincerely sorry for what I did. I could have just ignored the post and no one would have thought anything of it, but instead I made a scene, and only ended up embarrassing myself.

If anyone here is the class A fucktard, it's me. Again, I am very sorry.

2103533 *sigh* Everyone has their bad days, bro, and not everyone has the emotional fortitude to keep the pressure down. I'm one example of that myself, as you can infer from my responses. I can't blame you for popping like a cork either; I'd have likely done the same if the issue was touchy to me. :ajsleepy:
Keep in mind, feeling bad for what happened is normal, but it isn't going to help anyone. Trying to add a little humor (not at the expense of the victims, God bless their souls, but at a coincidence related to the incident itself - in this case, the date) is a way to overcome grief; laugh your frowns away. That's what Pinkie would do, as far as I can see. :pinkiesad2:
In any case, what do you say we put this sad stint behind us and move on? :pinkiesmile:

At least I didn't say "believe it."

What about "Dattebayo!"? :rainbowlaugh:

The unicorn chuckled dryly. "Oh, don't worry abouf me, Ash, I'll be quite alright." He turned sullen. "It's Daring I worry about. Every time she goes out on one of her excursions, I'm always afraid it'll be the last time I ever see her."

abouf should be about.

love this story keep it up

wait.... if Aperture is here then...... OH CELESTIA SO IS BLACK MESA

Wouldn't it be Black Hay-sa?
HAHAHAHAHA PONY PUNS LOL

BLACK MESA!!!!! That pleases meh. You shall be spared. :twilightsmile:

well, looks like gordon freemane might have to save equestria at some point in the future

For the good of all of us,
Except the ones who are dead.
But there's no sense crying over every mistake.
We'll just keep on trying, 'til we run out of CAKE.
We've got experiments to run, there is research to be done
On the ponies who are Still Alive.

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